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After that, they walked around randomly through the vendors along Dragon's Street. After trying out one of Dracunia's famous specialties, shaved ice made from meltwater, enjoying dragon buns that exploded with juices from a single bite, they went to watch dragon fights between ground dragons at a plaza.
 
After that, they walked around randomly through the vendors along Dragon's Street. After trying out one of Dracunia's famous specialties, shaved ice made from meltwater, enjoying dragon buns that exploded with juices from a single bite, they went to watch dragon fights between ground dragons at a plaza.
   
"This is really tense..."
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"This is really exciting..."
   
 
Watching dragon fights for the first time, Kamito could not help but praise in admiration.
 
Watching dragon fights for the first time, Kamito could not help but praise in admiration.
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"You keep ground dragons at home too huh..."
 
"You keep ground dragons at home too huh..."
   
Preparing all the food must be quite a chore... Kamito thought to himself.
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Preparing all the food must be quite a chore... Kamito though to himself.
   
 
In the plaza's vicinity were many craft stores opened for attracting sightseeing tourists. Kamito went to one of them, intending to get presents for Restia who was waiting at the castle, as well as Claire and the others.
 
In the plaza's vicinity were many craft stores opened for attracting sightseeing tourists. Kamito went to one of them, intending to get presents for Restia who was waiting at the castle, as well as Claire and the others.
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Leonora tugged Kamito's sleeve and pointed at the dusk sky.
 
Leonora tugged Kamito's sleeve and pointed at the dusk sky.
   
Kamito looked up to see a group of flying dragons in the air, transporting giant boxes with windows. The boxes were decorated luxuriously. At first glance, they looked like fancy carriages except without wheels.
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Kamito looked up to see a group of flying dragons in the air, transporting giant boxes with windows. The boxes were decorated luxuriously. At first glance, they looked like fancy carriages except without wheel.s
   
 
"What are those?"
 
"What are those?"
   
"Dragondolas<!--furigana is gondola while kanji says "dragon cage";dragon + gondola = dragondola would be a plausible portmanteau-->, a form of transportation used for aerial tours. It gives passengers an overlooking view of Dracunia's scenery. I recommend you try it once."
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"Dragondolas<!--furigana is gondola while kanji says "dragon cage";dragon + gondola = dragondola would be a plausible portmanteau-->, a form of transportation used for aerial tours. It gives passengers an overlooking view of Dracunia's scenery. I recommend you to try it once."
   
 
"Looks pretty fun, then let's have a go."
 
"Looks pretty fun, then let's have a go."
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Kamito commented.
 
Kamito commented.
   
"Yes, I selected the most luxurious royal room."
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"Yes, I selected the most luxurious royal suite."
   
 
"Are you sure this is okay? It looks very expensive..."
 
"Are you sure this is okay? It looks very expensive..."
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Seeing Leonora sit apprehensively on the bed, Kamito took a seat on the edge.
 
Seeing Leonora sit apprehensively on the bed, Kamito took a seat on the edge.
   
(Urgh, I can't shake the weird feeling from sitting side by side on a bed like this...)
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(Urgh, I can't shake the feeling that sitting side by side on a bed like this...)
   
 
After they sat down for a while... The room began to shake intensely.
 
After they sat down for a while... The room began to shake intensely.
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"Don't worry, Dragondolas are much safer than horse-drawn carriages."
 
"Don't worry, Dragondolas are much safer than horse-drawn carriages."
   
Just as Leonora said&mdash;
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Just as Leonora had said&mdash;
   
The shaking gradually lessened, turning into a comfortable rocking.
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The shaking gradually reduced, turning into a comfortable rocking.
   
 
Looking out the window from the bed's edge, he could get a full view of Dracunia's streets tinted with the color of the sunset.
 
Looking out the window from the bed's edge, he could get a full view of Dracunia's streets tinted with the color of the sunset.
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(...The Blade Dance. It feels so long ago now.)
 
(...The Blade Dance. It feels so long ago now.)
   
Meeting Claire and the others at the Academy, Fianna's transfer, the battle against Velsaria&mdash;Kamito could not help but reminisce about his days fighting alongside his comrades in Team Scarlet.
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Meeting Claire and the others at the Academy, Fianna's transfer, the battle against Velsaria&mdash;Kamito could not help but reminisce about this days fighting alongside his comrades in Team Scarlet.
   
 
Soon, the Dragondola reached the cloud layer and started to descend slowly. After the recent period of turbulent events, this was a rare moment of peace and relaxation.
 
Soon, the Dragondola reached the cloud layer and started to descend slowly. After the recent period of turbulent events, this was a rare moment of peace and relaxation.
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Through that military uniform, her soft bosom was pressing against him, making Kamito flustered.
 
Through that military uniform, her soft bosom was pressing against him, making Kamito flustered.
   
"Fufu, even if you surpass me in swordsmanship, I am still unbeatable in a pure contest of strength. After all, the princess maidens of the Lancaster family have Dragon Blood."
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"Fufu, even if you surpass me in swordsmanship, I am still unbeatable in a pure contest of strength. After all, the princess maidens of the Lancaster family have Dragon's Blood."
   
When she was using dragon attributes to enhance her body, even Kamito would be rendered helpless in such a situation. At the same time, the ceiling's lighting turned pink while the bed below also started rotating.
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When she was using dragon attributes to enhance her body, even Kamito would be rendered helpless in such a situation. At the same time, the ceiling's lighting turned pink while the the bed below also started rotating.
   
 
"W-What's going on!?"
 
"W-What's going on!?"
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"Give it up, Kamito. The dragons of Dracunia will do everything in their power to obtain what they want."
 
"Give it up, Kamito. The dragons of Dracunia will do everything in their power to obtain what they want."
   
"C-Calm down! You're thinking too much like a dragon!"
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"C-Calm down! Your ways of thinking is too dragon-like!"
   
 
Just as Kamito cried out like this&mdash;
 
Just as Kamito cried out like this&mdash;
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Kamito instantly realized a certain possibility.
 
Kamito instantly realized a certain possibility.
   
(...Is Restia calling for me!?)
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(...Is Restia calling me!?)
   
 
===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===
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"...No, it wasn't your fault, Nee-sama&mdash;"
 
"...No, it wasn't your fault, Nee-sama&mdash;"
   
"Back then, I lacked the power to stop this tragedy. Had I possessed greater power at the time, I could have eliminated the Elemental Lords to prevent this tragedy&mdash;"
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"Back then, I lacked the power to stop this tragedy. Had I possessed greater power at the time, I could have eliminated the Elemental Lords to prevent this tragedy&dmash;"
   
 
At that moment, a sword enveloped in crimson flames appeared in Rubia's hand.
 
At that moment, a sword enveloped in crimson flames appeared in Rubia's hand.

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