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“One to two hundred of our own troops revolted against Mephius. With a firm leash, they will surely become heroes that bring about victory for Mephius.”
 
“One to two hundred of our own troops revolted against Mephius. With a firm leash, they will surely become heroes that bring about victory for Mephius.”
   
“What do you think, Colyne?”
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“What do you think, Klein?”
   
 
The emperor asked his retainer, unable to hide his surprise at how his son managed to put a stop to the chain of disturbances.
 
The emperor asked his retainer, unable to hide his surprise at how his son managed to put a stop to the chain of disturbances.
   
It was the same for Colyne Isphan. However, he was a natural at reading his lord’s intentions, and this time as well, he replied in courtesy.
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It was the same for Klein Isphan. However, he was a natural at reading his lord’s intentions, and this time as well, he replied in courtesy.
   
 
“......The prince has ability. I believe it is best to leave things to him.”
 
“......The prince has ability. I believe it is best to leave things to him.”
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With that single conversation, emperor Guhl Mephius resolved his mind. As Gil’s reward, he would acknowledge the claim.
 
With that single conversation, emperor Guhl Mephius resolved his mind. As Gil’s reward, he would acknowledge the claim.
   
However, it was only this time that Guhl made a show of generosity as emperor. Since what happened with Zaat, the emperor began to act more and more self-righteous. As if he had forgotten Kaiser’s opposition towards the relocation of the Dragon Shrine, he now raised the issue of the establishment of the shrine, and in little to no time at all, began its construction. As the emperor’s advisors, it was decided the group of elders would dwell within the shrine, and the emperor, instead making use of Zaat’s rebellion, had strengthened his political powers.
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However, it was only this time that the Guhl made a show of generosity as emperor. Since what happened with Zaat, the emperor began to act more and more self-righteous. As if he had forgotten Kaiser’s opposition towards the relocation of the Dragon Shrine, he now raised the issue of the establishment of the shrine, and in little to no time at all, began its construction. As the emperor’s advisors, it was decided the group of elders would dwell within the shrine, and the emperor, instead making use of Zaat’s rebellion, had strengthened his political powers.
   
 
''That makes me the one who helped him accomplish that'', Orba thought.
 
''That makes me the one who helped him accomplish that'', Orba thought.

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