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=== Part 2 ===
 
=== Part 2 ===
   
Even among the ''Enjutsu'' users who could freely manipulate fire, the Kannagi family was famous for their superior strength. It was not simply because their power was great. The reason lay in the special ability passed on in their family's blood. The flame they manipulated was not created by the physical phenomenon of simply accelerating molecular motion. It possessed the power to burn away impurities and destroy evil.
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Even among the ''Enjutsu'' users who could freely manipulate fire, the Kannagi family was famous for their superior strength. It was not simply because their power was great. The reason laid in the special ability passed on in their family's blood. The flame they manipulated was not created by the physical phenomenon of simply accelerating molecular motion. It possessed the power to burn away impurities and destroy evil.
   
 
Because of this "purifying flame" the Kannagi family practitioners held absolute dominance over ''youma'', evil spirits, and all beings who transgressed the law. However, even with the ability given by blood, depending on the extent to which their blood was diluted with each generation, it was inevitable that their power would eventually deteriorate.
 
Because of this "purifying flame" the Kannagi family practitioners held absolute dominance over ''youma'', evil spirits, and all beings who transgressed the law. However, even with the ability given by blood, depending on the extent to which their blood was diluted with each generation, it was inevitable that their power would eventually deteriorate.
   
The branch family practitioners had long lost the highest rank of the "gold" flame attribute. If a youma with a fire attribute was their opponent, the flame that they released would merely be absorbed by the youma instead of purifying or destroying it.
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The branch family practitioners had long lost the highest rank of the "gold" flame attribute. If a youma with a fire attribute was their opponent, the flame that they released would merely be absorbed by the youma instead of purifying and destroying it.
   
 
...Which was what had happened just now——
 
...Which was what had happened just now——
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"I wonder if he's dead..." Kazuma muttered with a refreshed face.
 
"I wonder if he's dead..." Kazuma muttered with a refreshed face.
   
A cool breeze wrapped Kazuma, keeping the raging fire off him. Even the heat that the flame emitted was sealed off; not a drop of sweat was on Kazuma's face. <!-- Nwms8: Changed 'Even the heat that the flame present in the room emitted' to 'Even the heat that the flame emitted'. The part about the flame being in the room is obvious -->
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A cool breeze wrapped around Kazuma, preventing the raging fire from touching him. Even the heat that the flame emitted was sealed off; not a drop of sweat was on Kazuma's face. <!-- Nwms8: Changed 'Even the heat that the flame present in the room emitted' to 'Even the heat that the flame emitted'. The part about the flame being in the room is obvious -->
   
 
"H-help……"
 
"H-help……"
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Sakamoto's face writhed in pain as he was mercilessly trampled upon. Since Kazuma didn't want to touch anything beyond his slippers, he brought down his heel instead of stepping on him. The skull could have been making a creaking sound, but that wasn't a big problem.
 
Sakamoto's face writhed in pain as he was mercilessly trampled upon. Since Kazuma didn't want to touch anything beyond his slippers, he brought down his heel instead of stepping on him. The skull could have been making a creaking sound, but that wasn't a big problem.
   
Kazuma stepped on Sakamoto's head and stated clearly, "You're not my client and I don't have a knack of saving middle-aged men."
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Kazuma stepped on Sakamoto's head and stated clearly, "you're not my client and I don't have a habit of saving middle-aged men."
   
 
"If it's money, I'll pay. Twice as much, or so…"
 
"If it's money, I'll pay. Twice as much, or so…"
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"Twice? Is your life worth only a million?"
 
"Twice? Is your life worth only a million?"
   
Kazuma took out a cigarette from his pocket. He gently stretched out his hand, exposing the cigarette's tip outside of the kekkai and began to smoke.
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Kazuma took a cigarette from his pocket. He gently stretched out his hand, exposing the cigarette's tip outside of the kekkai and began to smoke.
   
 
[[Image:Kaze no Stigma vol 01 019.jpg|thumb]]
 
[[Image:Kaze no Stigma vol 01 019.jpg|thumb]]
   
Sakamoto didn't have the luxury to be so relaxed, though. Whether by chance or on purpose, there were holes in the area of the kekkai near Sakamoto. Some of the flames passed through the holes and touched him.
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Sakamoto didn't have the luxury to be so relaxed though. Whether by chance or on purpose, there were holes in the area of the kekkai near Sakamoto. Some of the flames passed through the holes and touched him.
   
 
"Hot-! Ee-eeee! Help! Fine!! I'll pay 10 million!"
 
"Hot-! Ee-eeee! Help! Fine!! I'll pay 10 million!"
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"All right now. Then, won't you please stand back?"
 
"All right now. Then, won't you please stand back?"
   
Kazuma kicked Sakamoto in the rear, and, while sending Sakamoto rolling into the side of the room, Kazuma proclaimed, "You're in the way."
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Kazuma kicked Sakamoto in the rear, and, while sending Sakamoto rolling into the side of the room, Kazuma proclaimed, "you're in the way."
   
 
He began muttering in a low voice and waved his right hand sideways in a mowing motion. As if being squeezed out by his hand, the raging fire was instantly expelled through the window.
 
He began muttering in a low voice and waved his right hand sideways in a mowing motion. As if being squeezed out by his hand, the raging fire was instantly expelled through the window.
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In place of the extinguished fire, wind raged across the room. Kazuma stood quietly and with his hand still in his jacket pocket, directed the wind to erase the flames still remaining in the room.
 
In place of the extinguished fire, wind raged across the room. Kazuma stood quietly and with his hand still in his jacket pocket, directed the wind to erase the flames still remaining in the room.
   
The fight was already over. The youma was unable to even put up any resistance against Kazuma's overwhelming power while being torn to pieces. All that was left to do was wait for its annihilation.
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The fight was already over. The youma was unable to even put up any resistance against Kazuma's overwhelming power as it was torn to pieces. All that was left to do was wait for its annihilation.
   
 
"And with this…"
 
"And with this…"
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There were no spirit fragments remaining. Kazuma quietly observed the destroyed youma with a calm look.
 
There were no spirit fragments remaining. Kazuma quietly observed the destroyed youma with a calm look.
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"Finished," Kazuma told Sakamoto. Sakamoto was still lying on the floor, dumbfounded.
 
"Finished," Kazuma told Sakamoto. Sakamoto was still lying on the floor, dumbfounded.
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"Pay the money in three days. Otherwise, would you like to regret having ever been born?"
 
"Pay the money in three days. Otherwise, would you like to regret having ever been born?"
   
It was identical to what a criminal would say. Even if it was a mistake, it wasn't the way one would speak to a client.
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It was identical to what a criminal would say. Even if it was a mistake, it wasn't the way one would speak to a customer.
   
 
However, Sakamoto, realizing the horror of going against Kazuma, didn't even dare to complain.
 
However, Sakamoto, realizing the horror of going against Kazuma, didn't even dare to complain.
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Without a word Kazuma approached what appeared to be the ashes of Shinji's remains and trampled on them to Sakamoto's despair. As expected, Sakamoto protested... <!-- Nwms8: Changed 'trampled on them in despair' to 'trampled on them to Sakamoto's despair' since Kazuma would not trample in despair. Also changed 'Sakamoto detested' to 'Sakamoto protested' -->
 
Without a word Kazuma approached what appeared to be the ashes of Shinji's remains and trampled on them to Sakamoto's despair. As expected, Sakamoto protested... <!-- Nwms8: Changed 'trampled on them in despair' to 'trampled on them to Sakamoto's despair' since Kazuma would not trample in despair. Also changed 'Sakamoto detested' to 'Sakamoto protested' -->
   
"Wh-what are you doing!? I don't know what happened between the two of you but please show some respect for the dead!"
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"Wh-what are you doing!? I don't know what happened between you two but please show some respect for the dead!"
   
 
"He's not dead..." Kazuma dryly spat the words out and then continued to kick Shinji again and again.
 
"He's not dead..." Kazuma dryly spat the words out and then continued to kick Shinji again and again.
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''(I have to tell this to the [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Soushu|soushu]] as soon as possible…)''
 
''(I have to tell this to the [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Soushu|soushu]] as soon as possible…)''
   
In a sense, Shinji's unease was right on the mark. From that moment, a war to push the Kannagi into the abyss of ruin began.
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In a sense, Shinji's unease was on the mark. From that moment, a war to push the Kannagi into the abyss of ruin began.
   
 
=== Part 3 ===
 
=== Part 3 ===

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