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Leaving the mountain hut we headed for the summit of Mt Fuji.
 
Leaving the mountain hut we headed for the summit of Mt Fuji.
   
Whenever I was about to doze off, the old woman beside me would start snoring, so I didn't get a wink of sleep. Yoshino, on the other hand, looked like she had plenty of sleep and woke up full of energy. Skipping around in the darkness.
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Whenever I was about to doze off, the old woman beside me would start snoring so I didn't get a wink of sleep. Yoshino, on the other hand, looked like she had plenty of sleep and woke up full of energy. Skipping around in the darkness.
   
   
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The tour guide told us there was a postbox at the summit. If I'd known about that beforehand, I would have written postcards to my friends in the Yamayurikai and my graduated onee-sama. Such a pity.
 
The tour guide told us there was a postbox at the summit. If I'd known about that beforehand, I would have written postcards to my friends in the Yamayurikai and my graduated onee-sama. Such a pity.
   
I'd heard that coming down the mountain was harder than going up, and that proved to be true.
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I'd heard that coming down the mountain was harder than going up and that proved to be true.
   
 
Even Yoshino, who'd been so energetic, stopped talking as much and the pace was noticeably down.
 
Even Yoshino, who'd been so energetic, stopped talking as much and the pace was noticeably down.
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Straight after the descent, we soaked in an onsen at the base of the mountain.
 
Straight after the descent, we soaked in an onsen at the base of the mountain.
   
It wasn't a problem for Yoshino, since she rode a horse down the mountain, but I wanted to look away when I took my shoes off. Naturally, my feet didn't get to soak for as long as Yoshino's either.
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It wasn't a problem for Yoshino since she rode a horse down the mountain, but I wanted to look away when I took my shoes off. Naturally, my feet didn't get to soak for as long as Yoshino's either.
   
 
It was unfair of Yoshino to ride a horse, after all.
 
It was unfair of Yoshino to ride a horse, after all.
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I told our friends in the Yamayurikai about Yoshino riding a horse down the mountain when we were at Sachiko's holiday house, and she retaliated violently.
 
I told our friends in the Yamayurikai about Yoshino riding a horse down the mountain when we were at Sachiko's holiday house, and she retaliated violently.
   
All I did was tell the truth, and she got angry.
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All I did was tell the truth and she got angry.
   
 
If she didn't want me to say anything, she shouldn't have got on the horse.
 
If she didn't want me to say anything, she shouldn't have got on the horse.
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" – So basically, from reading these diary entries, the conclusion I reached was that Rei-chan wanted to ride on a horse too."
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" – So basically, from reading these diary entries the conclusion I reached was that Rei-chan wanted to ride on a horse too."
   
 
Yoshino said.
 
Yoshino said.
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"So what? Assuming what you say is true, Yoshino, why couldn't I just go on a ride around the local park with you?"
 
"So what? Assuming what you say is true, Yoshino, why couldn't I just go on a ride around the local park with you?"
   
"Because you wanted to ride a real horse, and it's too far to somewhere like a farm. I initially considered something like a merry-go-round too, but as Sachiko-sama said, I think the amusement park would be too crowded in summer."
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"Because you wanted to ride a real horse, and it's too far to somewhere like a farm. I initially considered something like a merry-go-round too, but like Sachiko-sama said, I think the amusement park would be too crowded in summer."
   
 
"But even so, I don't understand why I have to ride this thing."
 
"But even so, I don't understand why I have to ride this thing."

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