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=== Part 2 ===
 
=== Part 2 ===
   
Both banks of the river, where Naga and the rest had made a dam, turned into a rocky area. It was convenient for hiding one’s presence, and enemy soldiers would most likely not reach this far. Even if they were to do so, it would be easy to spot them as Nonoeru and Kay would camp there and watch over the river.
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Both banks of the river, where Naga and the rest had made a dam, turned into a rocky area. It was convenient for hiding one’s presence, and enemy soldiers would most likely not reach this far. Even if they were to do so, it would be easy to spot them as Nonoel and Kay would camp there and watch over the river.
   
“Ikushina, hasn’t you horse-riding skill improved quite significantly?”
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“Ixine, hasn’t you horse-riding skill improved quite significantly?”
   
 
“I did it! I was praised by Naga-san!”
 
“I did it! I was praised by Naga-san!”
   
Sitting on her horse, Ikushina clenched her right hand in victory.
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Sitting on her horse, Ixine clenched her right hand in victory.
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Ikushina, who was fired up, had on a leather-made and slender tube skirt similar to those found among equestrian tribes. On her feet, she wore a pair of shin high boots. Her outfit was unlike those commonly used by the witches, but nevertheless such an appearance was relatively fitting to Ikushina’s tall stature.
 
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Ixine, who was fired up, had on a leather-made and slender tube skirt similar to those found among equestrian tribes. On her feet, she wore a pair of shin high boots. Her outfit was unlike those commonly used by the witches, but nevertheless such an appearance was relatively fitting to Ixine’s tall stature.
   
 
“Well then, I’ll be heading back. Take good care of yourself while standing guard. Especially you, Kay. Don’t make any rash decisions, got it?”
 
“Well then, I’ll be heading back. Take good care of yourself while standing guard. Especially you, Kay. Don’t make any rash decisions, got it?”
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“True, true. It’s important, important.”
 
“True, true. It’s important, important.”
   
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Being in high spirits, Kay dashed down toward the dry river bank. After that, Ixine and Nonoel followed.
Being in high spirits, Kay dashed down toward the dry river bank. After that, Ikushina and Nonoeru followed. Naga, too, sped his horse to a nearby rock using the reins and ran after the three witches. As soon as he got down to the river bed with rocks scattered around, the three of the were already doing warm-up exercises. Since Nonoeru wore thin clothes on the assumption that her garments would get soaked, there was no particular need for her to change or take them off. Unlike her, Ikushina wore the tube skirt for horse-riding, so she had to take her clothes off in order to be able to swim. Her top as well was covered by a coat, which also needed to be taken off. Once she took off her top and bottom, only a small breast wrap and a loincloth were left on her body. However, despite that risqué appearance of hers, Ikushina still moved her body with composure. Tattoo-like, complex patterns that appeared on her whole body caught Naga’s attention. And then, if one was to describe Kay,
 
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Naga, too, sped his horse to a nearby rock using the reins and ran after the three witches.
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As soon as he got down to the river bed with rocks scattered around, the three of the were already doing warm-up exercises.
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Since Nonoel wore thin clothes on the assumption that her garments would get soaked, there was no particular need for her to change or take them off.
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Unlike her, Ixine wore the tube skirt for horse-riding, so she had to take her clothes off in order to be able to swim. Her top as well was covered by a coat, which also needed to be taken off.
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Once she took off her top and bottom, only a small breast wrap and a loincloth were left on her body. However, despite that risqué appearance of hers, Ixine still moved her body with composure. Tattoo-like, complex patterns that appeared on her whole body caught Naga’s attention.
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And then, if one was to describe Kay,
 
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[[File:Naga03 Illus-03.jpg|200px|thumbnail|right]]
 
She was doing gymnastics while being totally naked, with no loincloth or breast cover.
 
She was doing gymnastics while being totally naked, with no loincloth or breast cover.
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“Wai, Kay, you’re way too bold!”
 
“Wai, Kay, you’re way too bold!”
   
Rather, it was Ikushina and Nonoeru who became red-faced.
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Rather, it was Ixine and Nonoel who became red-faced.
Both of them moved in front of Kay and stood with their arms spread as if trying to hinder Naga’s gaze. Finally, understanding it was no good by their reaction, Naga shifted his gaze away. Kay finished putting on her loincloth and chest cover, turned around and asked them both.
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Both of them moved in front of Kay and stood with their arms spread as if trying to hinder Naga’s gaze.
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Finally, understanding it was no good by their reaction, Naga shifted his gaze away.
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Kay finished putting on her loincloth and chest cover, turned around and asked them both.
   
 
“Hm? What are you two doing?”
 
“Hm? What are you two doing?”
   
Ikushina and Nonoeru collapsed to their knees.
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Ixine and Nonoel collapsed to their knees.
   
 
“Even though we were protecting you from Naga-san’s eyes.”
 
“Even though we were protecting you from Naga-san’s eyes.”
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“Is that so? Thanks.”
 
“Is that so? Thanks.”
   
“Kay, you’re too defenseless…”
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“Kay, you’re too defenseless./…”
   
At Nonoeru pointing that out, Naga too, couldn’t help but nod.
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At Nonoel pointing out, Naga too, couldn’t help but to nod.
   
 
“Right. Shouldn’t you have some shame as well?”
 
“Right. Shouldn’t you have some shame as well?”
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“Indeed, you’re one easy-going fellow.”
 
“Indeed, you’re one easy-going fellow.”
   
Naga was astonished; Ikushina and Nonoeru started to laugh.
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Naga was astonished; Ixine and Nonoel started to laugh.
   
“Kay is that sort of girl.”
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“Kay is that sort of a girl.”
   
 
“Isn’t she? Despite Kay-chan not minding other people’s sight like this, she also has good qualities.”
 
“Isn’t she? Despite Kay-chan not minding other people’s sight like this, she also has good qualities.”
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“Eh? I don’t feel like I’m being praised.”
 
“Eh? I don’t feel like I’m being praised.”
   
As Kay spoke up with a slightly hysterical voice, Ikushina waved her hands in denial.
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As Kay spoke up with a slightly hysterical voice, Ixine waved her hands in denial.
   
 
“No, we weren’t particularly praising you.”
 
“No, we weren’t particularly praising you.”
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“I know, right?”
 
“I know, right?”
   
“We are relying on you, Nonoeru.”
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“We are relying on you, Nonoel.”
   
 
“Yesss, I’ll do my best.”
 
“Yesss, I’ll do my best.”
   
“Kay and Ikushina too, do your best, okay?”
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“Kay and Ixine too, do your best, okay?”
   
 
“Leave it to us.”
 
“Leave it to us.”
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“You can count on me.”
 
“You can count on me.”
   
“If anything happens, Ikushina will run back on her horse.”
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“If anything happens, Ixine will run back on her horse.”
   
 
“Understood.”
 
“Understood.”
   
Like this, Nonoeru, Kay and Ikushina took up the duty of watching for movements from the Cassandra Kingdom’s army near the Schwein River.
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Like this, Nonoel, Kay, and Ixine took up the duty of watching for movements from the Kasandora Kingdom’s army near the Schweiz River.
   
 
=== Part 3 ===
 
=== Part 3 ===

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