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Correctly speaking, there were always monsters hiding beside Mai, but if you talking about people, she was alone.
 
Correctly speaking, there were always monsters hiding beside Mai, but if you talking about people, she was alone.
   
She hadn’t been long in this school, but her other classmates had already formed their own social circles. After school, she would sit alone in the busy classroom.
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She hadn’t been long in this school, but her other classmates had already formed their own social circles. After school, she would be in the busy classroom, sitting alone.
   
She didn’t feel alone or depressed.
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She didn’t feel she alone or depressed.
   
 
There was only one thing important to her.
 
There was only one thing important to her.

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