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In truth, it wasn't the right time for it, but.
 
In truth, it wasn't the right time for it, but.
   
The way the juzu sparkled in the chapel was really pretty, and Noriko was mesmerized by it for a little while.
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The way the juzu sparkled in the chapel was really pretty and Noriko was mesmerized by it for a little while.
   
 
It may have been impudent, but didn't it fit in nicely?
 
It may have been impudent, but didn't it fit in nicely?
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Noriko used her gaze to control Shimako-san, who looked like she was about to jump out, adopted an imposing stance and responded, "It's not mine."
 
Noriko used her gaze to control Shimako-san, who looked like she was about to jump out, adopted an imposing stance and responded, "It's not mine."
   
It had been left in her care by Shimako-san, so it wasn't a lie. Of course she had no intention of mentioning who the real owner was.
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It had been left in her care by Shimako-san so it wasn't a lie. Of course she had no intention of mentioning who the real owner was.
   
 
"Just how did you come to the conclusion that it was mine, Touko-san?"
 
"Just how did you come to the conclusion that it was mine, Touko-san?"
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(Even kindergarteners should know not to steal someone else's things.)
 
(Even kindergarteners should know not to steal someone else's things.)
   
"What do you say, Noriko-san. Is this your property, as Touko-san claims?"
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"What do you say, Noriko-san. Is this your property, like Touko-san claims?"
   
 
This time it was Rosa Chinensis that questioned her.
 
This time it was Rosa Chinensis that questioned her.
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"If it doesn't belong to you, then it's none of your concern, right?"
 
"If it doesn't belong to you, then it's none of your concern, right?"
   
Rosa Foetida caught it, and started juggling the juzu. So, asking to have it returned would be the same as admitting it was hers, then.
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Rosa Foetida caught it, and started juggling the juzu. So asking to have it returned would be the same as admitting it was hers then.
   
 
She hadn't expected the Spanish Inquisition.
 
She hadn't expected the Spanish Inquisition.

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