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At the instant when I was murmuring to myself, joy that was close to melancholy gushed out from my mouth and my ears, then splattered onto my skin. |
At the instant when I was murmuring to myself, joy that was close to melancholy gushed out from my mouth and my ears, then splattered onto my skin. |
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− | The man was leaning against the steel door that looked sticky and filthy because of spray |
+ | The man was leaning against the steel door that looked sticky and filthy because of spray pain, and gradually squatted down. His head was lowered, and he tapped his knees to the tempo of the holy music with earphones on his ears. |
‘Narumi, you found him? Really?’ |
‘Narumi, you found him? Really?’ |
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I finally realized that Alice was not wearing pajamas, but a black dress. The darkness that lacked luster wrapped her whole body, even her gloves were black. She wore a bonnet, and a thin veil covered her entire face. |
I finally realized that Alice was not wearing pajamas, but a black dress. The darkness that lacked luster wrapped her whole body, even her gloves were black. She wore a bonnet, and a thin veil covered her entire face. |
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− | They were clothes for people in mourning. |
+ | They were clothes for people in mourning . |
“…… Request?” |
“…… Request?” |
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“If you plan to change into that, I have no power to stop you. However……” |
“If you plan to change into that, I have no power to stop you. However……” |
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− | The folded paper that was held in Alice’s hands, is the will that Alice |
+ | The folded paper that was held in Alice’s hands, is the will that Alice force me to write the day that I decided to take the Angel Fix. At that moment, I was completely clueless to the reason that Alice asked me to write it, so the contents in it were only hastily scribbled things. |
The one who wrote the will is not the person that I am now. |
The one who wrote the will is not the person that I am now. |
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I weakly nodded. |
I weakly nodded. |
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− | + | “Have Hiro brought his car? We can’t let Yondaime wait for so long, he’ll become anxious. Let’s go!” |
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“Alice, you’re going too?” |
“Alice, you’re going too?” |
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At the instant when the steel door was pried open, a strange smell rushed over and stimulated our senses— it was the smell of a type of plant, the choking, bitter and fresh smell of a plant. It was a familiar smell to me. Among the ten other people who went into the building, only I was familiar with the smell, as though it was still lingering in my mouth. As soon as we entered, we saw a cramped, dusty hall, and quite a few ragged sofas piled at a corner, as if it was an abandoned hospital. |
At the instant when the steel door was pried open, a strange smell rushed over and stimulated our senses— it was the smell of a type of plant, the choking, bitter and fresh smell of a plant. It was a familiar smell to me. Among the ten other people who went into the building, only I was familiar with the smell, as though it was still lingering in my mouth. As soon as we entered, we saw a cramped, dusty hall, and quite a few ragged sofas piled at a corner, as if it was an abandoned hospital. |
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− | “Alice, why don’t you just wait |
+ | “Alice, why don’t you just wait on the car?” |
Hiro said in a low murmur. Alice pressed her bear forcefully onto my back, and shook her head while holding on to me. I turned my head over, and I could see that she looked even more terrible than just now. |
Hiro said in a low murmur. Alice pressed her bear forcefully onto my back, and shook her head while holding on to me. I turned my head over, and I could see that she looked even more terrible than just now. |
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“Can be just beat them up if we see anyone?” |
“Can be just beat them up if we see anyone?” |
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− | “You’re being |
+ | “You’re being to aggressive!” |
Footsteps echoed in the building. |
Footsteps echoed in the building. |