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Lancel City was situated at the mouth of the Schwein River, forming a harbor city with walls on three sides, and the fourth side facing the river. The Schwein River mouth was wide, and as the river flows into the western sea straits, ships on long voyages frequent this harbor.
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Lancel City was situated at the mouth of the Schweiz River, forming a harbor city with walls on three sides, and the fourth side facing the river. The Schweiz River mouth was wide, and as the river flows into the western sea straits, ships on long voyages frequent this harbor.
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Naga and company stood beside the harbor and watched the large ships enter and exit the harbor.
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Naga was the head of the traveling troupe, Raibach performed miscellaneous duties and escorts, and the dancers were Vita, Ais, Kay, and Lela. Linne and Linna were responsible for collecting intelligence from the streets, and will work separately from the rest.
   
Naga and company stood beside the harbor and watched the large ships enter and exit the harbor. Naga was the head of the traveling troupe, Raibaha performed miscellaneous duties along with escort and the dancers were Vita, Ais, Kay, and Lela. Linne and Linna were responsible for collecting intelligence from the streets, and will work separately from the rest.
 
 
Twelve of the group of fourteen were girls, giving it an air of splendor.
 
Twelve of the group of fourteen were girls, giving it an air of splendor.
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But to avoid attracting too much attention, the witches covered the clothes they were wearing or put on cloaks. The crews on the ships unloaded large amounts of cargo from the massive sail ships and emptied them out, and then loaded the cargo piled up at the harbor into the ships. The angry yells and shouts of the crew resonated in the vicinity. Cargo filled wagons bustled in the harbor.
 
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But to avoid attracting too much attention, the witches covered the clothes they were wearing or put on cloaks.
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The crews on the ships unloaded large amounts of cargo from the massive sail ships and emptied them out, and then loaded the cargo piled up at the harbor into the ships.
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The angry yells and shouts of the crew resonated in the vicinity.
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Cargo filled wagons bustled in the harbor.
   
 
The bell rang, notifying the arrival or departure of ships.
 
The bell rang, notifying the arrival or departure of ships.
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Seagulls congregated and leered at the fishes caught by the fishermen.
 
Seagulls congregated and leered at the fishes caught by the fishermen.
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The smell of the sea wafted in with the warm sea breeze. The bustling scene of the harbor stimulated Naga’s senses.
 
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The smell of the sea wafted in with the warm sea breeze.
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The bustling scene of the harbor stimulated Naga’s senses.
   
 
“I think I saw a scene like this somewhere before.”
 
“I think I saw a scene like this somewhere before.”
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“Oh, is that so.”
 
“Oh, is that so.”
   
Naga shrugged. He was wearing loose attire that seemed foreign in origin. They weren’t his clothes or those given to him by Harrigan and the others. They were clothes from the central world prepared just for this investigative trip. The witches around him didn’t wear their usual skin revealing clothes, and put on clothes from the central world too. Many of the witches even dyed their hair or applied coloring to their faces and skin to disguise themselves.
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Naga shrugged. He was wearing a loose attire that seemed foreign in origin. They weren’t his clothes or those given to him by Harrigan and the others. They were clothes from the central world prepared just for this investigative trip. The witches around him didn’t wear their usual skin revealing clothes, and put on clothes from the central world too. Many of the witches even dyed their hair or applied coloring to their faces and skin to disguise themselves.
   
Not only did Raibaha dye his hair, he even cut it short and put on a hooded cloak and shades. His outfit made it certain that he won’t be recognized even if he met someone who knew him. Raibaha wore a sword as his setting was the escort of the group. Naga changed his hairstyle too, and swapped his katana for a sword that was commonly seen in this world. The guards saw his face when he took the fort, so he had to take additional care. It was very unlikely they would run into soldiers who defended Fort Ein in Lancel City, but this would likely happen if they enter the Cassandra Kingdom, so this was also, in a way, practice.
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Not only did Raibach dye his hair, he even cut it short and put on a hooded cloak and shades. His outfit made it certain that he won’t be recognized even if he met someone who knew him. Raibach wore a sword as his setting was the escort of the group.
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Naga changed his hairstyle too, and swapped his katana for a sword that was commonly seen in this world. The guards saw his face when he took the fort, so he had to take additional care. It was very unlikely they would run into soldiers who defended Fort Ein in Lancel City, but this would likely happen if they enter the Kasandora Kingdom, so this was also, in a way, practice.
   
 
“Alright, we will head for the antique shops and sell the weapons and jewelry. We will then buy two carriages, tents and things like musical instruments. I’m counting on you, Rai… No, Hoodins.”
 
“Alright, we will head for the antique shops and sell the weapons and jewelry. We will then buy two carriages, tents and things like musical instruments. I’m counting on you, Rai… No, Hoodins.”
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“Yes, head Najunkray, I will try my best to get a good price.”
 
“Yes, head Najunkray, I will try my best to get a good price.”
   
The two addressed each other by their aliases, Raibaha did so as he might run into people who had seen him before, while Naga’s name had the connotation of ‘Dragon King’, which will attract suspicious eyes…. No, in this case, it will attract suspicious ears, so it was decided that they will call each other by aliases as they investigated while undercover. As no humans know the names of the witches, they used their original names.
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The two addressed each other by their alias, Raibach did so as he might run into people who had seen him before, while Naga’s name had the connotation of ‘Dragon King’, which will attract suspicious eyes…. No, in this case, it will attract suspicious ears, so it was decided that they will call each other by aliases as they investigated while undercover.
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As no humans know the names of the witches, they used their original names.
   
 
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The weapons and jewelry sold for an unexpectedly high price, it wouldn’t be an exaggeration to say this was a sizeable bit of wealth. Raibaha was skilled in negotiations, but it was mostly the merit of the highly valuable merchandise. Vita looked at the bag of gold coins — not silver, but gold coins, signifying the high selling price— and looked very impressed.
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The weapons and jewelries sold for an unexpectedly high price, it wouldn’t be an exaggeration to say this was a sizeable piece of wealth. Raibach was skilled in negotiations, but it was mostly the merit of the highly valuable merchandise.
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Vita looked at the bag of gold coins — not silver, but gold coins, signifying the high selling price— and looked very impressed.
   
“Oh, so these pieces of junk can sell for such a good price. I guess we should inspect the things in our warehouse again, right, Dora?”
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“Oh, so these pieces of junk can sell for such a good price. I guess we should inspect the things in our warehouse again, right, Dona?”
   
 
“Yes, dear mother.”
 
“Yes, dear mother.”
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“No, do it anyway. Even if we don’t sell them, there’s no harm in knowing the value of the things we have. After we go back, do a spring cleaning of our warehouse immediately, and pick out the valuable items.”
 
“No, do it anyway. Even if we don’t sell them, there’s no harm in knowing the value of the things we have. After we go back, do a spring cleaning of our warehouse immediately, and pick out the valuable items.”
   
Me?— Dora pointed to herself, trying to confirm if Vita meant her.
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Me?— Dona pointed to herself, trying to confirm if Vita meant her.
   
“You and Eli will take care of it.”
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“You and Elly will take care of it.”
   
 
“Wahhh…”
 
“Wahhh…”
   
Once she thought about the pile of items in the warehouse, with no telling if there was anything valuable in there, Dora couldn’t help but smile stiffly.
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Once she thought about the pile of items in the warehouse, with no telling if there was anything valuable in there, Dona couldn’t help but smile stiffly.
   
 
“Just thinking about inspecting them one at a time gives me a headache.”
 
“Just thinking about inspecting them one at a time gives me a headache.”
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“If that is the case, I will get it done.”
 
“If that is the case, I will get it done.”
   
Lily scowled her face at Dora, who sighed in relief.
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Lily scowled her face at Dona, who sighed in relief.
   
 
“Alright, we’ll go shopping later. Before that, we have to find a place to spend the night.”
 
“Alright, we’ll go shopping later. Before that, we have to find a place to spend the night.”
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Because their wares sold better than expected, Naga and company found a higher class hotel and decided to stay there. As they were a large group, they asked for a big room and two small rooms, then retired to their accommodations. Naga and Raibaha, and Vita, Lily, and Dora moved into the two small rooms, respectively, and the Haindora witches brought their luggage into the big room. After a short rest in the rooms, Naga said that he wanted to buy the necessary goods.
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Because their wares sold better than expected, Naga and company found a higher class hotel and decided to stay there. As they were a large group, they asked for a big room and two small rooms, then retired to their accommodations. Naga and Raibach, and Vita, Lily, and Dona moved into the two small rooms, respectively, and the Heindler witches brought their luggage into the big room.
   
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After a short rest in the rooms, Naga said that he wanted to buy the necessary goods.
“Raibaha and I will go, and in case anything happens Lela will follow.”
 
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“Raibach and I will go, and in case anything happens, Lela will follow.”
   
 
If the talisman falls off or the effect fades, Naga won’t be able to talk to people. To avoid that, Naga requested Lela to accompany him.
 
If the talisman falls off or the effect fades, Naga won’t be able to talk to people. To avoid that, Naga requested Lela to accompany him.
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“Of course we want to go.”
 
“Of course we want to go.”
   
Vita replied, Dora and Lily nodded repeatedly.
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Vita replied, Dona and Lily nodded repeatedly.
   
 
“There isn’t anything interesting about this trip though.”
 
“There isn’t anything interesting about this trip though.”
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“Do we need someone to guard the place?”
 
“Do we need someone to guard the place?”
   
Naga looked troubled. Ais smiled and said,
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Naga looked troubled. Ais smiled and said:
   
 
“There isn’t any important luggage here, just bringing our valuables and the money we have gotten would be enough.”
 
“There isn’t any important luggage here, just bringing our valuables and the money we have gotten would be enough.”
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“To be safe, I will prepare the guards.”
 
“To be safe, I will prepare the guards.”
   
“Hmm? Arurukan wants to stay behind?”
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“Hmm? Harlequin wants to stay behind?”
   
When Naga asked, Arurukan muttered, “Tsk tsk tsk.” and shook her right index finger.
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When Naga asked, Harlequin muttered: “Tsk tsk tsk.” And shook her right index finger.
   
 
“That’s not what I meant, I will ask the wandering dogs in the area to look after the place.”
 
“That’s not what I meant, I will ask the wandering dogs in the area to look after the place.”
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“Alright, I will leave this to you.”
 
“Alright, I will leave this to you.”
   
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By the way, the magic to communicate with animals is amazing. No, she is not the only amazing one.
By the way, the magic to communicate with animals is amazing. No, she is not the only amazing one. If he had to say it, all the witches possess powerful spells, Naga found it hard to believe that they kept on losing to the human armies. But they don’t know about tactics and strategy, so that isn’t strange. When they left the inn, Arurukan whistled in a frequency inaudible to humans and summoned a few strays. She spoke something to the strays, which Naga couldn’t understand. He asked Ais and Lela, who didn’t know either, so the other witches couldn’t decipher the conversation Arurukan had with the animals.
 
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If he had to say it, all the witches possess powerful spells, Naga found it hard to believe that they kept on losing to the human armies.
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But they don’t know about tactics and strategy, so that isn’t strange.
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When they left the inn, Harlequin whistled in a frequency inaudible to humans and summoned a few strays.
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She spoke something to the strays, which Naga couldn’t understand. He asked Ais and Lela, who didn’t know either, so the other witches couldn’t decipher the conversation Harlequin had with the animals.
   
 
“Alright, that will do, we just need to buy some meat from the market to feed them later.”
 
“Alright, that will do, we just need to buy some meat from the market to feed them later.”
   
After Arurukan finished, Vita raised her right hand high before Naga could reply,
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After Harlequin finished, Vita raised her right hand up high before Naga could reply:
   
 
“Good, then let’s go!”
 
“Good, then let’s go!”
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“Ah~ she has not visited a human city for a very long time, so bear with her over enthusiasm.”
 
“Ah~ she has not visited a human city for a very long time, so bear with her over enthusiasm.”
   
Dora whispered in explanation to Naga, who smiled wryly and waved his right hand a little, gesturing to her not to mind. The group led by Naga and Raibaha returned to the district filled with shops once again.
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Dona whispered in explanation to Naga, who smiled wryly and waved his right hand a little, gesturing to her not to mind. The group led by Naga and Raibach returned to the district filled with shops once again.
   
 
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==Translator's Notes and References==
 
==Translator's Notes and References==
 
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