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===Day of Dismantling===
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====Day of Dismantlement====
   
 
I hear a deep ringing sound- clank, clank.
 
I hear a deep ringing sound- clank, clank.
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Completely nude, I lie weakly on the ground.
 
Completely nude, I lie weakly on the ground.
   
I am at the special machine handling factory at the outskirts of Oval City— generally known as the robot processing factory. The moment that it was determined that I would become scrap metal, I was put onto a truck and sent here. It’s the same for the other robots, but they look more like convicts who are about to go to the execution ground, as nobody is speaking.
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I am at the special machine handling factory at the outskirts of Oval City— generally known as the robot processing factory. The moment that it was determined that I would become scrap metal, I was put onto a truck and sent here. It's the same for the other robots, but they look more like convicts who are about to go to the execution ground, as nobody is speaking.
   
Swaying around on the rack of the truck, I blankly think of the reason that nobody wants to buy me. Is it because my suicidal intentions were found out when I went through the mental circuit examination? Or is it because I’m modeled on Professor’s sister, so I’m harder to sell? Or is it because the price of a new model robot is too expensive, so they all steer clear of me?
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Swaying around on the rack of the truck, I blankly think of the reason that nobody wants to buy me. Is it because my suicidal intentions were found out when I went through the mental circuit examination? Or is it because I'm modeled on Professor's sister, so I'm harder to sell? Or is it because the price of a new model robot is too expensive, so they all steer clear of me?
   
I don’t know.
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I don't know.
   
 
But I at least know this clearly.
 
But I at least know this clearly.
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The cigarette case hung on my neck emitted a clanking noise, shaking violently on my breasts like a living creature.
 
The cigarette case hung on my neck emitted a clanking noise, shaking violently on my breasts like a living creature.
   
When I reach the unpleasant, gray level, the arm of the dismantling machine catches hold of my right arm. Like a person being caught by the police, my elbows are twisted to my back with cracking noises. The alarm of a warning keeps ringing in my mind, so I immediately stop the program. It’s useless now, anyway.
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When I reach the unpleasant, gray level, the arm of the dismantling machine catches hold of my right arm. Like a person being caught by the police, my elbows are twisted to my back with cracking noises. The alarm of a warning keeps ringing in my mind, so I immediately stop the program. It's useless now, anyway.
   
 
There are a few hundred protruding spots on the arm of the machine, and they suddenly start to wriggle like tentacles. The protruding spots squirt out a white, sticky substance that entangles my right arm. This liquid seems to be a fire extinguishing agent used to prevent something from catching fire. The hot, bubbling liquid looks somewhat similar to soapy water.
 
There are a few hundred protruding spots on the arm of the machine, and they suddenly start to wriggle like tentacles. The protruding spots squirt out a white, sticky substance that entangles my right arm. This liquid seems to be a fire extinguishing agent used to prevent something from catching fire. The hot, bubbling liquid looks somewhat similar to soapy water.
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As my leg is thicker than my arm, this procedure is more time consuming. One minute and eleven seconds in total.
 
As my leg is thicker than my arm, this procedure is more time consuming. One minute and eleven seconds in total.
   
At this moment, I notice that my right leg that had been cut off has a tag stuck onto it. That part will not belong to my body anymore, but will become ‘merchandise’ that will be sold in the second hand parts market.
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At this moment, I notice that my right leg that had been cut off has a tag stuck onto it. That part will not belong to my body anymore, but will become 'merchandise' that will be sold in the second hand parts market.
   
My cut off right leg rolls to the recycling bin beside the conveyer belt. Tens of ‘legs’ from other robots are piled in the box like a chopped up corpse. Some legs are still squirming, and look extremely disgusting.
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My cut off right leg rolls to the recycling bin beside the conveyer belt. Tens of 'legs' from other robots are piled in the box like a chopped up corpse. Some legs are still squirming, and look extremely disgusting.
 
The dismantling machine starts on my left leg after my right leg is done.
 
The dismantling machine starts on my left leg after my right leg is done.
   
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What happened to the robot that went on a rampage at the fountain plaza?
 
What happened to the robot that went on a rampage at the fountain plaza?
   
When I come to my senses, my left leg have already disappeared. I’m not sure how long the process is.
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When I come to my senses, my left leg have already disappeared. I'm not sure how long the process is.
   
 
I lie down on the conveyer belt, limbless.
 
I lie down on the conveyer belt, limbless.
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After that, the process of cutting off my head starts.
 
After that, the process of cutting off my head starts.
   
Two dismantlement arms clamp my face between them. The cold, rough, hard machine arms. They’re completely different from Professor’s soft, gentle arms.
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Two dismantlement arms clamp my face between them. The cold, rough, hard machine arms. They're completely different from Professor's soft, gentle arms.
   
 
The cold machine arm places a blue scalpel on my neck. The hot blade comes closer bit by bit.
 
The cold machine arm places a blue scalpel on my neck. The hot blade comes closer bit by bit.
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That was my last conversation with Professor.
 
That was my last conversation with Professor.
   
That’s right, Professor—
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That's right, Professor—
   
—what did she say…… yeah, present?
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—what did she say...... yeah, present?
   
 
Professor.
 
Professor.
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A few tubes that are like blood vessels are hanging from the lower part of my head. I stare at my body through the front part of the tubes. My chest and abdomen are twitching non-stop like an alien organism.
 
A few tubes that are like blood vessels are hanging from the lower part of my head. I stare at my body through the front part of the tubes. My chest and abdomen are twitching non-stop like an alien organism.
   
The strange thing is, I don’t even feel a trace of terror.
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The strange thing is, I don't even feel a trace of terror.
   
 
Different from when my arm was cut off, my heart is very calm. Next, I will calmly accept death. But this is not a sudden change of heart, not that I have seen through life and death, and not realization, but because my heart is starting to break down.
 
Different from when my arm was cut off, my heart is very calm. Next, I will calmly accept death. But this is not a sudden change of heart, not that I have seen through life and death, and not realization, but because my heart is starting to break down.
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Then they start to cut my head.
 
Then they start to cut my head.
   
Firstly, my scalp is torn off, my maroon hair that I’m so proud of is stripped out along with my scalp. Next, the ball-shaped metal tool jabs into my eye socket, and my eyeball is gouged out with a ‘pop(?). The gaze of my gouged-out right eyeball and the left eyeball left met. But then my left eyeball is immediately gouged out too.
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Firstly, my scalp is torn off, my maroon hair that I'm so proud of is stripped out along with my scalp. Next, the ball-shaped metal tool jabs into my eye socket, and my eyeball is gouged out with a 'pop(?)'. The gaze of my gouged-out right eyeball and the left eyeball left met. But then my left eyeball is immediately gouged out too.
   
 
Light disappears from my world.
 
Light disappears from my world.
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Where are you now, Professor?
 
Where are you now, Professor?
   
Are you in heaven? Is it comfortable there? Are you eating well? Remember not to smoke on the bed.
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Are you at heaven? Is it comfortable there? Are you eating well? Remember not to smoke on the bed.
   
 
Professor.
 
Professor.
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Why did you die?
 
Why did you die?
   
Is it because I wasn’t a good girl? Is it because I didn’t watch the movie properly? Or is it because I didn’t finish the report seriously?
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Is it because I wasn't a good girl? Is it because I didn't watch the movie properly? Or is it because I didn't finish the report seriously?
   
 
Professor. I feel like seeing you. Really really really really feel like seeing you.
 
Professor. I feel like seeing you. Really really really really feel like seeing you.

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