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[message window="togaki" face="ali_t_2_09.png"]
 
[message window="togaki" face="ali_t_2_09.png"]
I'm in front of the Hatter Mansion's gate.[br]
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In front of the gate of the Hatter Mansion.[br]
 
I meet Blood and the others there.
 
I meet Blood and the others there.
 
[/message]
 
[/message]
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[message window="kyara" name="name_ディー.png" face="ali_t_2_09.png" voice="dad_0252.ogg"]
 
[message window="kyara" name="name_ディー.png" face="ali_t_2_09.png" voice="dad_0252.ogg"]
 
"It's Onee-san![br]
 
"It's Onee-san![br]
Onee-san, are you here to play again?"
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Onee-san, you come here to play again?"
 
[/message]
 
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[message window="kyara" name="name_ダム.png" face="ali_t_2_09.png" voice="dad_0253.ogg"]
 
[message window="kyara" name="name_ダム.png" face="ali_t_2_09.png" voice="dad_0253.ogg"]
 
"Onee-san, Onee-san![br]
 
"Onee-san, Onee-san![br]
You came here to meet us, right?"
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You come here to meet us, right?"
 
[/message]
 
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[message window="togaki" face="ali_t_2_09.png"]
 
[message window="togaki" face="ali_t_2_09.png"]
 
Dee and Dum run up to me.[br]
 
Dee and Dum run up to me.[br]
As usual, they smile innocently.
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Just like usual, they smile innocently.
 
[/message]
 
[/message]
   
   
 
[message window="togaki" face="ali_t_2_09.png"]
 
[message window="togaki" face="ali_t_2_09.png"]
Their hands are reaching out to me.
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Their hands are reaching out.
 
[/message]
 
[/message]
   
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[message window="togaki" face="ali_t_2_09.png"]
 
[message window="togaki" face="ali_t_2_09.png"]
 
I don't push them aside.[br]
 
I don't push them aside.[br]
But I avoid their hands by stepping back.
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But I avoid their hand by stepping back.
 
[/message]
 
[/message]
   

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