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===Part 7===
 
===Part 7===
   
“This...is the Dungeon?”
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“This…is the Dungeon?”
   
As his body moved past the door, Lux could not help whispering as he witnessed the incredible interior.
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As his body moved past the door, Lux could not help whispering as his witnessed the incredible interior.
   
Although the Academy's lectures and pre-mission meeting described what he needed to know, it was still a view beyond his imagination.
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Although the Academy’s lectures and pre-mission meeting described what he needed to know, it was still a view beyond his imagination.
   
“What's up? Is this your first time entering a Ruin?”
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“What’s up? Is this your first time entering a Ruin?”
   
“...it's very spectacular.”
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“…its very spectacular.”
   
 
In response to Coral, Lux could not say any other words to describe his impression.
 
In response to Coral, Lux could not say any other words to describe his impression.
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However, those were his real feelings.
 
However, those were his real feelings.
   
In Lux's mind, the Dungeon was supposed to appear as caves.
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In Lux’s mind, the Dungeon was supposed to appear as caves.
   
 
With cold, dark, inorganic rocks channeling through them.
 
With cold, dark, inorganic rocks channeling through them.
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Rather than a cave, it was more like a courtyard with walls surrounding it on every side.
 
Rather than a cave, it was more like a courtyard with walls surrounding it on every side.
   
“Here in the middle is the exit to the outside world. There are also places like this far away from where we are with a lake and other scenery, isn't it interesting?”
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“Here in the middle is the exit to the outside world. There are also places like this far away from where we are with a lake and other scenery, isn’t it interesting?”
   
 
As Lux curiously looked around, Coral gave his explanation.
 
As Lux curiously looked around, Coral gave his explanation.
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As they approached, the other female students would stop to look in adungeonment.
 
As they approached, the other female students would stop to look in adungeonment.
   
“Oh, honor student-sama! Our task is to suppress Abyss here yeah? Don't treat it like a picnic.”
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“Oh, honor student-sama! Our task is to suppress Abyss here yeah? Don’t treat it like a picnic.”
   
 
“Greifer is still the same! Our mission should last just a few hours, yet you still get nervous. Or is it that you just want to finish quickly and get back to Princess Milmiette?”
 
“Greifer is still the same! Our mission should last just a few hours, yet you still get nervous. Or is it that you just want to finish quickly and get back to Princess Milmiette?”
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Lux looked at the two with a wry smile as a thought crossed his mind.
 
Lux looked at the two with a wry smile as a thought crossed his mind.
   
“So now... how many levels are we going to raid?”
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“So now…how many levels are we going to raid?”
   
“According to the records the exploration has only reached until level four. The area looks spacious, but it's actually quite complicated. After we pass three levels, the amount of powerful Abyss and harsh environment will increase...”
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“According to the records the exploration has only reached until level four. The area looks spacious, but it’s actually quite complicated. After we pass three levels, the amount of powerful Abyss and harsh environment will increase…”
   
 
“I see.”
 
“I see.”
   
Listening to Coral's answer, Lux breathed a sigh of relief.
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Listening to Coral’s answer, Lux breathed a sigh of relief.
   
It seemed that in this Ruin, the existence of Automaton that was called Gear Leader hadn't been confirmed.
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It seemed that in this Ruin, the existence of Automaton that was called Gear Leader hadn’t been confirmed.
   
 
Without that Hayes who was called as Lord, the possibility that something happened in Ruin must be low.
 
Without that Hayes who was called as Lord, the possibility that something happened in Ruin must be low.
   
“Shall we begin? Although there are only a few Abyss here, don't let your guard down and take them one by one!”
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“Shall we begin? Although there are only a few Abyss here, don’t let your guard down and take them one by one!”
   
Lux nodded to Coral's words, then they too began the Abyss extermination.
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Lux nodded to Coral’s words, then they too began the Abyss extermination.
   
 
Far in the darkness, a scream could be heard.
 
Far in the darkness, a scream could be heard.
   
“That sound, it's Hind huh.”
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“That sound, its Hind huh.”
   
 
“Even though this creature looks like a deer, it is very ferocious. Be very careful!”
 
“Even though this creature looks like a deer, it is very ferocious. Be very careful!”
   
Lux listened to Greifer and Coral's instructions as he drew his weapon.
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Lux listened to Greifer and Coral’s instructions as he drew his weapon.
   
 
The suppression mission began with this team that was formed for the first time.
 
The suppression mission began with this team that was formed for the first time.
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===Part 8===
 
===Part 8===

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