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Because the morning temperature had dropped a lot, a Spring mist had appeared outside.
 
Because the morning temperature had dropped a lot, a Spring mist had appeared outside.
   
As if it was cutting apart the haze, the Magic Light Train released a blue light and was moving on the street.
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As if it was cutting apart the haze, the <Magic Light Train> released a blue light and was moving on the street.
   
This train was the product of high level Magic and Alchemy. The material used for the train’s frame was the newly generated metal Mithril, made by Alchemy, and it had succeeded in substantially reducing the weight.
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This train was the product of high level Magic and Alchemy. The material used for the train’s frame was the newly generated metal <Mithril>, made by Alchemy, and it had succeeded in substantially reducing the weight.
   
And by using the driver’s Thought Magic, to act as a support for the performance and operation, even if it was a complex urban route, it was still feasible to run it with a speed no less than on the Shinkansen.<ref>Shinkansen is a network of high-speed railway lines in Japan.</ref>
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And by using the driver’s <Thought Magic>, to act as a support for the performance and operation, even if it was a complex urban route, it was still feasible to run it with a speed no less than on the Shinkansen.<ref>Shinkansen is a network of high-speed railway lines in Japan.</ref>
   
While its speed could be accelerated to 250 KMPH in a short period of time, it could also utilize the blessings of Thought Magic to reduce the weight of the train and swiftly reduce the speed as it approached the station. It would not make any noise as it stopped.
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While its speed could be accelerated to 250 KMPH in a short period of time, it could also utilize the blessings of <Thought Magic> to reduce the weight of the train and swiftly reduce the speed as it approached the station. It would not make any noise as it stopped.
   
However, the production of Mithril was extremely difficult, so it was still a very valuable product. This kind of train operation was only an experimental project that was limited to within Tokyo.
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However, the production of <Mithril> was extremely difficult, so it was still a very valuable product. This kind of train operation was only an experimental project that was limited to within Tokyo.
   
—— The Magic Light Train had arrived at Knight’s Academy Station.
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—— The <Magic Light Train> had arrived at <Knight’s Academy Station>.
   
 
Kazuki and Kanae both came down from the train and onto the station platform.
 
Kazuki and Kanae both came down from the train and onto the station platform.
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Because they had left home when there was still an ample amount of time left, the figures of other freshmen were extremely limited and it was very quiet. The shopping street near the station was also the same. Aside from the convenience store, the other shops’ rolling shutter doors had not been pulled up yet.
 
Because they had left home when there was still an ample amount of time left, the figures of other freshmen were extremely limited and it was very quiet. The shopping street near the station was also the same. Aside from the convenience store, the other shops’ rolling shutter doors had not been pulled up yet.
   
“Nii-sama is really planning on entering the Magic Division and not the Sword Division?”
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“Nii-sama is really planning on entering the <Magic Division> and not the <Sword Division>?”
   
 
During the way to the academy from the station, Kanae asked unhappily
 
During the way to the academy from the station, Kanae asked unhappily
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“…By now, there is nothing to say about it. This isn’t something I should hesitate about on the day of the entrance ceremony.” Kazuki replied.
 
“…By now, there is nothing to say about it. This isn’t something I should hesitate about on the day of the entrance ceremony.” Kazuki replied.
   
Since humans have discovered Magic, this brand-new power, it has already been 15 years.
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Since humans have discovered <Magic>, this brand-new power, it has already been 15 years.
   
 
The cause of it was due to Alchemy.
 
The cause of it was due to Alchemy.
   
Due to the Rosicrucian Group that sought human evolution, the Golden Dawn led by MacGregor Mathers, and Ahnenerbe Nazi Germany’s research institution; these secret organizations, that had inherited alchemy through lines of succession, finally produced a massive result 15 years ago.
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Due to the <Rosicrucian Group> that sought human evolution, the <Golden Dawn> led by MacGregor Mathers, and <Ahnenerbe> Nazi Germany’s research institution; these secret organizations, that had inherited alchemy through lines of succession, finally produced a massive result 15 years ago.
   
That was the fruit of their research, a great red fruit, the Philosopher’s Stone.
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That was the fruit of their research, a great red fruit, the <Philosopher’s Stone>.
   
It was produced by a mysterious Alchemist. A man-made, magical stone with an unknown creation method.
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It was produced by a mysterious <Alchemist>. A man-made, magical stone with an unknown creation method.
   
 
By embedding this ruby-like, red-colored stone into the human’s brain, the Magic Power of humans would awaken.
 
By embedding this ruby-like, red-colored stone into the human’s brain, the Magic Power of humans would awaken.
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Although it is embedded, it is not directly placed into the brain through surgery. Just by placing this incredible stone on the forehead, the part that touches the skin would slowly be assimilated and gradually enter the body until it reached the brain.
 
Although it is embedded, it is not directly placed into the brain through surgery. Just by placing this incredible stone on the forehead, the part that touches the skin would slowly be assimilated and gradually enter the body until it reached the brain.
   
Due to the appearance of the Philosopher’s Stone, the world’s order had completely changed.
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Due to the appearance of the <Philosopher’s Stone>, the world’s order had completely changed.
   
 
Magic could not be explained through scientific theories.
 
Magic could not be explained through scientific theories.
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For example, when a Magic user uses Magic to cover his entire body, this layer of Magic would “Ignore” and repel all physical phenomena. This 'Defending' Magic could only be destroyed by 'Attacking' Magic or objects holding Magic.
 
For example, when a Magic user uses Magic to cover his entire body, this layer of Magic would “Ignore” and repel all physical phenomena. This 'Defending' Magic could only be destroyed by 'Attacking' Magic or objects holding Magic.
   
Thus, the era had become The Era of Magic and Swords.
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Thus, the era had become <The Era of Magic and Swords>.
   
Police and self-defense forces had transformed into Knights composed of Swordsmen and Magic Users.
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Police and self-defense forces had transformed into <Knights> composed of Swordsmen and Magic Users.
   
And Japan’s Knight training academy was the National Knights Academy, Caryatid.
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And Japan’s <Knight> training academy was the <National Knights Academy, Caryatid>.
   
 
——Which is also the school that Kazuki is about to enter to study.
 
——Which is also the school that Kazuki is about to enter to study.
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Kazuki and Kanae were divided into directions of two different careers. Kanae still could not accept this result.
 
Kazuki and Kanae were divided into directions of two different careers. Kanae still could not accept this result.
   
“What kind of purpose did that fellow, known as Diva, have to give a person like me, this kind of thing?”
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“What kind of purpose did that fellow, known as Diva, have to give a person, like me, this kind of thing?”
   
 
Kazuki whispered quietly and raised his left hand that had the Enigma imprinted on it.
 
Kazuki whispered quietly and raised his left hand that had the Enigma imprinted on it.
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The Divas were inhabitants of an alternate world that were brought forth through Summoning Magic.
 
The Divas were inhabitants of an alternate world that were brought forth through Summoning Magic.
   
Through the vast and deep, psychological sea inside a person’s heart —— Deep down inside, there was a door that lead to another world.
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Through the vast and deep, psychological sea inside a person’s heart —— Deep, down inside, there was a door that lead to another world.
   
Until the very end, the scientific community did not completely understand a human’s 'heart' and 'spirit'. It was through this "Door of Heart" that the body contained something that came from an alternative world.
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Until the very end, the scientific community did not completely understand a human’s 'heart' and 'spirit'. It was through this <Door of Heart> that the body contained something that came from an alternative world.
   
 
By letting in Magic Power, this supreme feeling to be connected to the body, the current generation of humans were able to feel it.
 
By letting in Magic Power, this supreme feeling to be connected to the body, the current generation of humans were able to feel it.
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All humans are connected to each other, through this alternative world.
 
All humans are connected to each other, through this alternative world.
   
The non-material, alternative world was named Astrum.
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The non-material, alternative world was named <Astrum>.
   
 
In Astrum, large amounts of Magic Power were swirling.
 
In Astrum, large amounts of Magic Power were swirling.
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To form a contract with humans, there was magic that summons them to this side of the world —— Summoning Magic.
 
To form a contract with humans, there was magic that summons them to this side of the world —— Summoning Magic.
   
What was surprising, was that, they, who were called out from the depths of the spiritual world, had similar attitudes and names as the Gods and Demons from ancient mythologies.
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What was surprising, was that, they, who were called out from the depths of the spiritual world, had similar attitudes and names as the <Gods> and <Demons> from ancient mythologies.
   
 
Thus, they were given the name of Diva.<ref>God = 神, Demon = 魔, combining the two of them gets Diva = 神魔.</ref>
 
Thus, they were given the name of Diva.<ref>God = 神, Demon = 魔, combining the two of them gets Diva = 神魔.</ref>
   
The numerous countries all over the world all became fanatical, religious countries towards the Divas they encountered.
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The numerous countries all over the world, all became fanatical, religious countries towards the Divas they encountered.
   
 
However, in the originally skeptical Japan, a contract with a Diva was basically controlled as a military asset.
 
However, in the originally skeptical Japan, a contract with a Diva was basically controlled as a military asset.
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A portion of the Divas responded to the Japanese Government’s summons and selected people, who were suitable for the power, from Japanese citizens and granted them an Enigma.
 
A portion of the Divas responded to the Japanese Government’s summons and selected people, who were suitable for the power, from Japanese citizens and granted them an Enigma.
   
Enigmas were currently under strict regulation by the country. By holding a Contract Ritual, it would become a Stigma and give the host the power of Summoning Magic.
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Enigmas were currently under strict regulation by the country. By holding a <Contract Ritual>, it would become a <Stigma> and give the host the power of Summoning Magic.
   
 
Thus, all the people who have an Enigma have the obligation to enter the Magic Division to study.
 
Thus, all the people who have an Enigma have the obligation to enter the Magic Division to study.
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And it was also in order for Summoning Magic, this dangerous power, to be completely placed under the control of the country and the academy.
 
And it was also in order for Summoning Magic, this dangerous power, to be completely placed under the control of the country and the academy.
   
—— Right now, Kazuki’s hand also harbored an Enigma, which could be interpreted as an Invitation sent by a Diva.
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—— Right now, Kazuki’s hand also harbored an Enigma, which could be interpreted as an <Invitation sent by a Diva>.
   
“I, also, did not want to become a Stigma Magic User. However, if you are granted an Enigma, it is equivalent to losing the freedom to choose your future.”
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“I, also, did not want to become a <Stigma Magic User>. However, if you are granted an Enigma, it is equivalent to losing the freedom to choose your future.”
   
 
It was not exaggerated for Summoning Magic to be known as a heroic power that was equivalent to thousands of forces on a battlefield.
 
It was not exaggerated for Summoning Magic to be known as a heroic power that was equivalent to thousands of forces on a battlefield.
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Although Swordsmen specialized in swift close-combat, in the end, the role they played was only that of a meat-shield to buy time for the Stigma Magic User to chant Magic.
 
Although Swordsmen specialized in swift close-combat, in the end, the role they played was only that of a meat-shield to buy time for the Stigma Magic User to chant Magic.
   
However, Kazuki still wanted to become a Swordsman, and replace his Keifu-sama, Hayashizaki Jinkai. To let everybody in the world know the power of Hayashizaki-Ryuu Iai Jutsu was his greatest goal in life.
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However, Kazuki still wanted to become a Swordsman, and replace his Keifu-sama, Hayashizaki Jinkai. To let everybody in the world know the power of <Hayashizaki-Ryuu Iai Jutsu> was his greatest goal in life.
   
 
“However, Otou-sama actually said, 'Since you are a person that was selected, don’t continue to hold this kind of offensive dream. Do not let your life be bound by thoughts of gratitude.' So I decided to enter the Magic Division. In order to find a brand new goal.”
 
“However, Otou-sama actually said, 'Since you are a person that was selected, don’t continue to hold this kind of offensive dream. Do not let your life be bound by thoughts of gratitude.' So I decided to enter the Magic Division. In order to find a brand new goal.”

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