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'''NOTE: published redux chapters ends here. There may be more on the author's blog not moved to B-T yet'''
 
 
 
===Prologue - A Matter of Faith===
 
===Prologue - A Matter of Faith===
   
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"<u>Where do you think you're going?</u>" a tranquil, feminine voice laced with holy serenity pierced straight into the turbulent mind of the ''Stormlord''.
 
"<u>Where do you think you're going?</u>" a tranquil, feminine voice laced with holy serenity pierced straight into the turbulent mind of the ''Stormlord''.
   
The breakneck flyer instantly banked into a spiraling ascent. The brutish figure climbed through the icy air as he decelerated from his godly speed. Clad in hard leather and sturdy chainmail, his bulging arms effortlessly spun a static-charged greathammer into a readying stance.
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The breakneck flyer instantly banked into a spiraling ascent. The brutish figure climbed through the icy air as he decelerated from his godly speed. Clad in hard leather and unwavering chainmail, his bulging arms effortlessly spun a static-charged greathammer into a readying stance.
   
 
The immortal warrior had yet to see the speaker who interrupted him. But even without sight he already knew the immaculate voice that entered his thoughts.
 
The immortal warrior had yet to see the speaker who interrupted him. But even without sight he already knew the immaculate voice that entered his thoughts.
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"SHOW YOURSELF!"
 
"SHOW YOURSELF!"
   
The highest clouds parted to let forth a beam of the purest light. Descending from the heavens was a woman of unearthly grace. Loose fabrics extended from her white, silken robes and long strands of pristine, silver hair floated around her thin figure, as though a sacred spirit untouchable to the soaring winds.
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The highest clouds parted to let forth a beam of the purest light. Descending from the heavens was a woman of not mere beauty but unearthly grace. Loose fabrics extending from white, silken robes and long strands of pristine, silver hair floated around her thin figure, as though a sacred spirit untouchable to the soaring winds.
   
"Yes, me," the female announced calmly as her hand raised its only 'armament' -- a long willow rod with branches sprouting out.
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"Yes, me," the female announced calmly as her hand raised its only 'armament' -- a short willow rod with branches sprouting out.
   
 
"It's been four hundred years, Sigurd. Not even a kind greeting for a once companion of the battlefield?"
 
"It's been four hundred years, Sigurd. Not even a kind greeting for a once companion of the battlefield?"
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"Evil always is and always will be, but that does not prove your conclusion as superior to our own," rebuffed the white goddess -- bodhisattva, in her own terms.
 
"Evil always is and always will be, but that does not prove your conclusion as superior to our own," rebuffed the white goddess -- bodhisattva, in her own terms.
   
"Karma through the Eightfold Path will cultivate souls of the highest discipline to oppose the tides of sin. That is my conclusion and Gautama's. It may be the opposite of Peter's 'mass conscription' approach or your trial-by-combat, but it is certainly no less proven than your own," Kannon sternly marked an end to the tangential debate before moving on. "Regardless, none of this changes our agreement that the mortal realms shall have peace -- to which, I remind you, you gave your oath."
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"Karma through the Eightfold Path is enough to oppose the tides of sin. That is my conclusion, and it is no less proven than your own," Kannon sternly marked an end to the tangential debate before moving on. "Regardless, none of this changes our agreement that the mortal realms shall have peace -- to which, I remind you, you gave your oath."
   
 
Sigurd could no longer contain himself as he barked a derisive laugh.
 
Sigurd could no longer contain himself as he barked a derisive laugh.
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This time, it was Kannon who revealed her true emotion, finally closed her eyes in a faint sigh:
 
This time, it was Kannon who revealed her true emotion, finally closed her eyes in a faint sigh:
   
"Would you rather witness the loss of twenty thousand, or the death of ''twenty million''? If we Worldwalkers all ripped the treaty and freely imposed our conflicting views on the world through might of magic, then just what do you suppose will happen?"
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"Would you rather witness the loss of twenty thousand, or the death of ''twenty million''? If we Worldwalkers all ripped the treaty and freely imposed our conflicting views on the world through might of magic, just what do you suppose will happen?"
   
The First Generation Worldwalkers had fought alongside the Dragonlords in the Dragon-Demon War. They partook in the Archons' Grand Coalition Offensive which cut deep into the Abyssal Realms. Even the least gifted survivor among them could rend armies and cleave mountains. Those most able -- like Kannon the ''Grand Strategist'', the ''Wishgiver'', the ''Thousand Arms'', et cetera -- could harness enough power to alter the fabric of reality across an entire plane of existence.
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The 1st Generation Worldwalkers had fought alongside the Dragonlords in the Dragon-Demon War. They partook in the Archons' Grand Coalition Offensive which cut deep into the Abyssal Realms. Even the least gifted survivor among them could rend armies and cleave mountains. Those most able -- like Kannon the ''Grand Strategist'', the ''Wishgiver'', the ''Thousand Arms'', et cetera -- could harness enough power to alter the fabric of reality across an entire plane of existence.
   
Far from satisfied by mere ''logic'', Sigurd spat open his mouth to retort. But the white lady was not yet finished, and she enforced his silence with unnerving composure:
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Far from satisfied by mere ''logic'', Sigurd spat open his mouth to retort. But the white lady was not yet finished, and she soon enforced his silence with unnerving composure:
   
 
"Your head isn't there just to call lightning and smash hammers, ''Vanguard''," Kannon berated him just like the old days. "Your kin may not win against ''Marshal'' Peter's followers on the continent, but there are better paths to victory than stubborn resistance."
 
"Your head isn't there just to call lightning and smash hammers, ''Vanguard''," Kannon berated him just like the old days. "Your kin may not win against ''Marshal'' Peter's followers on the continent, but there are better paths to victory than stubborn resistance."
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"I'll be staying around to advise Gwendolyn when she comes back, since this is her first time..."
 
"I'll be staying around to advise Gwendolyn when she comes back, since this is her first time..."
   
It took Sigurd a moment to remember the name: Gwendolyn was a Third Generation Worldwalker, a 'youngling' not even half a millennium old who went by the nicknames ''Arbor Sanctum'' and ''Faerie Sword''.
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It took Sigurd a moment to remember the name: Gwendolyn was a 3rd Generation Worldwalker, a 'youngling' not even half a millennium old who went by the nicknames ''Arbor Sanctum'' and ''Faerie Sword''.
   
 
"--Unlike your homeland, it shall not be long before her birthplace bears witness to the carnage of invasion and war."
 
"--Unlike your homeland, it shall not be long before her birthplace bears witness to the carnage of invasion and war."

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