Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume1 Chapter 10

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She pulled what looked like two long metal staffs from the cooler.
 
She pulled what looked like two long metal staffs from the cooler.
   
The two objects appearing from below the canned drinks were a machine gun and its barrel.
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The two objects appearing from below the canned drinks was a machine gun and its barrel.
   
 
She attached the heavy barrel with one hand and loaded the ammunition belt. The first bullet was instantly brought into the chamber.
 
She attached the heavy barrel with one hand and loaded the ammunition belt. The first bullet was instantly brought into the chamber.
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“You really want to know?” said a smiling voice. “It’s because I know everything but understand nothing.” The voice then changed the subject. “Look, the fools are in trouble. Do whatever you can.”
 
“You really want to know?” said a smiling voice. “It’s because I know everything but understand nothing.” The voice then changed the subject. “Look, the fools are in trouble. Do whatever you can.”
   
Shinjou looked out toward the grassy area and realized what he meant.
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Shinjou looked out toward the grassy area and realized what she meant.
   
 
Sayama and Sf moved around amid the gunfire and their enemies were collapsing from the attacks.
 
Sayama and Sf moved around amid the gunfire and their enemies were collapsing from the attacks.

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