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"It has been so long since I last visited Suruga's water shrine."
 
"It has been so long since I last visited Suruga's water shrine."
   
Akigase Rikka was walking alone in the water shrine. This place's abundant body of blue water was crisscrossed by a thread-like network of paths three meters wide, allowing people to walk without getting wet.
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Akigase Rikka was walking alone in the water shrine. This place's abundant body of blue water was criss-crossed by a thread-like network of paths three meters wide, allowing people to walk without getting wet.
   
 
Only personnel involved with mystic powers or Legions were allowed to enter water shrines.
 
Only personnel involved with mystic powers or Legions were allowed to enter water shrines.
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Flying in the air were three wyverns, a type of retainer beast used by many countries. Their common characteristics were "a lizard-like appearance except with wings growing out of their shoulders" and "being roughly two to three times the size of a horse."
 
Flying in the air were three wyverns, a type of retainer beast used by many countries. Their common characteristics were "a lizard-like appearance except with wings growing out of their shoulders" and "being roughly two to three times the size of a horse."
   
However, every country's wyvern variant had its own unique color.
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However, every country's variant of wyvern had its own unique color.
   
Imperial Japan's wyverns were blue. The wyverns currently in the air were white.
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Imperial Japan's wyverns were blue. The wyverns in the air currently were white.
   
White was the color of the British Empire's wyverns.
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White was the color the British Empire's wyverns.
   
 
"So British retainer beasts have trespassed all the way here..." lamented the princess gloomily.
 
"So British retainer beasts have trespassed all the way here..." lamented the princess gloomily.
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Hatsune's reveal was startling, but it was possible to find the underlying logic.
 
Hatsune's reveal was startling, but it was possible to find the underlying logic.
   
The intimate relationship between the Tachibana clan and Princess Fujinomiya Shiori was definitely quite similar to the deep bond between 'a Sengoku-period general and a secret ninja clan.'
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The intimate relationship between the Tachibana clan and Princess Fujinomiya Shiori was definitely quite similar to the deep bond between 'a Sengoku-era general and a secret ninja clan.'
   
 
Even the domestic helpers at Black Lily Dorm were all older women from the Tachibana clan.
 
Even the domestic helpers at Black Lily Dorm were all older women from the Tachibana clan.

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