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The Dragunov sniper rifle is entirely different than the sniper rifles which only have shooting as an advantage.
 
The Dragunov sniper rifle is entirely different than the sniper rifles which only have shooting as an advantage.
   
In a hostile environment it won't receive damage, it can continuously shoot through the semi-automatic function, and also, attached to the muzzle, there's a bayonet, making it usable as a pike......it's a terrifying 'warzone' sniper rifle.
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In a hostile environment it won't receive damage, it can continuously shoot through the semi-automatic function, and also, on the peak, there's a bayonet, making it usable as a pike......it's a terrifying 'warzone' sniper rifle.
   
 
"Why are you unhappy......Reki!"
 
"Why are you unhappy......Reki!"
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This Reki, is different from the usual Reki.
 
This Reki, is different from the usual Reki.
   
This girl's nickname is 'Robot Reki'. She's always a wordless, emotionless, expressionless girl. But despite that, the Reki as of now is making me feel some inexplicable intensity, as if I'm her target.
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This girl's nickname is 'Robot Reki'. She's always a wordless, emotionless, expressionless girl. But despite that, the Reki as of now, is making me feel some inexplicable intensity, as if I am her target.
   
 
——As if, she has received some kind of order.
 
——As if, she has received some kind of order.
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"Lis-listen to me. Reki."
 
"Lis-listen to me. Reki."
   
I wanted to move my body out of her line of fire, stepping back a bit as if it was nothing.
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I wanted to move my body out of her shooting line, and stepped back a bit as if it was nothing.
   
 
"Your actions are far too contradictory. Since you want me to be part of the family, why are you pointing your gun at me? Put that down, and let's talk about this calmly. Alright?"
 
"Your actions are far too contradictory. Since you want me to be part of the family, why are you pointing your gun at me? Put that down, and let's talk about this calmly. Alright?"
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So, that's how Reki views boy-girl relationships. Well, if one had to talk about whether it was right or not, one couldn't say that it's completely wrong.
 
So, that's how Reki views boy-girl relationships. Well, if one had to talk about whether it was right or not, one couldn't say that it's completely wrong.
   
But, isn't that a ''really'' wrong way of looking at things?
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But, you, isn't that a ''really'' wrong way of looking at things?
   
I berated Reki in my heart, and in my line of sight...
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Performing a Tsukommi on Reki in my heart, in my line of sight...
   
 
<nowiki>*Whoosh*</nowiki>
 
<nowiki>*Whoosh*</nowiki>
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A leaf-brown cloth rode the wind, fluttering down.
 
A leaf-brown cloth rode the wind, fluttering down.
   
Fluttering precisely within my reach, it was the jacket that I had taken off earlier so I could clean.
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Fluttering precisely within my reach, it was the jacket that I had taken off earlier for the sake of cleaning.
   
 
I looked up at the direction that it had flown from--and there, standing on the air-conditioning unit precisely one level above the ground, a beast was looking down at me.
 
I looked up at the direction that it had flown from--and there, standing on the air-conditioning unit precisely one level above the ground, a beast was looking down at me.
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My heartbeat, a strange sound.
 
My heartbeat, a strange sound.
   
For some reason, this seems to be the sound between 'Dokin' and 'Giku. It's pretty talented. My heart, that is.<ref>'Dogun' is the SFX for a slightly harder heartbeat, in relation to 'Doki'. 'Giku' is the SFX for a surprised heartbeat.</ref>
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For some reason, this seems to be the sound between 'Dokin' and 'Giku. It's pretty talented. My heart, that is.[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume6_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_1]
   
 
"..."
 
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==Translator's Notes and References==
 
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{{Hidan no Aria Nav|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume6 Illustrations|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume6 Chapter2}}
 
{{Hidan no Aria Nav|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume6 Illustrations|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume6 Chapter2}}
 
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