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Kyouya's intention wasn't too difficult to understand.
 
Kyouya's intention wasn't too difficult to understand.
 
 
If he used a direct attack attack it would have been negated by the absolute barrier. But, if the magic was transformed into some sort of natural phenomenon it would become an indirect attack, and not fall under the influence of an absolute barrier. So, Kyouya's magic must had took advantage of this loophole.
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If he used a direct attack attack it would of been negated by the absolute barrier. But, if the magic was transformed into some sort of natural phenomenon it would become an indirect attack, and not fall under the influence of an absolute barrier. So, Kyouya's magic must had took advantage of this loophole.
 
 
If Tiana was even a little slow with her defense, the flash from the explosion would have baked her eyes, and ultra-high temperature of hot air would have caused significant injury to her head.
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If Tiana was even a little slow with her defense, the flash from the explosion would have baked her eyes, and ultra-high temperature of hot air would of caused significant injury to her head.
 
 
 
Thus, Kyouya's surprise attack would have definitely been effective.
 
Thus, Kyouya's surprise attack would have definitely been effective.
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-- The moment they walked into the elevator she naturally assumed it could be used as a ambush spot. Therefore she thought if the moment arrives they could break up elevator's roof, floor, and directly escape into the elevator shaft, or even break open the doors or wall and escape into the interior of the building.
 
-- The moment they walked into the elevator she naturally assumed it could be used as a ambush spot. Therefore she thought if the moment arrives they could break up elevator's roof, floor, and directly escape into the elevator shaft, or even break open the doors or wall and escape into the interior of the building.
 
 
But, even if they fled up or down the dragon would have just changed its angle to match their height. And even if they fled to an interior floor of the building, because of the dragon's mass and speed that too wouldn't have had any meaning.
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But, even if they fled up or down the dragon would of just changed it angle to matched their height. And even if they fled to an interior floor of the building, because of the dragon's mass and speed that too wouldn't of had any meaning.
 
 
 
Therefore, Listy instead decided to launch a protective barrier.
 
Therefore, Listy instead decided to launch a protective barrier.
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To start there were the doors to the elevator, beyond that there were the thick walls used for the facilities on the floor one after another. Not only that, in those rooms there were also various large-scale equipment.
 
To start there were the doors to the elevator, beyond that there were the thick walls used for the facilities on the floor one after another. Not only that, in those rooms there were also various large-scale equipment.
 
 
Even though they were protected with her barrier from the front of the dragon's attack, when they were thrust inside they would have received heavy damage from behind from those obstacles -- might even have been crushed to death.
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Even though they were protected with her barrier from the front of the dragon's attack, when they were thrust inside they would of received heavy damage from behind from those obstacles -- might even have been crushed to death.
 
 
 
Also the dragon struck the elevator at an acute angle, causing it to go downward.
 
Also the dragon struck the elevator at an acute angle, causing it to go downward.
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Of course - there was also the option of attacking the oncoming Dragon itself.
 
Of course - there was also the option of attacking the oncoming Dragon itself.
 
 
However, if he was unable to completely stop the dragon, herself and Akatsuki would have been flattened into patties. Still though, with Akatsuki's personality it was almost a certainty he would choose to take the enemy head-on, however dared not to do so.
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However, if he was unable to completely stop the dragon, herself and Akatsuki would of been flattened into patties. Still though, with Akatsuki's personality it was almost a certainty he would choose to take the enemy head-on, however dared not to do so.
 
 
 
....... Don't tell me it was because I decided to go with him......?
 
....... Don't tell me it was because I decided to go with him......?
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"-- Whoever the enemy is, they will be crushed."
 
"-- Whoever the enemy is, they will be crushed."
 
 
Akatsuki materialized Lævateinn, and disdainfully stared at the dragon in front his eyes. It was a about 10 meters in height, about half of its original size. Perhaps, they specially made it smaller so it to move easier indoors. Moreover, Listy's protective barrier wasn't destroyed before when it smashed into it, it seems they weren't able reproduce the absolute barrier of a higher-order life from. Otherwise, as soon as it touched her barrier, the barrier would have vanished like thin air. The reason Akatsuki decided to open a hole instead of attacking was in consideration of that possibility.
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Akatsuki materialized Lævateinn, and disdainfully stared at the dragon in front his eyes. It was a about 10 meters in height, about half of its original size. Perhaps, they specially made it smaller so it to move easier indoors. Moreover, Listy's protective barrier wasn't destroyed before when it smashed into it, it seems they weren't able reproduce the absolute barrier of a higher-order life from. Otherwise, as soon as it touched her barrier, the barrier would of vanished like thin air. The reason Akatsuki decided to open a hole instead of attacking was in consideration of that possibility.
 
 
 
So far, everything was going well.
 
So far, everything was going well.
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"-- Akatsuki!"
 
"-- Akatsuki!"
 
 
Listy Sherfied called out in a voice that was like a scream.
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Listy Sherfied called out in voice that was like scream.
 
 
 
She did so was because she saw with her own eyes Akatsuki being been taken by surprise. It happened so fast, there was no time for her to warn him.
 
She did so was because she saw with her own eyes Akatsuki being been taken by surprise. It happened so fast, there was no time for her to warn him.
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That just now was probably an attack aimed at Akatsuki. Although they only saw it for an instant, the color was different, but somehow its figure resembled Zahhak they fought in the recent ranking tournament.
 
That just now was probably an attack aimed at Akatsuki. Although they only saw it for an instant, the color was different, but somehow its figure resembled Zahhak they fought in the recent ranking tournament.
 
 
They normally would have thought that it was Hikami Kyouya's doing, but after finding out about Kaidou there was also a possibility that it was Crimson Twilight.
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They normally would of thought that it was Hikami Kyouya's doing, but after finding out about Kaidou there was also a possibility that it was Crimson Twilight.
 
 
 
Akatsuki's strength goes without saying, and Listy wasn't weak herself.
 
Akatsuki's strength goes without saying, and Listy wasn't weak herself.

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