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β | The "Room of the Western Front" that we had been led into was a luxurious 8-tatami room, the tatami |
+ | The "Room of the Western Front" that we had been led into was a luxurious 8-tatami room, the tatami completely new. |
Aptly named, the walls of the room were decorated with vividly colored [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nishijin Nishijin], which looked like tapestries.<ref>Nishijin means 'Western Front'.</ref> |
Aptly named, the walls of the room were decorated with vividly colored [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nishijin Nishijin], which looked like tapestries.<ref>Nishijin means 'Western Front'.</ref> |
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...thought about my classmates, time flowing by. |
...thought about my classmates, time flowing by. |
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β | After thinking about this and that, it was already 9:00 at night. |
+ | After thinking about this and that, it had was already 9:00 at night. |
Looking towards the stars, I saw that they were visible in the midst of the steam, and it was a beautiful sight. This is something that would be described as 'elegant'. |
Looking towards the stars, I saw that they were visible in the midst of the steam, and it was a beautiful sight. This is something that would be described as 'elegant'. |
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Lowering my voice, I asked Reki, whose footfalls were near non-existent. |
Lowering my voice, I asked Reki, whose footfalls were near non-existent. |
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β | "Judging from the hostile's location when he sniped us, I am estimating his current location--while searching for territory advantageous for my sniping." |
+ | "Judging from the the hostile's location when he sniped us, I am estimating his current location--while searching for territory advantageous for my sniping." |
"Territory..." |
"Territory..." |