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It is not often that this 17-year old boy lets something interrupt him when eating.
 
It is not often that this 17-year old boy lets something interrupt him when eating.
   
Moreover, this was a celebratory meal for successfully completing a quest to steal 3 Wyvern Eggs from a wyvern nest in the Jungle. The group had just gotten back to gathering hall in Minegarde, a city that acted as a base of operations for hunters, located in the southern region of the Western Schrade Kingdom.
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Moreover, this is a celebratory meal for successfully completing a quest to steal 3 Wyvern Eggs from a wyvern nest in the Jungle. The group has just gotten back to gathering hall in Minegarde, a city that acts as a base of operations for hunters, located in the southern region of the Western Schrade Kingdom.
   
 
What made the boy stop his hand was the shocking statement that was brought up.
 
What made the boy stop his hand was the shocking statement that was brought up.
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Tobacco smoke filled the gathering hall’s interior, where hunters who have just completed their quests gather to eat, drink, and be merry. Naturally, this means the place is quite loud.
 
Tobacco smoke filled the gathering hall’s interior, where hunters who have just completed their quests gather to eat, drink, and be merry. Naturally, this means the place is quite loud.
   
Sitting next to the boy was a girl- Elmeria Franport, who narrowed her eyes as she pinched Zeeg’s ear to tell him that he was being noisy.
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Sitting next to the boy is a girl- Elmeria Franport, who narrows her eyes as she pinched Zeeg’s ear to tell him that he’s being noisy.
   
 
Her lips moved in closer, startling Zeeg. However-
 
Her lips moved in closer, startling Zeeg. However-
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She yelled right into his ear, causing Zeeg to let out a short scream.
 
She yelled right into his ear, causing Zeeg to let out a short scream.
   
The boy's knife was dropped from hiss hand and slipped under the table, but he was currently unable to look for it. On top of the ringing in his ear, he was also having quite a headache.
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The knife was dropped from the boy’s hand and slipped under the table, but he is currently unable to look for it. On top of the ringing in his ear, he is also having quite a headache.
   
 
Elmeria’s shout might as well rival the Diablos’s roar.
 
Elmeria’s shout might as well rival the Diablos’s roar.
   
Waiting for his ear to stop ringing, Zeeg attempted to wipe away his tears, but let out another short scream instead. That was because he had forgotten that his arm was equipped with the Kut-Ku Vambraces.
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Waiting for his ear to stop ringing, Zeeg attempted to wipe away his tears, but let out another short scream instead. That was because he has forgotten that his arm was equipped with the Kut-Ku Vambraces.
   
The vambraces created from Yian Kut-Ku materials had many sharp points protruding from them. And now, one of those spikes had pricked his cheek.
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The vambraces created from Yian Kut-Ku materials has many sharp points protruding from them. And right now, one of those spikes has pricked his cheek.
   
 
That should be as painful as a Vespoid’s sting.
 
That should be as painful as a Vespoid’s sting.
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Elmeria said just that, then shifted her attention back to her meal.
 
Elmeria said just that, then shifted her attention back to her meal.
   
In front of the girl, who is a year younger than Zeeg, was a plate of food a rank higher that what the boy was having.
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In front of the girl, who is a year younger than Zeeg, is a plate of food that is a rank higher that what the boy is having.
   
What she ordered for the evening was King Squid and Queen Shrimp Riverfood Paella.
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This evening, what she ordered is King Squid and Queen Shrimp Riverfood Paella.
   
The rice, turned yellow from being thoroughly cooked in a deep iron pan, sent out an appetizing aroma as it was scooped up with a spoon, with Zeeg looking on in slight envy.
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The rice, turned yellow from being thoroughly cooked in a deep iron pan, sent out an appetizing smell as it was scooped up with a spoon, with Zeeg looking on in slight envy.
   
In addition to food menus that anyone could order like steaks from herbivore monsters such as Aptonoths or Bullfangos, there were special menus that could only be ordered by hunters with the appropriate rank.
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In addition to food menus that anyone can order like steaks from herbivore monsters such as Aptonoths or Bullfangos, there are special menus that can only be ordered by hunters with the appropriate rank.
   
They were normally for orders that were delivered to the hunters’ guest houses, but if one prefers, they could also order in the gathering hall to eat on the same table as their comrades.
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They are normally for orders that are delivered to the hunters’ guest houses, but if one prefers, they can also order in the gathering hall to eat on the same table as their comrades.
   
The main ingredients in Elmeria’s meal, King Squids and Queen Shrimps, could only be ordered by skilled hunters with the rank Weapon Master or above, which were the ones with access to Queen Guest House rooms.
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The main ingredients in Elmeria’s meal, King Squids and Queen Shrimps, can only be ordered by skilled hunters with the rank Weapon Master or above, which are the ones with access to Queen Guest House rooms.
   
Zeeg, who was staying in the lower ranked Bishop room, did not have the right to order it no matter how much he wanted to.
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Zeeg, who is staying in the lower ranked Bishop room, doesn’t have the right to order it no matter how much he wanted to.
   
Hunters were designated ranks according to their skill level and exploits, with their ranks affecting the types of hunting requests they could accept. This process was strictly regulated by an organization- the Guild.
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Hunters are designated ranks according to their skill level and exploits, with their ranks affecting the types of hunting requests they can accept. This process is strictly regulated by an organization- the Guild.
   
Regardless of east or west, those who hunt monsters for a living in the Kingdom of Schrade were called Hunters. At a glance, one would think that this occupation had a great deal of freedom, but hunters who register at the guild had to accept a long list of regulations.
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Regardless of east or west, those who hunt monsters for a living in the Kingdom of Schrade are called Hunters. At a glance, one would think that this occupation has a great deal of freedom, but hunters who register at the guild has to accept a long list of restrictions.
   
They included the type of rooms they could rent, food they could order, and the requests they could accept.
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They include the type of rooms they can rent, food they can order, and the requests they can accept.
   
The disparity definitely was a cause of jealousy, but jealousy could also turn into motivation.
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The disparity definitely is a cause of jealousy, but jealousy can also turn into motivation.
   
Low rank hunters would look enviously at those with higher ranks living in wonderful guest houses, indulging in luxurious cuisine, and arming themselves with magnificent equipment. They would put all their effort into hunting, thinking to themselves that one day they would reach that point as well.
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Low rank hunters would look enviously at those with higher ranks living in wonderful guest houses, indulging in luxurious cuisine, and arming themselves with magnificent equipment. They would put all their effort into hunting, thinking to themselves that one day they will reach that point as well.
   
It was the same for Zeeg one year ago, when he had just arrived at this city.
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One year ago, when he has just arrived at this city, Zeeg was also like that.
   
When he was introduced to his Pawn room, which was not so different from a pig’s coop (and actually had a shirt-wearing pig living in it), his breath was taken away by how much the room stank and the bitterness in his mind.
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When he was introduced to his Pawn room, which is not so different from a pig’s coop (and actually had a shirt-wearing pig living in it), his breath was taken away by how much the room stinks and the bitterness in his mind.
   
That was because back at the village, he had been praised as the fastest Yian Kut-Ku hunter.
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That was because back at the village, he was praised as the fastest Yian Kut-Ku hunter.
   
 
It was a brief moment of greatness, before he was almost immediately reminded that in this world, there will always be someone better.
 
It was a brief moment of greatness, before he was almost immediately reminded that in this world, there will always be someone better.
   
Thanks to a recommendation letter from the Village Chief, Zeeg had gotten the permission to participate in a quest to subjugate the monster known as one of the strongest wyverns, the male fire wyvern Rathalos.
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Thanks to a recommendation letter from the Village Chief, Zeeg was permitted to participate in a quest to subjugate the monster known as one of the strongest wyverns, the male fire wyvern Rathalos.
   
At first, he had thought to himself that he would be the one to defeat it, but that thought immediately flew off his head when the Rathalos appeared before his eyes.
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At first, he thought to himself that he would be the one to defeat it, but that thought immediately flew off his head when the Rathalos appeared before his eyes.
   
A body several times larger than the Yian Kut-Ku, intimidating roars, deadly fireball attacks- the monster’s overwhelming power blew away all of the boy’s thoughts of hunting it.
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A body several times larger than the Yian Kut-Ku, intimidating roars, deadly fireball attacks- the monster’s overwhelming power blew away all of the boy’s thoughts to hunt it.
   
However, the hunting party that he went along with were unfazed and fought it head-on.
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However, the hunting party that he went along with were unfazed and fought it head on.
   
 
Breaking its scales with explosions from Large Barrel Bombs and blows from a powerful hammer, piercing its flesh with a sharp lance, and destroying its eye with deadly bowgun bullets.
 
Breaking its scales with explosions from Large Barrel Bombs and blows from a powerful hammer, piercing its flesh with a sharp lance, and destroying its eye with deadly bowgun bullets.
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Even though Zeeg helped at the end, all he did was place the last Barrel Bomb next to the Rathalos that had fallen into a Pitfall Trap. The process could be considered child’s play.
 
Even though Zeeg helped at the end, all he did was place the last Barrel Bomb next to the Rathalos that had fallen into a Pitfall Trap. The process could be considered child’s play.
   
One of the high-ranked hunters that he went with was now sitting next to him, eating her paella. Elmeria, a hammer user, one year younger.
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One of the high-ranked hunters that he went with is now sitting next to him, eating her paella. She is Elmeria, a hammer user who is one year younger than the boy.
   
While her body may look delicate at a glance, she was protected by strong equipment. It was the Rathalos armor set, created mainly from the fire wyvern’s scales and shells, though the girl did not wear any body armor. That is because her role in the party is to deliver powerful singular blows in a hit-and-run style.
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While her body may look delicate at a glance, she is protected by strong equipment. It is the Rathalos armor set, created mainly from the fire wyvern’s scales and shells, though the girl does not wear any body armor. That is because her role in the party is to deliver powerful singular blows in a hit-and-run style.
   
 
Hunting in groups is significantly different compared to going solo, and designating roles among party members is important.
 
Hunting in groups is significantly different compared to going solo, and designating roles among party members is important.
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(“Did I make a clumsy mistake or something...?”)
 
(“Did I make a clumsy mistake or something...?”)
   
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Gravios, the lead-colored Gravios Tasset and Gravios Greaves. They are quite good at absorbing impact from movement and attacks.
Zeeg stared at Elmeria's face, who is holding a knife in one hand and eating rice with her spoon in another, and thought back to the latest hunt.
 
 
There shouldn’t be any big problems.
 
 
He didn’t break any eggs while transporting, and didn’t fight against monsters if not necessary. While he wanted to break off at least one of the wyvern’s claw, he chose not to because it’s just a personal matter.
 
 
He definitely carried out his task without fail.
 
 
“Hey-”
 
 
While the boy was reaching out to Elmeria’s shoulder to stop her from eating and have her explain the situation clearly...
 
 
“......What do you think you are doing to the young mistress?”
 
 
A deep voice sounded from the other side of the table, causing Zeeg to stop his hand. The tone of that statement showed a great deal of irritation. Could it be that he thought the boy was intending to hit the girl?
 
 
If you do anything, I will break all of the bones in your body- That was what the large man, Gannon Denon, seemed to imply in his voice.
 
 
“I wasn’t going to do anything!”
 
 
Zeeg put his hand away in a panic. Glancing to his side, he could see Elmeria letting out an arrogant snort. Maybe he just imagined it, but it felt like the girl was insulting him for lacking a backbone.
 
 
(“Like I can do anything against him.”)
 
 
With nowhere to move his hand to, Zeeg alternated between clenching and releasing his fist while painting a grumpy expression on his face.
 
 
Gannon really is that strong.
 
 
For hunters, it is said that one’s equipment is what represents the wearer’s character. In Gannon’s case, his whole body is covered in solid armor.
 
 
What he is wearing now is the full armor set created from parts of the herbivore wyvern Diablos, the Diablo set. The pieces include a helmet, a plate mail, and a pair of vambraces. Out of those, the most distinctive part is the body armor. Gigantic horns extended from the shoulder pads, giving an impression on an actual Diablos.
 
 
Since the set doesn’t include armor for the waist and legs, he equips the Hi-Metal Tasset and Hi-Metal Greaves, armor pieces made from rare metals. Up until recently, that is. Right now, they have been replaced with armor created from shells of the volcano-dwelling armor wyvern Gravios, the lead-colored Gravios Tasset and Gravios Greaves. They are quite good at absorbing impact from movement and attacks.
 
   
 
Gannon is a lance user, and his primary role is to act as decoy.
 
Gannon is a lance user, and his primary role is to act as decoy.
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Anyhow, when Zeeg was still working for the village and thought himself already an adult, he would act disrespectfully towards the Village Chief.
 
Anyhow, when Zeeg was still working for the village and thought himself already an adult, he would act disrespectfully towards the Village Chief.
   
Now that he thought about it, it was so embarrassing that his face might as well ignite into flames. At one point, he even went as far as having a lengthy debate with the Hero of Kokoto about the true meaning of being a hunter, completely unaware of the other person’s status.
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Now that he thought about it, it was so embarrassing that his face might as well ignite into flames. At one point, he even went as far as having a lengthy debate with the Hero of Kokoto about what it truly means to be a hunter, completely unaware of who the other person’s status.
   
 
“What? Don’t tell me you’re scared?”
 
“What? Don’t tell me you’re scared?”
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Compared to when he just came to this city, Zeeg’s skills have improved considerably.
 
Compared to when he just came to this city, Zeeg’s skills have improved considerably.
   
Even if it won’t be easy, right now he was capable of defeating a Rathalos by himself. But that was also due to his mind being completely at ease, knowing that his comrades would jump in if anything were to go wrong.
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Even if it won’t be easy, right now he’s capable of defeating a Rathalos by himself. But that was also because his mind is completely at ease when he knows that his comrades would jump in if anything were to go wrong.
   
His actions were still full of unnecessary movements, and his hot-headed personality has yet to be fixed. With that in mind, it felt difficult for him to go meet the Village Chief right now.
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His actions are still full of unnecessary movements, and his hot-headed personality hasn’t been fixed yet. With that in mind, it feels difficult for him to go meet the Village Chief right now.
   
 
“You’ll be fine.”
 
“You’ll be fine.”
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“Hehehe... Well, it’s so nice to be young.”
 
“Hehehe... Well, it’s so nice to be young.”
   
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“Nonsense.”
“What nonsense.”
 
   
 
As if to dismiss Fradio’s statement, Gannon spoke up then chugged his beer.
 
As if to dismiss Fradio’s statement, Gannon spoke up then chugged his beer.
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Zeeg spoke up while waving a bone with no meat in his hand.
 
Zeeg spoke up while waving a bone with no meat in his hand.
   
“What’ll you be doing in your time off?”
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“What’re you doing in your time off?”
   
 
“That’s... I’m going to visit my lover.”
 
“That’s... I’m going to visit my lover.”
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Zeeg hunched his shoulders.
 
Zeeg hunched his shoulders.
   
For Fradio, spending quality time with the Gypceros meant fighting it in a long-winded hunt.
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For Fradio, spending quality time with the Gypceros is to fight it in a long-winded hunt.
   
Zeeg realized that even if it’s a battle to the death that could last many hours or even days, every second of it would be Fradio’s most blissful moment.
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Zeeg realized that even if it’s a battle to the death that could last many hours or even days, every second of it is Fradio’s most blissful moment.
   
 
(“Then it shouldn’t take that long.”)
 
(“Then it shouldn’t take that long.”)
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“We’ll meet up again in this gathering hall one month from today, alright?”
 
“We’ll meet up again in this gathering hall one month from today, alright?”
   
The date designated by her for the reunion was unexpectedly close. Even though it didn’t show on his face, Zeeg felt like a heavy weight has been lifted off his chest.
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The date designated by her for the reunion is unexpectedly close. Even though it doesn’t show on his face, Zeeg felt like a heavy weight has been lifted off his chest.
   
 
He thought about how he should spend his vacation month, but was surprised that he couldn’t think of anything to do.
 
He thought about how he should spend his vacation month, but was surprised that he couldn’t think of anything to do.
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The village has changed way too little.
 
The village has changed way too little.
   
Every villager is sure to remember his shamelessly arrogant attitude.
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Every villager is sure to remember shamelessly arrogant attitude.
   
 
Carried away by his victory against the Yian Kut-Ku to the point that he held a celebration, at that time Zeeg believed that he has already become a full-fledged adult. With those memories popping up, he was so embarrassed that he wanted to roll on the floor and scream.
 
Carried away by his victory against the Yian Kut-Ku to the point that he held a celebration, at that time Zeeg believed that he has already become a full-fledged adult. With those memories popping up, he was so embarrassed that he wanted to roll on the floor and scream.
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The Village Chief spoke up, and just like that the maid’s skirt fluttered as she turned around towards the counter, then passed the order over to the kitchen.
 
The Village Chief spoke up, and just like that the maid’s skirt fluttered as she turned around towards the counter, then passed the order over to the kitchen.
   
“Vivi would have been a lot more popular if she were a little more polite.”
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“Vivi would have been a lot more popular if she were to a little more polite.”
   
The old man laughed as he whispered to Zeeg.
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The old man laughed as he whispered that to Zeeg.
   
 
“That won’t be necessary.”
 
“That won’t be necessary.”
   
The maid lady- apparently named Vivi- seemed to have heard it even in the distance, and so the Village Chief let out another laugh.
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The maid lady- who seems to be named Vivi- seemed to have heard it even with that distance, and so the Village Chief let out another laugh.
   
 
“You’ve got sharp ears.”
 
“You’ve got sharp ears.”
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While Zeeg was watching those hunters mind their own businesses, Vivi approached and rudely placed beer mugs and a plate of food on the table.
 
While Zeeg was watching those hunters mind their own businesses, Vivi approached and rudely placed beer mugs and a plate of food on the table.
   
Black beer, which filled the mugs to the brim, spilled onto the table. Vivi seemed to have noticed but did not seem to care, as she immediately headed back to the counter.
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Black beer, which filled the mugs to the brim, spilled onto the table. Vivi seemed to have noticed but didn’t seem to care, as she immediately headed back to the counter.
   
 
Words of complaint welled up in Zeeg’s throat, but the boy ultimately gulped them down.
 
Words of complaint welled up in Zeeg’s throat, but the boy ultimately gulped them down.
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Vivi was looking at the gathering hall’s entrance.
 
Vivi was looking at the gathering hall’s entrance.
   
Just when Zeeg thought there was noting strange- a man entered the gathering hall in a panic and collapsed on the floor. There were no injuries, but sand was all over his body, and his face was completely dry. He seemed to be a merchant.
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Just when Zeeg thought there was noting strange- a man entered the gathering hall in a panic and collapsed on the floor. There were no injuries, but sand is all over his body, and his face is completely dry. He seems to be a merchant.
   
 
“Someone, get him water.”
 
“Someone, get him water.”
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The Village Chief said that, and a hunter, who was sitting next to the merchant, gave their drink to the man.
 
The Village Chief said that, and a hunter, who was sitting next to the merchant, gave their drink to the man.
   
The man drank it with extreme thirst, the looked around the gathering hall panickingly. His line of sight stopped at the Village Chief, and then he shouted with his dry voice.
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The man drank it with extreme thirst, the looked around the gathering hall panickingly. His line of sight stopped at the Village Chief, and then shouted with his dry voice.
   
 
“Chief! We- We got hit! It’s that thing at the desert- The one with one horn!”
 
“Chief! We- We got hit! It’s that thing at the desert- The one with one horn!”

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