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“Still, it is quite good on its own.”
 
“Still, it is quite good on its own.”
   
Rurick spoke in a somewhat exaggerated manner upon seeing Tigre suddenly frown.
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Rurick spoke in a somewhat exaggerated manner seeing Tigre suddenly frown.
   
 
“You're looking quite glum.”
 
“You're looking quite glum.”
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“Don't make that face and just have a drink... is what I'd like to say, but given your worries, I suppose you can't think about drinking. Well, if you can talk about your worries, then feel free to speak.”
 
“Don't make that face and just have a drink... is what I'd like to say, but given your worries, I suppose you can't think about drinking. Well, if you can talk about your worries, then feel free to speak.”
   
Tigre looked steadily at Rurick after hearing his unexpected words and smiled.
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Tigre looked steadily at Rurick hearing his unexpected words and smiled.
   
 
“I thought about this before, but why did you decide to follow me in there earlier?”
 
“I thought about this before, but why did you decide to follow me in there earlier?”
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“It happened a few days after we met, probably about ten days.”
 
“It happened a few days after we met, probably about ten days.”
   
Ellen sighed upon hearing Sophie's words.
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Ellen sighed hearing Sophie's words.
   
 
“Impatient, is he... But is this really the sort of duty he should be giving to you?”
 
“Impatient, is he... But is this really the sort of duty he should be giving to you?”
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“Tigre. I'll tell you this now, but if you do anything to Sophie, she may very well hurt you badly. Though it will hurt being cut with a sword, it can be more painful if she crushes your bones.”
 
“Tigre. I'll tell you this now, but if you do anything to Sophie, she may very well hurt you badly. Though it will hurt being cut with a sword, it can be more painful if she crushes your bones.”
   
Tigre returned to his normal thoughts after hearing Ellen's grumpy voice. Due to her gaze toward him, it was difficult for him to object.
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Tigre returned to his normal thoughts hearing Ellen's grumpy voice. Due to her gaze toward him, it was difficult for him to object.
   
 
“Oh my, Ellen is quite jealous. This is the first time I have seen this side of you.”
 
“Oh my, Ellen is quite jealous. This is the first time I have seen this side of you.”
   
Ellen made a completely sulky face upon hearing Sophie's words as she teased her.
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Ellen made a completely sulky face hearing Sophie's words as she teased her.
   
 
“Jealous? Of course not. He was looking at you in a rude manner. Even you can't feel good about that.”
 
“Jealous? Of course not. He was looking at you in a rude manner. Even you can't feel good about that.”
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After dinner and the conference was finished, Tigre sat while maintaining his bow.
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After dinner and the conference were finished, Tigre sat while maintaining his bow.
   
Sophie had left after telling Batran, who was now sitting at Tigre's side, that Massas was safe.
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Sophie had left after telling Batran, who was now sitting at Tigre's side, Massas was safe.
   
 
Ignoring the difference of status between nobleman and villager, both Batran and Massas had known each other from before Tigre was even born. Hearing of Massas' safety, the little old man was more happy than Tigre.
 
Ignoring the difference of status between nobleman and villager, both Batran and Massas had known each other from before Tigre was even born. Hearing of Massas' safety, the little old man was more happy than Tigre.
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His feet took him to a secluded area. The cold winter air and the light of the stars bathed down on Tigre. Massas was safe.
 
His feet took him to a secluded area. The cold winter air and the light of the stars bathed down on Tigre. Massas was safe.
   
It was good news, but after walking this far, Tigre still could not feel truly happy.
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It was good news, but after walking this far, Tigre could still not feel truly happy.
   
 
“A traitor, am I...”
 
“A traitor, am I...”
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Sophie's bright eyes stared at him. Her bishop staff shook and glittered gold, as if scattering the darkness. Tigre nodded thinking it a natural reaction.
 
Sophie's bright eyes stared at him. Her bishop staff shook and glittered gold, as if scattering the darkness. Tigre nodded thinking it a natural reaction.
   
If he had asked a person of Zhcted, they would consider Tigre as Ellen's prisoner of war. To call the Vanadis a comrade would be nothing more than insolence.
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If he had asked a person of Zhcted, they would consider Tigre Ellen's prisoner of war. To call the Vanadis a comrade would be nothing more than insolence.
   
 
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He did not know what they thought. Though the Zhcted Army was helping Tigre and Augre to defend their territories, it was not so for them. They were defending themselves from Duke Thenardier and were looking for people they could trust to defend them.
 
He did not know what they thought. Though the Zhcted Army was helping Tigre and Augre to defend their territories, it was not so for them. They were defending themselves from Duke Thenardier and were looking for people they could trust to defend them.
   
“If you wish, please leave the battlefield. You may cross the river to the north or through the forest to the south. I do not care. You may discard your weapons there and speak to the Navarre Knights. However...”
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“If you wish, please leave the battlefield. You may cross the river to the north or through the forest to the south. I do not care. You may discard your weapons there and speak the Navarre Knights. However...”
   
 
Tigre continued with a stronger tone.
 
Tigre continued with a stronger tone.

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