Editing Ancient Magic Arc Volume 1: Chapter 1

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"I don't have the position to speak with the princess."
 
"I don't have the position to speak with the princess."
   
She felt anger bubbling up inside her. Everyone had always avoided her because she was the princess, but him.......... he always made her feel like she was a normal child, it was probably the biggest reason she fell in love with him. But now.......... he was going to avoid her for the same reasons everybody else had? She couldn't help it, she lost control. She felt...... She felt..... What was it that she felt?
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She felt anger bubbling up inside her. Everyone had always avoided her because she was the princess, but him.......... he always made her feel like she was a normal child, it was probably the biggest reason she fell in love with him. But now.......... he was going to avoid her for the same reasons everybody else had? She couldn't help it, she lost control, the tears started pouring out of her eyes as she shouted at him.
   
 
"Why Toma!? It has been 6 years since we last spoke or met with each other! Why did you always avoid me for 6 whole years!? Do you even care about me anymore!?"
 
"Why Toma!? It has been 6 years since we last spoke or met with each other! Why did you always avoid me for 6 whole years!? Do you even care about me anymore!?"
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"I'm such an idiot."
 
"I'm such an idiot."
   
I whisper to myself, as I sat against this wall, allowing my tears to flow down my face. It's been a while since I cried like this. I thought my heart was already hard enough that I didn't feel this kind of pain anymore. Yet, somewhere deep down I was relieved I was still capable of feeling it.
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I whisper to myself, as I sat against this wall, allowing my tears to flow down my face. It's been a while since I cried like this. I thought my heart was already hard enough that I didn't feel this kind of intense pain anymore. Yet, somewhere deep down I was relieved I was still capable of feeling it.
   
 
After a while, I heard someone else heading to the door. Before the person could catch me there, I ran off and started heading home.
 
After a while, I heard someone else heading to the door. Before the person could catch me there, I ran off and started heading home.
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I shake my head and begin to remember our time as children.
 
I shake my head and begin to remember our time as children.
   
"Those times were really fun. We played a lot together, but when afternoon came we went our separate ways."
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"Those times were really fun. We played a lot together, but when afternoon came went our separate ways."
   
 
Even if I didn't know much about him then, I didn't care. He was always so kind to me, he always played whatever I wanted with me. However, as the years went by, he slowly started to spend less time with me. 6 years ago is when he finally stopped altogether. He stopped talking to me and whenever I would try to approach him he would start to avoid me.
 
Even if I didn't know much about him then, I didn't care. He was always so kind to me, he always played whatever I wanted with me. However, as the years went by, he slowly started to spend less time with me. 6 years ago is when he finally stopped altogether. He stopped talking to me and whenever I would try to approach him he would start to avoid me.
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"How can you even say something like that! How could you just throw away a friendship like that!? Did it really mean so little to you!? Did I really mean so little to you!?"
 
"How can you even say something like that! How could you just throw away a friendship like that!? Did it really mean so little to you!? Did I really mean so little to you!?"
   
He stayed silent, staring at the ground. Seeing that, she felt all kinds of intense emotions fighting in her heart.
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He stayed silent, staring at the ground. Seeing that, she felt all kinds of intense emotions fighting in her heart. Due to these emotions, tears, once again, slowly rolled down her face.
   
 
"Do you hate me that much!?"
 
"Do you hate me that much!?"

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