Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume2 Chapter 15

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“Please stop. Hearing the names of people we both knew is worse than speaking to myself.”
 
“Please stop. Hearing the names of people we both knew is worse than speaking to myself.”
   
As she spoke, Brunhild tried to give a slight smile.
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A she spoke, Brunhild tried to give a slight smile.
   
 
However, she could not keep the ends of her eyebrows from drooping and the expression held no strength.
 
However, she could not keep the ends of her eyebrows from drooping and the expression held no strength.
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She was not moving. After confirming that, Fafnir Custom fixed his vision devices on Hajji.
 
She was not moving. After confirming that, Fafnir Custom fixed his vision devices on Hajji.
   
Hajji still had his right hand at his mouth, but he finally raised it along with his left.
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Hajji still had his right hand at his mouth, but he finally raised both along with his left.
   
 
Fafnir Custom asked, “That girl you called a djinn has fallen. Why did you bring these children with you? And what do you know? We know nothing beyond the destruction of 1st-Gear. But you that call yourselves the Army…” Fafnir Custom looked back and forth between Hajji and the girl on the left. “You are an army made up of a few different Gears, aren’t you? From what I can tell, Hajji, you appear to be from 9th-Gear. And those two girls appear to either be from 2nd-Gear or Low-Gear.”
 
Fafnir Custom asked, “That girl you called a djinn has fallen. Why did you bring these children with you? And what do you know? We know nothing beyond the destruction of 1st-Gear. But you that call yourselves the Army…” Fafnir Custom looked back and forth between Hajji and the girl on the left. “You are an army made up of a few different Gears, aren’t you? From what I can tell, Hajji, you appear to be from 9th-Gear. And those two girls appear to either be from 2nd-Gear or Low-Gear.”

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