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===Chapter 2: Burning City===
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===Chapter 2 - Burning City===
   
 
Not too long ago, inside Harpe.
 
Not too long ago, inside Harpe.
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It seemed that she also gasped for breath.
 
It seemed that she also gasped for breath.
   
Layfon was relieved, and then looked at the ground.
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Layfon was relieved, and the looked at the ground.
   
 
Helped by the force of the wind, they fell near the palace.
 
Helped by the force of the wind, they fell near the palace.
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However, the next move had already been prepared.
 
However, the next move had already been prepared.
   
External-type Kei, Composite Blast variant - Flame Reversal, Flame Tempered Edge.
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External-type Kei, Composite Blast variant - Flame Reverse - Flame Weight Tempered Blade.
   
 
The blade had been stopped, and the slash of Flame Cut had been invalidated.
 
The blade had been stopped, and the slash of Flame Cut had been invalidated.
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Taking advantage of the gap of time in which Lævateinn raised her head to look up, Layfon moved back.
 
Taking advantage of the gap of time in which Lævateinn raised her head to look up, Layfon moved back.
   
The countless flaming blades formed by Kei all caught the immobile Lævateinn, exploding one after another.
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The countless flaming blades formed by Kei all caught the unmoving Lævateinn, exploding one after another.
   
 
Layfon didn't stay in one spot to watch the outcome of this attack.
 
Layfon didn't stay in one spot to watch the outcome of this attack.
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He only retreated with all his power.
 
He only retreated with all his power.
   
Using the same methods to destroy the thorns that he had done just before, he returned to the place where he had originally been.
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Using the same methods to destroy the thorns that had done<!-- "done"? Methods that had worked to destroy thorns before? Or thorns that had done some thing? --> just before, he returned to the place where he had originally been.
   
 
Savaris stood there like the past, welcoming Layfon with a familiar smile.
 
Savaris stood there like the past, welcoming Layfon with a familiar smile.
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"Using all your might to run, huh."
 
"Using all your might to run, huh."
   
"Please say something like 'I understand my current power'."
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"Please say something like 'I understand my current power'".
   
 
Layfon calmly replied to Savaris' ridicule.
 
Layfon calmly replied to Savaris' ridicule.
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"Die!"
 
"Die!"
   
External-type Kei Composite Blast variant, Compound Sendan - Kagome.
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External-type Kei, Composite Blast variant - Compound Sendan - Cage.
   
 
The strikes that ran up and down assembling something like a net rushed out, wiping out the group of thorns.
 
The strikes that ran up and down assembling something like a net rushed out, wiping out the group of thorns.
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"What are you joking about!"
 
"What are you joking about!"
   
External-type Kei Composite Blast variant, Flame Ignition.
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External-type Kei, Composite Blast variant - Blazing Inferno.
   
 
The flame that had once disappeared once again covered the blade, spewing out from inside Lævateinn's hand.
 
The flame that had once disappeared once again covered the blade, spewing out from inside Lævateinn's hand.
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'Has it become close to humankind at all?'
 
'Has it become close to humankind at all?'
   
Unexpectedly, Layfon thought of 'Lev B's words. Though he hadn't heard that sentence directly, it still echoed in his mind.
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Unexpectedly, Layfon thought of 'Vati B's words. Though he hadn't heard that sentence directly, it still echoed in his mind.
   
 
"This is necessary!"
 
"This is necessary!"
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He pointed the blade at her.
 
He pointed the blade at her.
   
Psyharden Technique Composite Blast variant, Flame Strike.
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Psyharden Technique, Composite Blast Variant - Flame Draw.
   
 
A thrusting flash.
 
A thrusting flash.
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"You!"
 
"You!"
   
"I am Lævateinn. Nano-Celluloid Interface 1 Lævateinn. The first Nano-Celluloid, the Master Alchemist Soho Ignasis's weapon against the Aurora Particles."
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"I am Lævateinn. Nano-Celluloid Interface 1 Lævateinn. The first Nano-Celluloid, the Master Alchemist Sufang Ignasis's weapon against the Aurora Particles."
   
 
"Vati!"
 
"Vati!"
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Though Felli was an unrelated person, after Elsmau had explained for her, everyone had received her. Possessing Delbone's heritage as well as being the Psychokinesist that Layfon had brought made others have faith in her.
 
Though Felli was an unrelated person, after Elsmau had explained for her, everyone had received her. Possessing Delbone's heritage as well as being the Psychokinesist that Layfon had brought made others have faith in her.
   
Ignoring Delbone for now, the fact that Layfon was still honored by everyone even now made Felli have mixed feelings.
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Ignoring Delbone for now, the fact that Layfon was still honored by everyone even now made Layfon<!-- Layfon? From the context it looks like this should probably be Felli? --> have mixed feelings.
   
 
Once she thought of the possibility that Grendan would accept him, Felli was happy while worried at the same time.
 
Once she thought of the possibility that Grendan would accept him, Felli was happy while worried at the same time.
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"But if we don't take off this outer clothing then we can't do anything."
 
"But if we don't take off this outer clothing then we can't do anything."
   
Haia didn't know why but he rather liked Troyatte's metaphor, so he tried using it, but as expected he still shook his head, feeling a little embarrassed.
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Haia didn't know why he but he rather liked Troyatte's metaphor, so he tried using it, but as expected he still shook his head, feeling a little embarrassed.
   
 
"But......"
 
"But......"
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In the end the beam of light was completely destroyed, and reaching the head......
 
In the end the beam of light was completely destroyed, and reaching the head......
   
"Falna, Lucia......"
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"Faluna, Lucia......"
   
 
His low words were drowned out by the sounds of his Kei technique and the destruction of the giant's head, and then disappeared.
 
His low words were drowned out by the sounds of his Kei technique and the destruction of the giant's head, and then disappeared.
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Haia who had shouted out once again released a Kei technique.
 
Haia who had shouted out once again released a Kei technique.
   
External-type Kei Variant, Modified Spirit Sealing Thrust.
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External-type Kei Variant, 封心突·改.
   
 
A thrust that unleashed the power of his whole body condensed into a spear of Kei at the tip of his blade.
 
A thrust that unleashed the power of his whole body condensed into a spear of Kei at the tip of his blade.
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Kanaris abandoned what she had been doing up to now, using a new Kei technique towards the giant sphere that was in the process of forming.
 
Kanaris abandoned what she had been doing up to now, using a new Kei technique towards the giant sphere that was in the process of forming.
   
External-type Kei Variant - Ritual Dance, Kiyomi’s Jealousy
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External-type Kei Variant, 舞曲·妒炎清姬
   
 
The two rapiers that twirled through the air didn't make any sound.
 
The two rapiers that twirled through the air didn't make any sound.
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It was probably because it was rather weak in the process of forming, so its speed of formation was slowed down, but it hadn't been melted. Kanaris used that interval to close in on the sphere in a moment.
 
It was probably because it was rather weak in the process of forming, so its speed of formation was slowed down, but it hadn't been melted. Kanaris used that interval to close in on the sphere in a moment.
   
External-type Kei Variant, Ritual Dance of the Oracle.
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External-type Kei Variant, Divine Dance.
   
The surface of the sphere that had been scorched by the heat from Kiyomi's Jealousy was assaulted by rapid slashes.
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The surface of the sphere that had been scorched by the heat from 妒炎清姬 was assaulted by rapid slashes.
   
 
The sound of cuts only came after this.
 
The sound of cuts only came after this.
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She felt remorse at her uselessness, only being able to support from behind in this kind of tense moment. Kanaris used her working eye to gaze at the giant, waiting for the battle plan to enter its final stage.
 
She felt remorse at her uselessness, only being able to support from behind in this kind of tense moment. Kanaris used her working eye to gaze at the giant, waiting for the battle plan to enter its final stage.
   
Haia used the Kei spear of the Modified Spirit Sealing Thrust to attack the giant while desperately searching for that opportunity.
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Haia used the Kei spear of 封心突·改 to attack the giant while desperately searching for that opportunity.
   
 
"It's not that simple......"
 
"It's not that simple......"
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The actions of the other Heaven's Blade successors also changed. Claribel and Kanaris who had switched to a support role after being injured, Haia, Savaris, Troyatte, and Barmelin all moved.
 
The actions of the other Heaven's Blade successors also changed. Claribel and Kanaris who had switched to a support role after being injured, Haia, Savaris, Troyatte, and Barmelin all moved.
   
But, the giant could see through the Heaven's Blade successors' intents.
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But, the giant couldn't see through the Heaven's Blade successors' intents.<!-- Couldn't? The following reaction looks like it could? -->
   
 
A sound like an earthquake rang out from the giant's body.
 
A sound like an earthquake rang out from the giant's body.
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Other than the part of his vision that he was focusing on, everything else slowly disappeared in this condition of instantaneous speed, and Haia's blade flew towards the giant's hardening skin, being swung with the pressure produced by this speed.
 
Other than the part of his vision that he was focusing on, everything else slowly disappeared in this condition of instantaneous speed, and Haia's blade flew towards the giant's hardening skin, being swung with the pressure produced by this speed.
   
Combined Internal and External Kei variant - Yaksha's Charge.
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Combined Internal and External Kei variant, Yaksha's Charge.
   
 
Haia set out from the giant's fingers, passed the arm, chest, abdomen, heading straight for the shoulder. The hardening skin of the giant wasn't enough to block Haia's slash. An intense Kei light flooded from the cut path that appeared after his dash.
 
Haia set out from the giant's fingers, passed the arm, chest, abdomen, heading straight for the shoulder. The hardening skin of the giant wasn't enough to block Haia's slash. An intense Kei light flooded from the cut path that appeared after his dash.
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Putting all of his strength into his laughter, putting his so-called love for battle into it, Savaris quietly accepted his consciousness gradually being dyed red.
 
Putting all of his strength into his laughter, putting his so-called love for battle into it, Savaris quietly accepted his consciousness gradually being dyed red.
 
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==Translator's Notes and References==

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