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Although it was no time to indulge in leisure, a final purification was necessary before they assaulted the enemy's main camp. Kamito carefully washed his body as he tried as much as possible to reach peak condition.
 
Although it was no time to indulge in leisure, a final purification was necessary before they assaulted the enemy's main camp. Kamito carefully washed his body as he tried as much as possible to reach peak condition.
   
The Calamity Queen—Rubia Elstein.
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The «Calamity Queen»—Rubia Elstein.
   
The other Ren Ashbell and Strongest Blade Dancer whose identity had been uncovered.
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The other Ren Ashbell and «Strongest Blade Dancer» whose identity had been uncovered.
   
 
(...Am I able to defeat her?)
 
(...Am I able to defeat her?)
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Kamito's only chance of victory lay in—
 
Kamito's only chance of victory lay in—
   
(—The Absolute Blade's secret technique, Last Strike.)
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(—The Absolute Blade's secret technique, «Last Strike».)
   
 
Kamito opened and closed his fingers several times, trying to confirm his feel for the sword.
 
Kamito opened and closed his fingers several times, trying to confirm his feel for the sword.
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However, to be honest, he was not certain if he had truly mastered that secret technique.
 
However, to be honest, he was not certain if he had truly mastered that secret technique.
   
The Last Strike was an ultimate countering technique using the sword. It could not be used unless Kamito was facing an enemy of the same level.
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The «Last Strike» was an ultimate sword reversal technique. Unless Kamito was facing an enemy of the same level, it could not be used.
   
 
(By the way, how strange...)
 
(By the way, how strange...)
   
Kamito frowned and looked up at the ceiling of the limestone cavern. Even though it was now known that the true identity of the other Strongest Blade Dancer, Ren Ashbell, was Rubia Elstein, there was something impossible to accept about it. Namely—
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Kamito frowned and looked up at the ceiling of the limestone cavern. Even though it was now know that the true identity of the other «Strongest Blade Dancer», Ren Ashbell, was Rubia Elstein, there was something impossible to accept about it. Namely—
   
 
—''She was far too strong'', this simple fact.
 
—''She was far too strong'', this simple fact.
   
Indeed, as a former Queen, the total amount of divine power accumulated in Rubia Elstein's body should far surpass most elementalists. Although an abundance of divine power would not result in a decisive difference in potency, it was undeniable that people with greater reserves of divine power were able to command more powerful spirits for longer durations.
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Indeed, as a former «Queen», the total amount of divine power accumulated in Rubia Elstein's body should far surpass most elementalists. Although an abundance of divine power would not result in a decisive difference in potency, it was undeniable that people with greater reserves of divine power were able to command more powerful spirits for longer durations.
   
However, princess maidens serving at the Divine Ritual Institute basically received no combat training at all.
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However, princess maidens serving at the «Divine Ritual Institute» basically received no combat training at all.
   
 
Hence, she was supposed to be completely unversed in swordsmanship, just like Fianna.
 
Hence, she was supposed to be completely unversed in swordsmanship, just like Fianna.
   
Rumors regarding the Calamity Queen as a master of the sword were completely unheard of.
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Rumors regarding the «Calamity Queen» as a master of the sword were completely unheard of.
   
The first thing that came to mind was the usage of a Cursed Armament Seal to strengthen the body, but even Cursed Armament Seals were unable to turn someone untrained in martial arts into a sword master.
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The first thing that came to mind was the usage of a «Cursed Armament Seal» to strengthen the body, but even «Cursed Armament Seals» were unable to turn someone untrained in martial arts into a sword master.
   
(...Even an Elemental Lord's miracle can't do that, right?)
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(...Even an «Elemental Lord»'s miracle can't do that, right?)
   
 
—Throb. Again, the acute headache returned.
 
—Throb. Again, the acute headache returned.
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''The voice very similar to hers'' resounded in his mind.
 
''The voice very similar to hers'' resounded in his mind.
   
—Very soon, you shall become the Demon King who brings ruin and destruction to the world.
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—Very soon, you shall become the «Demon King» who brings ruin and destruction to the world.
   
(...Shut, up... Already... Shut, up...!)
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(...Shut, up... Already... Shut, up...!"
   
 
Covering both ears, Kamito submerged his face in water.
 
Covering both ears, Kamito submerged his face in water.
   
(Shut up! Shut up, shut up shut up...!)
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(Shut u! Shut up, shut up shut up...!)
   
 
He yelled stubbornly in order to drown out the voice.
 
He yelled stubbornly in order to drown out the voice.
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...Not Rinslet or any of the girls, for they should be over with Iseria, performing purification at a place a short distance away.
 
...Not Rinslet or any of the girls, for they should be over with Iseria, performing purification at a place a short distance away.
   
Next, Kamito glanced at a shaded position in the rocks. The Demon Slayer and the Vorpal Sword were both in sword form, resting against the rock.
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Next, Kamito glanced at a shaded position in the rocks. The «Demon Slayer» and the «Vorpal Sword» were both in sword form, resting against the rock.
   
 
...The figure behind the steam did not say anything more.
 
...The figure behind the steam did not say anything more.
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Caught in his hand—''a tail seemed as if it were made of fire''.
 
Caught in his hand—''a tail seemed as if it were made of fire''.
   
(...W-Wait a minute? This tail, could it be...)
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"...W-Wait a minute? This tail, could it be...)
   
 
Kamito suddenly reacted and gazed intently at the cat-eared girl's scarlet eyes.
 
Kamito suddenly reacted and gazed intently at the cat-eared girl's scarlet eyes.
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Finally recovering from the initial shock—
 
Finally recovering from the initial shock—
   
"I am the Scarlet Valkyrie in service of the Elsteins—my true name is Ortlinde."
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"I am the «Scarlet Valkyrie» in service of the Elsteins—my true name is «Ortlinde»."
   
 
Transformed into a girl's form, Scarlet announced her name.
 
Transformed into a girl's form, Scarlet announced her name.
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In order for a contracted spirit to fully release its power, not only did the contractor need to be well-matched in power but the spirits had to be summoned by its true name—namely, a release of the true name.
 
In order for a contracted spirit to fully release its power, not only did the contractor need to be well-matched in power but the spirits had to be summoned by its true name—namely, a release of the true name.
   
When he first met Claire, Kamito felt a certain dissonance regarding the name Scarlet. No matter how he looked at it, the name seemed like an alias for the hell cat spirit.
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When he first met Claire, Kamito felt a certain dissonance regarding the name «Scarlet». No matter how he looked at it, the name seemed like an alias for the hell cat spirit.
   
 
Scarlet's true name had been lost throughout the generations of the Elstein family, but for some reason, Restia who was accompanying Claire knew the name.
 
Scarlet's true name had been lost throughout the generations of the Elstein family, but for some reason, Restia who was accompanying Claire knew the name.
   
Then having exhibited sufficient power in the current Blade Dance, Claire successfully released the true name. Obtaining her original power, Scarlet changed from her beast form as a high ranking spirit to recover her girl form as a spirit of the highest class—Basically something like that.
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Then having exhibited sufficient power in the current «Blade Dance», Claire successfully released the true name. Obtaining her original power, Scarlet changed from her beast form as a high ranking spirit to recover her girl form as a spirit of the highest class—Basically something like that.
   
 
Having lost her power during the battle against Rubia and returned to her hell cat form, Scarlet had apparently retrieved enough power to regain human form temporarily as a result of pouncing into the ancient burning flames.
 
Having lost her power during the battle against Rubia and returned to her hell cat form, Scarlet had apparently retrieved enough power to regain human form temporarily as a result of pouncing into the ancient burning flames.
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Blushing slightly, Scarlet began to blow bubbles in the water surface.
 
Blushing slightly, Scarlet began to blow bubbles in the water surface.
   
"S-Sorry... By the way, why are you calling me Master?"
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"S-Sorry... By the way, what are you calling me Master?"
   
 
Kamito posed a simple question.
 
Kamito posed a simple question.
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However, perhaps because Est has lost the majority of her memories, the contents of her dreams always involved things that happened to her after meeting Kamito.
 
However, perhaps because Est has lost the majority of her memories, the contents of her dreams always involved things that happened to her after meeting Kamito.
   
The only exception was during the time when Est disappeared, Kamito had witnessed the memories of her past contractor, the Sacred Queen—Areishia Idriss.
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The only exception was during the time when Est disappeared, Kamito had witnessed the memories of her past contractor, the «Sacred Queen»—Areishia Idriss.
   
 
"Uh... In her dreams, Master always becomes your slave."
 
"Uh... In her dreams, Master always becomes your slave."
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"When calling me, using Kamito is fine."
 
"When calling me, using Kamito is fine."
   
"...I understand. Well then, let's go with this, 'Kamito.' "
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"...I understand. Well then, let's go with this, 'Kamito.'"
   
 
Scarlet spoke with a serious expression.
 
Scarlet spoke with a serious expression.
   
...Despite such a dangerous-sounding nickname of the Scarlet Valkyrie, this cat girl was unexpectedly polite.
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...Despite such a dangerous-sounding nickname of the «Scarlet Valkyrie», this cat girl was unexpectedly polite.
   
 
"So does this mean you don't have any memories from your hell cat form?"
 
"So does this mean you don't have any memories from your hell cat form?"
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"...I see."
 
"...I see."
   
—In other words, it would be more appropriate to consider Scarlet the hell cat and this Ortlinde here as separate entities.
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—In other words, it would be more appropriate to consider «Scarlet» the hell cat and this «Ortlinde» here as separate entities.
   
 
"However, I do remember..."
 
"However, I do remember..."
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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===
   
Having finished the purification at the underground lake, Kamito and his entourage continued making their way towards the Lost Cathedral.
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Having finished the purification at the underground lake, Kamito and his entourage continued making their way towards the «Lost Cathedral».
   
 
Even though they were not able to perform a proper sacred purification, the divine power circulating in their bodies was replenished.
 
Even though they were not able to perform a proper sacred purification, the divine power circulating in their bodies was replenished.
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"Hmm, what do you mean?"
 
"Hmm, what do you mean?"
   
"—Very soon, we are nearing the Lost Cathedral."
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"—Very soon, we are nearing the «Lost Cathedral»."
   
 
Walking in front, Iseria spoke up slowly.
 
Walking in front, Iseria spoke up slowly.
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"Which means we have to do a frontal assault, huh?"
 
"Which means we have to do a frontal assault, huh?"
   
"However, I don't think Team Inferno has constructed a stronghold. If they prioritized the ritual for the Darkness Queen's coming, there should not be any leisure to build a large scale barrier."
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"However, I don't think «Team Inferno» has constructed a «stronghold». If they prioritized the ritual for the «Darkness Queen»'s coming, there should not be any leisure to build a large scale barrier."
   
 
"...Let's hope so."
 
"...Let's hope so."
   
Rubia Elstein was the former Queen once praised as the best. In the past, the isolation barriers she constructed would cover all the castles and residences in Ragna Ys.
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Rubia Elstein was the former «Queen» once praised as the best. In the past, the isolation barriers she constructed would cover all the castles and residences in «Ragna Ys».
   
 
But for Kamito, the true source of concern was himself.
 
But for Kamito, the true source of concern was himself.
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(If I hear that voice one more time, I'll—)
 
(If I hear that voice one more time, I'll—)
   
He would probably be consumed by the impulse to destroy, awakening as the Demon King who leads the world towards destruction.
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He would probably be consumed by the impulse to destroy, awakening as the «Demon King» who leads the world towards destruction.
   
 
"...mito... Kamito."
 
"...mito... Kamito."
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Kamito was rooted there for a moment—
 
Kamito was rooted there for a moment—
   
"...Est, you are the Demon Slayer, you know."
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"...Est, you are the «Demon Slayer», you know."
   
 
"...?"
 
"...?"
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Est inclined her head in puzzlement.
 
Est inclined her head in puzzlement.
   
"Supposing, if I were to become the world-destroying Demon King, when the time comes—"
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"Supposing, if I were to become the world-destroying «Demon King», when the time comes—"
   
"When the time comes, I will simply become the 'Demon's Sword.' "
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"When the time comes, I will simply become the «Demon's Sword»."
   
 
—Just as he was about to continue talking, Est resolutely refuted him.
 
—Just as he was about to continue talking, Est resolutely refuted him.
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"Leave it to me."
 
"Leave it to me."
   
Ellis swung Ray Hawk, instantly severing the root to reveal a door with mysterious designs carved on it.
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Ellis swung «Ray Hawk», instantly severing the root to reveal a door with mysterious designs carved on it.
   
"This is one of the six doors to the abandoned city's underground—the Door of Persisting Darkness."
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"This is one of the six doors to the «Abandoned City»'s underground—the door of «Persisting Darkness»."
   
 
Once Iseria chanted rarely heard spirit language, the carvings on the door glowed blue-white as the door opened with a low rumble.
 
Once Iseria chanted rarely heard spirit language, the carvings on the door glowed blue-white as the door opened with a low rumble.
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In the darkness, a staircase leading to the ground appeared.
 
In the darkness, a staircase leading to the ground appeared.
   
"I can only lead you this far."
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"I can only lead you to this place."
   
 
Iseria stopped at the door.
 
Iseria stopped at the door.
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"...What an incredible girl."
 
"...What an incredible girl."
   
The high level spirit who had lost her memory, who was sealed in the abandoned city, and who had reported the Water Elemental Lord's name as her own.
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The high level spirit who had lost her memory, who was sealed in the «Abandoned City», and who had reported the Water Elemental Lord's name as her own.
   
 
Full of mysteries that one had no idea how to begin solving, she was truly a strange spirit.
 
Full of mysteries that one had no idea how to begin solving, she was truly a strange spirit.
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"Yes!" "Right!" "Indeed!"
 
"Yes!" "Right!" "Indeed!"
   
Team Scarlet's young ladies nodded vigorously.
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«Team Scarlet»'s young ladies nodded vigorously.
   
 
"Your wish—is my command."
 
"Your wish—is my command."
   
Wielding in his hand Est who had transformed into the Demon Slayer, Kamito led the charge and rushed forward.
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Wielding in his hand Est who had transformed into the «Demon Slayer», Kamito led the charge and rushed forward.
   
   

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