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=== Part 2 ===
 
=== Part 2 ===
   
Most of the witches garrisoned here had gathered in the biggest room inside the fort. Naturally, Naga and Raibaha were also present.
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Most of the witches garrisoned here had gathered in the biggest room inside the fort. Naturally, Naga and Raibach were also present.
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The witches around Raibaha were:
 
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The witches around Raibach were:
   
 
Harrigan.
 
Harrigan.
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Kay.
 
Kay.
   
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Nonoel.
Nonoeru.
 
   
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Harlequin.
Arurukan.
 
   
 
Eleonortha.
 
Eleonortha.
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Mimone.
 
Mimone.
   
And of course, Yuuki was absent. The sisters, Linne and Linna, were on guard duty, thus not in the room. After receiving Harrigan’s pigeon message, Lela immediately rushed to the First Fort on horseback behind Mimone.
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And of course, Yuuki was absent. The sisters, Linne and Linna, were on guard duty, thus not in the room.
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After receiving Harrigan’s pigeon message, Lela immediately rushed to the First Fort on horseback behind Mimone.
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Harrigan sighed softly after hearing Kay’s report.
 
Harrigan sighed softly after hearing Kay’s report.
   
 
“That’s why I didn’t want Yuuki to know about this.”
 
“That’s why I didn’t want Yuuki to know about this.”
   
When Lela received the pigeon message, Yuuki was just setting off from the Third Fort. In the confusion, she found out about Kay capturing a human soldier, so she rushed here on her air board alone.
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When Lela received the pigeon message, Yuuki was just setting off from the Third Fort. In the confusion, she found out about Kay capturing a human soldier, so she rushed here on her hoverboard alone.
   
 
“Forget it… No, we are not done yet. Getting detailed intelligence from that man takes priority… right, Naga?”
 
“Forget it… No, we are not done yet. Getting detailed intelligence from that man takes priority… right, Naga?”
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“What is that?”
 
“What is that?”
   
Harrigan prompted him to continue. Naga shifted his stool and faced Raibaha.
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Harrigan prompted him to continue. Naga shifted his stool and faced Raibach.
   
“Raibaha, you seemed surprised when Yuuki appeared just now. There are plenty of witches here that are unknown to you, but why did Yuuki surprise you so much?”
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“Raibach, you seemed surprised when Yuuki appeared just now. There are plenty of witches here that are unknown to you, but why did Yuuki surprised you so much?”
   
 
“Ah… Huh~~ you have sharp eyes.”
 
“Ah… Huh~~ you have sharp eyes.”
   
Raibaha’s vision wavered and he stretched out his right hand to scratch his head. He then recounted his tale slowly.
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Raibach’s vision wavered and he stretched out his right hand to scratch his head. He then recounted his tale slowly.
   
 
“I had a daughter.”
 
“I had a daughter.”
   
Raibaha said something unrelated, making Naga and the other witches to look at him puzzledly.
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Raibach said something unrelated, making Naga and the other witches to look at him puzzledly.
   
“If she were still alive, she would probably be about the age of you two.” Raibaha said as he pointed at Nonoeru and Kay. “It doesn’t sound convincing for a parent to say this, but she really was a cute kid.”
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“If she were still alive, she would probably be about the age of you two.” Raibach said as he pointed at Nonoel and Kay. “It doesn’t sound convincing for a parent to say this, but she really was a cute kid.”
   
 
“……”
 
“……”
   
They were actually not interested in Raibaha’s personal affairs. Naga and Harrigan looked at each other, hesitating about whether to stop him or not.
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They were actually not interested in Raibach’s personal affairs. Naga and Harrigan looked at each other, hesitating about whether to stop him or not.
   
“When I was out on a campaign once, barbarians invaded the city I lived in, ravaged the streets and killed the citizens.”
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“When I was out on a campaign once, the barbarians invaded at the city I lived in, ravaged the streets and killed the citizens.”
   
 
Naga and Harrigan were shocked and turned their heads away.
 
Naga and Harrigan were shocked and turned their heads away.
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“I can empathize with you, but right now we are…”
 
“I can empathize with you, but right now we are…”
   
Raibaha continued in a calm tone as if he didn’t hear what Harrigan said:
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Raibach continued in a calm tone as if he didn’t hear what Harrigan said:
   
 
“That witch just now, the one who was shouting about wanting to kill me, is Yuuki, right?”
 
“That witch just now, the one who was shouting about wanting to kill me, is Yuuki, right?”
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“Yuuki is hard to get along with, but she has her circumstances. If she made you feel uncomfortable, let me apologize…”
 
“Yuuki is hard to get along with, but she has her circumstances. If she made you feel uncomfortable, let me apologize…”
   
“No, that’s not it.” Raibaha raised his head, his expression strange and complicated. “That girl looks really similar to my dead daughter.”
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“No, that’s not it.” Raibach raised his head, his expression strange and complicated. “That girl looks really similar to my dead daughter.”
   
 
He looked up to the roof, his eyes far away.
 
He looked up to the roof, his eyes far away.
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“My dead daughter is actually alive and appeared before me. That thought occurred to me for an instant, surprising me.”
 
“My dead daughter is actually alive and appeared before me. That thought occurred to me for an instant, surprising me.”
   
Raibaha said sadly, but Harrigan’s reply was cold.
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Raibach said sadly, but Harrigan’s reply was cold.
   
 
“My condolences for your loss, but she is a witch, not your daughter.”
 
“My condolences for your loss, but she is a witch, not your daughter.”
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“That’s true, I know that very well too, but… They really look identical, it’s like my daughter who survived somewhere appeared, so I…”
 
“That’s true, I know that very well too, but… They really look identical, it’s like my daughter who survived somewhere appeared, so I…”
   
Raibaha said passionately, but stopped midway.
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Raibach said passionately, but stopped midway.
   
 
“…I …I” He turned his gaze back from the ceiling, tears falling from his eyes.
 
“…I …I” He turned his gaze back from the ceiling, tears falling from his eyes.
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Harrigan wasn’t sure how to respond and kept quiet. Naga couldn’t say anything and watched him without a word. It was the same for the other witches. The entire room fell silent.
 
Harrigan wasn’t sure how to respond and kept quiet. Naga couldn’t say anything and watched him without a word. It was the same for the other witches. The entire room fell silent.
   
“Dragon King, you mentioned about creating a world where humans and witches coexist in peace. If it succeeds, will the fighting between humans cease?”
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“Dragon King, you mentioned about creating a world where humans and witches cohabit in peace. If it succeeds, will the fighting between humans cease?”
   
Naga said confidently with a gentle smile on his face, “What a silly question.”
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Naga said confidently with a gentle smile on his face: “What a silly question.”
   
 
“If Witches and humans can be at peace, so can humans and humans.”
 
“If Witches and humans can be at peace, so can humans and humans.”
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“Yes, her name’s Elena. Ahh, Elena.”
 
“Yes, her name’s Elena. Ahh, Elena.”
   
Raibaha buried his face in his hands.
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Raibach buried his face in his hands.
   
 
“She must have been so scared, and suffered so much and… been hoping I would come to save them. But… I…”
 
“She must have been so scared, and suffered so much and… been hoping I would come to save them. But… I…”
   
Raibaha curled up and sniffling sounds escaped from his lips. Naga, Harrigan, and the other witches did not say anything to console him, and his cries filled the entire room. A short time later, Raibaha put down his hands. He turned to Naga with tears on his face.
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Raibach curled up and sniffling sounds escaped from his lips. Naga, Harrigan, and the other witches did not say anything to console him, and his cries filled the entire room. A short time later, Raibach put down his hands. He turned to Naga with tears on his face.
   
 
“Hey, Dragon King. Can you really create a world where Humans and Witches can live in harmony? A place where humans and humans won’t fight with each other?”
 
“Hey, Dragon King. Can you really create a world where Humans and Witches can live in harmony? A place where humans and humans won’t fight with each other?”
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(Can’t make this promise lightly, huh? That means he views this very seriously. Maybe this man can really create a world like that.)
 
(Can’t make this promise lightly, huh? That means he views this very seriously. Maybe this man can really create a world like that.)
   
Raibaha didn’t have or want a dream. Maybe it’s because his memories of his family made him sad, or maybe he was compelled by the hope that doing this will lessen his self reproach. Raibaha wiped away the tears on his face.
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Raibach didn’t have or want a dream. Maybe it’s because his memories of his family made him sad, or maybe he was compelled by the hope that doing this will lessen his self reproach.
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Raibach wiped away the tears on his face.
   
 
“If I tell you the details of the fort, there won’t be any sacrifices?”
 
“If I tell you the details of the fort, there won’t be any sacrifices?”
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“In that case… I will tell you.”
 
“In that case… I will tell you.”
   
Raibaha provided them with the required intel regarding the fort. But after the witches heard his tragic past, none of them showed any signs of glee.
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Raibach provided them with the required intel regarding the fort. But after the witches heard his tragic past, none of them showed any signs of glee.
   
 
=== Part 3 ===
 
=== Part 3 ===

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