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==Chapter 1: Rin's Chapter--Loving the You Beside Me Now==
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==Chapter 1: Rin's Chapter--Loving the You Beside Me Now.==
   
 
“U~…”
 
“U~…”
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At first, she thought that she was just imagining it.
 
At first, she thought that she was just imagining it.
   
But on seeing Ichika appear right in front of her, Rin blinked twice, and realized that this was reality.
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But on seeing Ichika appear right in front of her, Rin blinked twice, and realized that this is reality.
   
 
“Wh, why, why, why are you here!?”
 
“Wh, why, why, why are you here!?”
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Ichika gently hugged Rin, who fell forward, and made her lie on the bed.
 
Ichika gently hugged Rin, who fell forward, and made her lie on the bed.
   
“Shu, shut up…if it’s like this, I…ack, ack!”
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“Shu, shut up…if it’s like that, I…ack, ack!”
   
 
“Ah, see? Don’t force yourself to talk. Here, drink this. It’ll replenish your liquids and sugars.”
 
“Ah, see? Don’t force yourself to talk. Here, drink this. It’ll replenish your liquids and sugars.”
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While saying that, Ichika passed the sports drink to Rin.
 
While saying that, Ichika passed the sports drink to Rin.
   
Rin obediently accepted the drink and took a gulp. She then turned to Ichika and asked.
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Rin obediently accepted this drink and took a gulp. She then turned to Ichika and asked.
   
 
“And, and then? Why are you in my room?”
 
“And, and then? Why are you in my room?”
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Rin suddenly thought of something.
 
Rin suddenly thought of something.
   
(Do, don’t, don’t tell me he wanted to do whatever he wanted while I was sick—)
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(Do, don’t, don’t tell me he wanted to do whatever he wanted when I’m sick—)
   
 
[I can do whatever I want to the tough Rin now. Kehehe.]
 
[I can do whatever I want to the tough Rin now. Kehehe.]
   
[STOP, STOP IT, IDIOT! I’LL KILL YOU!?]
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[STOP, STOP IT, IDIOT! I’LL KILL YOU!?
   
 
[Oi oi, now’s your chance to act tough. Ora—, I’ll strip you, I’ll strip!]
 
[Oi oi, now’s your chance to act tough. Ora—, I’ll strip you, I’ll strip!]
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(I, I think my fever made me weird…)
 
(I, I think my fever made me weird…)
   
It’s true. Right now, her mind’s not really okay.
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It’s true. Right now, her mind’s not really normal.
   
 
‘’It would be better if the fantasy just now was a little more sentimental.’’
 
‘’It would be better if the fantasy just now was a little more sentimental.’’
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Extremely frail due to the illness, Rin showed a weak smile.
 
Extremely frail due to the illness, Rin showed a weak smile.
   
At that moment, a wet towel was placed on her forehead.
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At this moment, a wet towel was placed on her forehead.
   
 
“Ah, sorry. Was it cold?”
 
“Ah, sorry. Was it cold?”
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Rin and Ichika soon ended their conversation, and both became silent.
 
Rin and Ichika soon ended their conversation, and both became silent.
   
But rather than it being an awkward silence, it was more like a gentle silence as both of them understood each other.
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But rather than it being an awkward silence, it’s more like a gentle silence as both of them understand each other.
   
 
(Being alone with Ichika… being alone with Ichika…)
 
(Being alone with Ichika… being alone with Ichika…)
   
DOKI DOKI. The intense heartbeat gradually heated up her heart.
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DOKI DOKI. The intense heartbeat gradually heats up her heart.
   
 
Rin secretly glanced at Ichika so as not to be seen. Either the summer flu or the heart in love was messing around as the heat went up and made her face blush.
 
Rin secretly glanced at Ichika so as not to be seen. Either the summer flu or the heart in love was messing around as the heat went up and made her face blush.
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She tried to act calm, but Rin’s pitch went higher by half an octave.
 
She tried to act calm, but Rin’s pitch went higher by half an octave.
   
(U, uwa! Was I spotted? I, it’s okay, right?)
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(U, uwa! Was I stopped? I, it’s okay, right?)
   
“You haven't eaten anything since morning, right? Do you have any appetite?
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“You didn’t eat anything since morning, right? Do you have any appetite?)
   
 
“No, not really… maybe my stomach’s a little hungry…”
 
“No, not really… maybe my stomach’s a little hungry…”
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“Oi, oi, better eat something you can digest well.”
 
“Oi, oi, better eat something you can digest well.”
   
“How rude… noodles are the best food originated from China… it’s good for digestion…”
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“How rude… noodles are the best food that originated from China… it’s good for digestion…”
   
 
“Gruel will do, right?”
 
“Gruel will do, right?”
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On hearing Rin’s reply, Ichika nodded his head and left the room to use the kitchen.
 
On hearing Rin’s reply, Ichika nodded his head and left the room to use the kitchen.
   
Rin was left alone in the room, but the loneliness she felt just now disappeared without a trace as she gently patted the towel on her forehead.
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Rin’s left alone in the room, but the loneliness she felt just now disappeared without a trace as she gently pats the towel on her forehead.
   
 
“Ehehe…”
 
“Ehehe…”
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(Arre…? Didn’t the same thing happen during Middle School…)
 
(Arre…? Didn’t the same thing happen during Middle School…)
   
She searched through her memory in a vague manner, and couldn’t think of it. As expected, she still had a fever.
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She searched through her memory in a vague manner, and couldn’t think of it. as expected, she still has a fever.
   
 
(That was, during…the rainy season…I forgot to bring my umbrella. I ran off, and got a cold…)
 
(That was, during…the rainy season…I forgot to bring my umbrella. I ran off, and got a cold…)
   
--That was a lie. That didn’t happen at all.
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--That’s a lie. That didn’t happen at all.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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“Hm? How honest.”
 
“Hm? How honest.”
   
“HA, HA!? I DON’T KNOW W WHAT YOU’RE TALKING ABOUT! WHAT ABOUT BEING HONEST!? IT’S NOT LIKE THAT AT ALL! THANKING SOMEONE IS WHAT SOMEONE IS EXPECTED TO DO!!!”
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“HA, HA!? I DON’T KNOW W WHAT YOU’RE TALKING ABOUT! WHAT BEING HONEST!? IT’S NOT LIKE THAT AT ALL! THANKING SOMEONE IS WHAT SOMEONE IS EXPECTED TO DO!!!”
   
“Got it got it. Don’t shout so loudly like this. You’re going to collapse.
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“Got it got it. Don’t shout so loudly like this. You’re going to collapse.
   
 
“Fu, humph!”
 
“Fu, humph!”
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Rin laid down as she seemed to slam her head into her pillow.
 
Rin laid down as she seemed to slam her head into her pillow.
   
Putting the utensils down on the table beside him, Ichika took a chair to put it beside him.
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Putting the utensils down on the table beside him, Ichika takes a chair to puts it beside him.
   
 
“Then, okay, can you get up?”
 
“Then, okay, can you get up?”
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“Ahh, un. Okay.”
 
“Ahh, un. Okay.”
   
Ichika took the spoon, and took up a mouth-sized portion of gruel.
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Ichika took the spoon, and takes up a mouth-sized portion of gruel.
   
 
“Rin, aahn.”
 
“Rin, aahn.”
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Close mouth, chew. Close mouth, chew.
 
Close mouth, chew. Close mouth, chew.
   
This continued on, and half a minute later, the gruel was all gone.
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This continued on, and half a minute later, the gruel’s all gone.
   
“Bu, but, well, it was too bland. Unsatisfactory. It would be alright if you just added some mustard in.”
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“Bu, but, well, it’s too bland. Unsatisfactory. It would be alright if you just added some mustard in.”
   
 
“I say, eating spicy food is bad for your stomach.”
 
“I say, eating spicy food is bad for your stomach.”
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Of course, she felt ashamed that other boys teased her for being a big eater, but two days later, she realized that ‘it’s worth it to get more for the same price’, and stopped doing that.
 
Of course, she felt ashamed that other boys teased her for being a big eater, but two days later, she realized that ‘it’s worth it to get more for the same price’, and stopped doing that.
   
Basically, there was no meaning to hide it.
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Basically, there’s no meaning to hide it.
   
 
Either way, she did punch Ichika hard the first time she met him.
 
Either way, she did punch Ichika hard the first time she met him.
   
(That was, well, eh… my bad… but, I did apologize after that…)
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(That, well, eh… my misunderstanding… but, I did apologize after that…)
   
But well, that was in the past, and it’s Ichika’s virtue not to be fussy about such things.
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But well, that was in the past, and it’s Ichika’s virtue not to be fussy about things.
   
 
“Tha, thanks for your hospitality.”
 
“Tha, thanks for your hospitality.”
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(I’ll just ask today since there’s a chance.)
 
(I’ll just ask today since there’s a chance.)
   
Though there was something she was really mindful of, the will not to run away like last time was burning strongly too.
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Though there’s something she was really mindful of, the will not to run away like was burning strongly too.
   
After that, it had been 5 minutes since Ichika came back, but to her, it felt like more than an hour had passed.
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After that, it’s been 5 minutes since Ichika came back, but to her, it felt like more than an hour passed.
   
 
“I, Ichika.”
 
“I, Ichika.”
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She wanted to say it, she wanted to ask it, yet her voice went softer.
 
She wanted to say it, she wanted to ask it, yet her voice went softer.
   
(Ahh, really! Go me, go!)
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(Ahh, really! Go me go!)
   
 
Clenching her fist tightly under the blanket, Rin finally asked,
 
Clenching her fist tightly under the blanket, Rin finally asked,
   
“Why, why did you not go out with Karin!?”
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“Why, why did you go out with Karin!?”
   
 
--I said it!
 
--I said it!
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Her mind continued to spin about.
 
Her mind continued to spin about.
   
At that moment, the stunned Ichika opened his mouth,
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At this moment, the stunned Ichika opened his mouth,
   
 
“…Eh?”
 
“…Eh?”
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“Ka, Karin was that cute. You didn’t hate her, right?”
 
“Ka, Karin was that cute. You didn’t hate her, right?”
   
“Eve, even if you say that, in fact, Hitozato-san had no reason to like me.”
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“Eve, even if you said that, in fact, Hitozato-san had no reason to like me.”
   
 
“Eh…?”
 
“Eh…?”
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That’s what she didn’t understand.
 
That’s what she didn’t understand.
   
Seeing that Rin wanted to know what was going on, Ichika folded his arms and answered.
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Seeing that Rin wants to know what’s going on, Ichika folds his arms and answered.
   
 
“Most likely, she got the wrong person, right? Me, Kazuma, Dan, we were always together.”
 
“Most likely, she got the wrong person, right? Me, Kazuma, Dan, we were always together.”
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“Why!?”
 
“Why!?”
   
“Because Hitozato-san would always ask me about Kazuma every time she talked to me. Though you probably didn’t know.”
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“Because Hitozato-san would always ask me about Kazuma every time she talked to me. Though you probably don’t know.”
   
 
“Re, really…?”
 
“Re, really…?”
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She didn’t know at all.
 
She didn’t know at all.
   
Of course, they had a good relationship. Rin was the type of girl who would be in the center of attention, so she would often hear stories about romance. Even so, this was the first time she heard about this. Rin was stunned that she didn’t understand Karin at all.
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Of course, they had a good relationship. Rin’s the type of girl who would be in the center of attention, so she would often hear stories about romance. Even so, this is the first time she heard about this. Rin was stunned that she didn’t understand Karin at all.
   
 
Thinking about this, she seemed to turn limp for a while.
 
Thinking about this, she seemed to turn limp for a while.
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(I, I, I kept misunderstanding for so many years…)
 
(I, I, I kept misunderstanding for so many years…)
   
An idiot, she was an idiot. There was nothing more stupid than this.
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An idiot, she’s an idiot. There’s nothing more stupid than this.
   
 
But perhaps because of the fever due to the flu, she couldn’t even get angry at all.
 
But perhaps because of the fever due to the flu, she couldn’t even get angry at all.
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‘’…Impossible. Even till now, I’m still friends with Karin.’’
 
‘’…Impossible. Even till now, I’m still friends with Karin.’’
   
“Those two should be dating, right? Ah, but Kazuma said that he had to date a really popular girl. Hm? But since everyone just met today after a long time, I was just wondering.”
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“Those two should be dating, right? Ah, but Kazuma said that he had to date a really popular girl. Hm? But since everyone just met today after a long time, I’m just wondering.”
   
Rin sighed softly, not wanting to let Ichika realize this as he folded his arms.
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Rin sighed softly, not wanting to let Ichika realize this as he folds his arms.
   
 
“Why didn’t she confess immediately?”
 
“Why didn’t she confess immediately?”
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“What is it, Rin? Why are you so formal?”
 
“What is it, Rin? Why are you so formal?”
   
After school, during the dusk of orange, there was only two people in the orange classroom, facing each other as they sat at the orange table.
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After school, during the dusk of orange, there’s only two people in the orange classroom, facing each other as they sat at the orange table.
   
 
Both of them were wearing the school uniform of Nanatsuno Middle School. Ichika was wearing the Gakuran, while Rin was wearing the sailor uniform.
 
Both of them were wearing the school uniform of Nanatsuno Middle School. Ichika was wearing the Gakuran, while Rin was wearing the sailor uniform.
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“We, well. I was thinking if I should change my hairstyle. What do you think?”
 
“We, well. I was thinking if I should change my hairstyle. What do you think?”
   
Squirming about, Rin asked in a manner completely different than usual.
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Squirming about, Rin asked in a manner completely different from usual.
   
 
Wanting to know Ichika’s response, the timid girl’s heart made her eyes float up.
 
Wanting to know Ichika’s response, the timid girl’s heart made her eyes float up.
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(Un...)
 
(Un...)
   
Having woken up, Rin looked at the clock on the wall. It seemed that she had slept for about 2 hours.
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Having woken up, Rin looked at the clock on the wall. It seemed that she slept for about 2 hours.
   
 
“Ichika...is he around?”
 
“Ichika...is he around?”
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Ichika immediately came out after he was called.
 
Ichika immediately came out after he was called.
   
(He really kept me company me all the time...)
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(He really accompanied me all the way...)
   
Her heart felt really unbearable.
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Her heart really really unbearable.
   
 
But this felt as sweet as a forbidden sweet poison, full of allure.
 
But this felt as sweet as a forbidden sweet poison, full of allure.
   
“We, well...I got a lot of sweat on me, so I was hoping you could wipe my body...”
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“We, well...I got a lot of sweat on me, so I hope that you wipe my body...”
   
 
--This, eh!?
 
--This, eh!?
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DOKI DOKI. Her heart beat wildly again.
 
DOKI DOKI. Her heart beat wildly again.
   
Though she wanted to control the Red Hare Horse that was rampaging, it didn't go well.
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Though she wanted to control the Red Hare Horse that's rampaging, it didn't go well.
   
 
“So, so I say...wipe my body...”
 
“So, so I say...wipe my body...”
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“No, that's—”
 
“No, that's—”
   
“Di, didn't you say that you would do anything?”
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“Di, didn't you say that you'll do anything?”
   
 
“No, even then, that's—”
 
“No, even then, that's—”
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--Eh? Eh?
 
--Eh? Eh?
   
Though it was shocking of her to say that, it was even more shocking to hear Ichika agree with it.
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Though it was shocking of her to say that, it was even shocking to hear Ichika agree with it.
   
But now, it meant that the embarrassment was on Rin.
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But now, it means that the embarrassment's on Rin.
   
 
Either way, she had to take her clothes off and reveal herself if she needed to wipe her body.
 
Either way, she had to take her clothes off and reveal herself if she needed to wipe her body.
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(U, uuwaah...wha, what...I just said it out of impulse. Thi, this, this means that I have to strip here...show, show my naked body in front of Ichika...)
 
(U, uuwaah...wha, what...I just said it out of impulse. Thi, this, this means that I have to strip here...show, show my naked body in front of Ichika...)
   
The more she thought about it, the more she felt that it was shameful.
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The more she thought about this, the more she felt that this was shameful.
   
Seeing that even the ears had dyed red, Rin hurriedly hid inside the blanket.
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Seeing that even the ears are dyed red, Rin hurriedly hid inside the blanket.
   
 
“...”
 
“...”
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(Wh, what, wasn't that kind of gentle...)
 
(Wh, what, wasn't that kind of gentle...)
   
She shook her head around to shake that giggling expression of hers.
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She shook her head about to shake that giggling expression of hers.
   
 
(Why, why did I say such a thing...)
 
(Why, why did I say such a thing...)
   
It was already past the level of being bold.
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It's already past the level of being bold.
   
 
(I, I wasn't treated as a weirdo...)
 
(I, I wasn't treated as a weirdo...)
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No matter how shocked or lost Ichika was, he wouldn't use that as a reason to label her as weird. She knew that.
 
No matter how shocked or lost Ichika was, he wouldn't use that as a reason to label her as weird. She knew that.
   
But because this was IS Academy, the girls are as much as what the term implied. Amongst that, getting first place in affection level with Ichika would be the tough question.
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But because this is IS Academy, the girls are as much as what the term implied. Amongst that, getting first place in affection level with ichika would be the tough question.
   
(Bu, but, what is it...do, don't tell me...that idiot Ichika would treat me as someone of the opposite gender...)
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(Bu, but, what is it...do, don't tell me...that idiot Ichika would treat me as someone of the opposite gener...)
   
Rin swallowed her little expectations and anxiety with her saliva, and put her hand on her pajamas.
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Rin swallowed her little expectations and anxiety with her saliva, and she puts her hand on her pajamas.
   
 
(Uu, at least I should have some breasts...)
 
(Uu, at least I should have some breasts...)
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(More than that, what should I do...what...)
 
(More than that, what should I do...what...)
   
Tick, tick...she undid her buttons.
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Tick, tick...she undoes her buttons.
   
 
As she wasn't wearing underwear in the first place, she just undid her buttons, and her breasts were revealed.
 
As she wasn't wearing underwear in the first place, she just undid her buttons, and her breasts were revealed.
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“Do, don't, don't stand behind me like that!?”
 
“Do, don't, don't stand behind me like that!?”
   
“Why? Am I some kind of assassin?”
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“Why? Am I some assassin?”
   
 
“S-Shut up shut up shut up!!”
 
“S-Shut up shut up shut up!!”
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With her upper body naked, Rin covered her breasts and turned her back on Ichika.
 
With her upper body naked, Rin covered her breasts and turned her back on Ichika.
   
As it felt exceptionally alluring, Ichika's heart started to beat wildly.
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As this felt exceptionally alluring, Ichika's heart started to beat wildly.
   
 
However, Rin couldn't see Ichika's reaction as her back was facing him.
 
However, Rin couldn't see Ichika's reaction as her back was facing him.
   
And at the time, Rin didn't have the luxury to observe him like this now.
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And right now, Rin doesn't have the luxury to observe him like this now.
   
 
“...”
 
“...”
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Ichika and Rin didn't say anything as time passed by.
 
Ichika and Rin didn't say anything as time passed by.
   
Unlike the comfortable silence from before, it was now a delicate silence for both sides.
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Unlike the comfortable silence just now, it's now a delicate silence for both sides.
   
 
(Ahh, my back...feels so good...)
 
(Ahh, my back...feels so good...)
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“Do, done.”
 
“Do, done.”
   
Ichika's pitch felt like it was higher, as his heart was racing because of the unexpected act of Rin.
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Ichika's pitch felt like it was higher, as his heart was racing because of the unexpected act by Rin.
   
 
“...”
 
“...”
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“Tha, that's not the point, right...”
 
“Tha, that's not the point, right...”
   
Ichika was at his wits end on hearing the slight trembling in Rin's voice.
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Ichika's at his wits end on hearing the slight trembling in Rin's voice.
   
She was not someone who would say this normally.
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She's not someone who would say this normally.
   
''What's going on?'' Thinking this, he felt that he couldn't leave Rin alone like this.
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''What's going on?'' Thinking about this, he felt that he couldn't leave Rin alone like this.
   
 
“Ahh, really. I got it!”
 
“Ahh, really. I got it!”
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Keeping her back at Ichika, Rin secretly glanced behind and moved the hands covering the breasts.
 
Keeping her back at Ichika, Rin secretly glanced behind and moved the hands covering the breasts.
   
Of course, Ichika couldn't see them directly from behind.
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Of course, Ichika can't see them directly from behind.
   
 
But, Rin's face went all red as she bit her lips, since she felt embarrassed about having to reveal herself completely.
 
But, Rin's face went all red as she bit her lips, since she felt embarrassed about having to reveal herself completely.
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(He, he touched them...Ichika, he touched them, my breasts...)
 
(He, he touched them...Ichika, he touched them, my breasts...)
   
Her heart was beating so wildly it went erratic. Right now, she was worried that her heartbeat got revealed.
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Her heart was beating so wildly it went erratic. Right now, she's worried that her heartbeat's revealed.
   
 
But before Rin could get emotionally ready, Ichika's hands touched her breasts through the towel.
 
But before Rin could get emotionally ready, Ichika's hands touched her breasts through the towel.
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“Shu, shut up.”
 
“Shu, shut up.”
   
That exchange went around between Ichika and Rin as they blushed and continued with the wiping.
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That exchange went about between Ichika and Rin as they blushed and continued with the wiping.
   
 
 
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“U, un, thanks.”
 
“U, un, thanks.”
   
Rin put on her clothes again and snuggled back into the blanket. She couldn't look at Ichika in the eyes due to the embarrassment.
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Rin put on her clothes again and snuggled back into the blanket. She couldn't look at Ichika in the eyes due to embarrassment.
   
 
But at the same time Ichika was looking up at a corner of the ceiling when he was talking to Rin.
 
But at the same time Ichika was looking up at a corner of the ceiling when he was talking to Rin.
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Ichika hurriedly left the room.
 
Ichika hurriedly left the room.
   
Rin managed to take of glimpse of Ichika as he left, and he was as red as her now.
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Rin managed to take of glimpse of Ichika as he left, and he's as red as her now.
   
 
(He's blushing, which means, he realized...)
 
(He's blushing, which means, he realized...)
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With this oath of love, girl, pursue forward, and run towards the battlefield—
 
With this oath of love, girl, pursue forward, and run towards the battlefield—
 
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