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Guriko was thinking calmly as she parted with the train.
 
Guriko was thinking calmly as she parted with the train.
   
Guriko wandered around the town for a long time after she decided to trade with <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>, trying to gather five Lesser Fragments or one Greater Fragment. Guriko had the ability to sense monsters, Apple holders, and Mushi, even though she did not know the reason behind it.
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Guriko wandered around the town for a long time after she decided to trade with <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>, trying to satisfy the condition of turning in five Lesser Fragments or one Greater Fragment to the other. Guriko had the ability to sense monsters, Apple holders, and Mushi, even though she did not know the reason behind it.
   
 
The people she had finally discovered after a lengthy search was that group.
 
The people she had finally discovered after a lengthy search was that group.
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“But they seemed to be – the Snake? And Sterilization Disinfection?”
 
“But they seemed to be – the Snake? And Sterilization Disinfection?”
   
This group was a conglomeration of the people who fought to the death with her in the past – this made Guriko feel a nagging discomfort. ''That guy was the Snake. Although its appearance was changed, I remember its smell.''
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This combination was a conglomeration of those existences that fought to the death with her in the past – that made Guriko feel a nagging discomfort. That guy was the Snake. Although its appearance was changed, I remember its smell.
   
 
And there was Sterilization Disinfection.
 
And there was Sterilization Disinfection.

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