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Olivier asked his true intent, having heard his response to the messenger. Olivier could not immediately judge the severity.
 
Olivier asked his true intent, having heard his response to the messenger. Olivier could not immediately judge the severity.
   
“The entire army”
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“The entire army.”
   
 
Roland responded curtly. Olivier gasped.
 
Roland responded curtly. Olivier gasped.
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With her hands at her waist, Ellen looked at Teita happily. Teita, in a fluster, tried to protest.
 
With her hands at her waist, Ellen looked at Teita happily. Teita, in a fluster, tried to protest.
   
“I am Tigre-sama's maid. Certainly, I have yearned for him for many years, but I do not find our relationship lacking....”
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“I am Tigre-sama's maid. Certainly, I have yearned for him for many years, but I do not find our relationship lacking...”
   
 
“Is that so. So is there someone he likes?”
 
“Is that so. So is there someone he likes?”
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Was Teita's reaction really that odd? Ellen looked at her, nearly laughing. The chestnut-brown haired maid looked into the eyes of the Vanadis with reproach. Though mortifying, she did not have the reckless courage to show her bare skin to Tigre.
 
Was Teita's reaction really that odd? Ellen looked at her, nearly laughing. The chestnut-brown haired maid looked into the eyes of the Vanadis with reproach. Though mortifying, she did not have the reckless courage to show her bare skin to Tigre.
   
… Besides....
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… Besides...
   
 
Looking at Ellen's body, she sighed inwardly. Though Teita's body was not unattractive, she could not match Ellen's bust size or thin hips.
 
Looking at Ellen's body, she sighed inwardly. Though Teita's body was not unattractive, she could not match Ellen's bust size or thin hips.
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Ellen's straight face turned rigid. Her wide eyes gazed at Teita. The wind fluttered through her argent hair, bringing her back to her senses.
 
Ellen's straight face turned rigid. Her wide eyes gazed at Teita. The wind fluttered through her argent hair, bringing her back to her senses.
   
“That's right. Well, I don't hate him, I guess....”
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“That's right. Well, I don't hate him, I guess...”
   
 
Ellen's fingers fiddled with her hair. Teita gently pushed forward.
 
Ellen's fingers fiddled with her hair. Teita gently pushed forward.
   
“...So you like him?”
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“... So you like him?”
   
 
Ellen frowned slightly and crossed her arms.
 
Ellen frowned slightly and crossed her arms.
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“Assuming I like Tigre as you say, what will you do?”
 
“Assuming I like Tigre as you say, what will you do?”
   
“That...I do not know, but---”
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“That... I do not know, but---”
   
 
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“I'm one of the seven Vanadis. Even if he liked me, we would just be too unbalanced.”
 
“I'm one of the seven Vanadis. Even if he liked me, we would just be too unbalanced.”
   
“Unbalanced....”
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“Unbalanced...”
   
 
Though relieved, Teita had an expression showing her mixed feelings. Though it was her selfish desire, there was also an imbalance between them.
 
Though relieved, Teita had an expression showing her mixed feelings. Though it was her selfish desire, there was also an imbalance between them.
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Was it different from what Ellen found in Tigre?
 
Was it different from what Ellen found in Tigre?
   
“His gentle nature....”
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“His gentle nature...”
   
 
“What else?”
 
“What else?”
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When asked, Teita stopped her feet and looked up at the clouds in the sky.
 
When asked, Teita stopped her feet and looked up at the clouds in the sky.
   
“...I will tell you what Batran-san once said.”
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“... I will tell you what Batran-san once said.”
   
 
Little by little, Teita formed her words.
 
Little by little, Teita formed her words.
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After a single breath, Ellen nodded silently, encouraging her to continue.
 
After a single breath, Ellen nodded silently, encouraging her to continue.
   
“He lost his father, attended the funeral, and, with no time to rest, became Lord. He had many people to help and worked many days without rest...however, Tigre-sama himself never changed. Thanks to that, I could continue to feel at ease with him.”
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“He lost his father, attended the funeral, and, with no time to rest, became Lord. He had many people to help and worked many days without rest... However, Tigre-sama himself never changed. Thanks to that, I could continue to feel at ease with him.”
   
 
Tigre became Earl and succeeded his territory at the age of 14. He did not take time to mourn for his father and immediately took up his duties. Even so, there was pain, suffering, and conflict.
 
Tigre became Earl and succeeded his territory at the age of 14. He did not take time to mourn for his father and immediately took up his duties. Even so, there was pain, suffering, and conflict.
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“When I saw that, I wanted to help Tigre-sama, even just a little.”
 
“When I saw that, I wanted to help Tigre-sama, even just a little.”
   
“...I see.”
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“... I see.”
   
 
Ellen nodded in satisfaction hearing Teita's words. Her silver-white hair fluttered in the wind.
 
Ellen nodded in satisfaction hearing Teita's words. Her silver-white hair fluttered in the wind.
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She could only smile bitterly as she reflected upon Teita's story as well as her and Lim's reaction.
 
She could only smile bitterly as she reflected upon Teita's story as well as her and Lim's reaction.
   
“Ah, um....”
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“Ah, um...”
   
 
Teita called out in a rather conservative voice, restoring Ellen's presence of mind. She gazed at the maid's hazel eyes. There was a wariness within them. Thinking about it, she had given an expression that was not quite expected. Cheerfully, Ellen tapped Teita's shoulder.
 
Teita called out in a rather conservative voice, restoring Ellen's presence of mind. She gazed at the maid's hazel eyes. There was a wariness within them. Thinking about it, she had given an expression that was not quite expected. Cheerfully, Ellen tapped Teita's shoulder.
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In the large tent, the young, red-haired man was wrapped in a blanket, breathing deeply and quietly. His black bow was propped beside it. Though there should have been an elder man serving beside him and a young maid, neither could be seen. Perhaps they already left.
 
In the large tent, the young, red-haired man was wrapped in a blanket, breathing deeply and quietly. His black bow was propped beside it. Though there should have been an elder man serving beside him and a young maid, neither could be seen. Perhaps they already left.
   
“He really is a deep sleeper....”
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“He really is a deep sleeper...”
   
 
Her voice was positive as she spoke in amazement. Lim compromised and got to her knees before Tigre, lightly shaking his shoulder.
 
Her voice was positive as she spoke in amazement. Lim compromised and got to her knees before Tigre, lightly shaking his shoulder.
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For the two...Their relationship changed a great deal in a short amount of time.
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For the two... Their relationship changed a great deal in a short amount of time.
   
 
Comparing the past and present, she indulged in a strange, deep emotion.
 
Comparing the past and present, she indulged in a strange, deep emotion.
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Though it would end if she said she came to wake Tigre, she was shy from what had just happened and could not speak. Lim looked up in confusion as Ellen walked toward her with narrowed eyes.
 
Though it would end if she said she came to wake Tigre, she was shy from what had just happened and could not speak. Lim looked up in confusion as Ellen walked toward her with narrowed eyes.
   
“You, even if he's difficult to wake up, to try and pull his hair....”
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“You, even if he's difficult to wake up, to try and pull his hair...”
   
 
“I was not---”
 
“I was not---”
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“I don't think that is a particularly important issue, but....”
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“I don't think that is a particularly important issue, but...”
   
 
“No, I just thought they could be called the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}}.”
 
“No, I just thought they could be called the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}}.”
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Ellen smiled happily as she continued egging the two on. Lim and Tigre noticed her intent to tease them.
 
Ellen smiled happily as she continued egging the two on. Lim and Tigre noticed her intent to tease them.
   
''--- The Silver Meteor Army, is it....''
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''--- The Silver Meteor Army, is it...''
   
 
It seemed to be a fairly exaggerated name for the army Tigre led. Lim was reluctant to agree.
 
It seemed to be a fairly exaggerated name for the army Tigre led. Lim was reluctant to agree.
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Although there was a dissenting opinion, since there were no alternative names, it was decided the name of the army would be the [Silver Meteor Army]. Tigre aside, Lim did not seem satisfied to the very end.
 
Although there was a dissenting opinion, since there were no alternative names, it was decided the name of the army would be the [Silver Meteor Army]. Tigre aside, Lim did not seem satisfied to the very end.
   
“Si, Silver, Meteor....”
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“Si, Silver, Meteor...”
   
 
Though Lim's expression did not change, her voice was small as she squeezed those words out. Tigre decided it was a bit pitiful and offered his help.
 
Though Lim's expression did not change, her voice was small as she squeezed those words out. Tigre decided it was a bit pitiful and offered his help.
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Lim responded curtly before sipping her wine.
 
Lim responded curtly before sipping her wine.
   
“...Like I thought. Did something happen? Well, he is the first person to have felt your chest, and he even sucked out poison from them.”
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“... Like I thought. Did something happen? Well, he is the first person to have felt your chest, and he even sucked out poison from them.”
   
 
Lim choked. Though she did not spit out her wine, she coughed several times as Ellen glared at her lightly.
 
Lim choked. Though she did not spit out her wine, she coughed several times as Ellen glared at her lightly.
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Lim looked back shyly before gazing at the floor. She stood up, finished her wine in a single gulp, and placed it on the table.
 
Lim looked back shyly before gazing at the floor. She stood up, finished her wine in a single gulp, and placed it on the table.
   
“...I will have a look at the troubles here.”
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“... I will have a look at the troubles here.”
   
 
“Shouldn't you say you'll be helping Tigre?”
 
“Shouldn't you say you'll be helping Tigre?”
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Ellen finished her soup and gave the bowl to Teita. After that, she noticed the woman with chestnut-brown hair hesitating.
 
Ellen finished her soup and gave the bowl to Teita. After that, she noticed the woman with chestnut-brown hair hesitating.
   
“I will say this for him, but I told you it was a bit different while we were drawing water this morning...I think.”
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“I will say this for him, but I told you it was a bit different while we were drawing water this morning... I think.”
   
 
“I, I see. I suppose you're right.”
 
“I, I see. I suppose you're right.”
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While walking next to Tigre, Rurick pointed to the sky. Tigre looked up at the cloud.
 
While walking next to Tigre, Rurick pointed to the sky. Tigre looked up at the cloud.
   
“This is a first for me.... One of the Brune soldiers noticed the cloud. You can see it resembles a horse.”
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“This is a first for me... One of the Brune soldiers noticed the cloud. You can see it resembles a horse.”
   
 
“I see. So what about it?”
 
“I see. So what about it?”
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“A wounded person can't fight. I have no reason to injure anyone.”
 
“A wounded person can't fight. I have no reason to injure anyone.”
   
“Certainly that is true....”
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“Certainly that is true...”
   
 
After speaking, Rurick looked at the arrow in Tigre's hand, showing interest.
 
After speaking, Rurick looked at the arrow in Tigre's hand, showing interest.
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“Do you know of him?”
 
“Do you know of him?”
   
“I have met him a few times before. I would have to say he is Duke Ganelon's right-hand man....”
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“I have met him a few times before. I would have to say he is Duke Ganelon's right-hand man...”
   
 
The wrinkles on his face increased as he explored his memory. He then remembered he had a dish of porridge and a spoon in his hand.
 
The wrinkles on his face increased as he explored his memory. He then remembered he had a dish of porridge and a spoon in his hand.
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Looking back at the old man laughing with a muffled voice, Vodyanoy, shrugged his shoulders in his mind.
 
Looking back at the old man laughing with a muffled voice, Vodyanoy, shrugged his shoulders in his mind.
   
“So... you want me to dive into that swamp? It's not exactly a pleasant job.”
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“So... You want me to dive into that swamp? It's not exactly a pleasant job.”
   
 
The answer was as anticipated. Drekavac removed his hand from the book and pointed to the corner of the room. There, bags of gold received from Duke Thenardier lay on the ground, as if casually thrown aside.
 
The answer was as anticipated. Drekavac removed his hand from the book and pointed to the corner of the room. There, bags of gold received from Duke Thenardier lay on the ground, as if casually thrown aside.

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