ばか！バカ！　馬鹿ー月！

Taking my eyes off the steaming Haruhi, I turned to look at Nagato who seems to be wearing opacity optical camouflage.

Is opacity the correct word to use?

Here's the actual text...

不透明光学迷彩

And from WWWJDIC...

不透明 【ふとうめい】 (adj-na,n) opacity; (P); EP
光学 【こうがく】 (n) optics; (P); EP
迷彩 【めいさい】 (n) camouflage; disguise; (P); EP

I'm pretty sure this is supposed to mean some kind of Invisibility Cloak... so it's like a "camouflage to hide the visibility of of opaque objects." So "opacity optical camouflage" would be like "optical camouflage for your opacity" or something. Anyway, if you can think of a better wording, feel free

I think "opaque optical camouflage" might be a better way to translate this.

GDsMDDLFNGR wrote:Here's the actual text...

不透明光学迷彩

And from WWWJDIC...

不透明 【ふとうめい】 (adj-na,n) opacity; (P); EP
光学 【こうがく】 (n) optics; (P); EP
迷彩 【めいさい】 (n) camouflage; disguise; (P); EP

I'm pretty sure this is supposed to mean some kind of Invisibility Cloak... so it's like a "camouflage to hide the visibility of of opaque objects." So "opacity optical camouflage" would be like "optical camouflage for your opacity" or something. Anyway, if you can think of a better wording, feel free

I guess if it's taken as 'opaque' it could be modifying the standard 'invisibility' optical camo concept to some sort of optically generated image or pattern that hides the user rather than rendering them see-through or the like.

Still, I'd personally just cut the word out. Optical camo already says that she's hidden by optical manipulation, adding the qualifier just seems to cause confusion. Such as I am feeling now.

Wait, nevermind, maybe it just refers to an effect on the user's opacity- like turning them transparent. That fits the usual conceptualization of optical camo, at least.

As I was going to ask what it was again, I noticed that Nagato was still naively following my command.

"......You can move now."

"Okay."

Slipping her hand down, Nagato looked intently at the materializing giant kamadouma. The dark brown benjo ko-orogi was settling down on a spot several meters away from us.

Noticing this passage, I must say one thing, "Okay" is way too informal a word for Yuki's personality, I tend to see her using very abstract and sophisticated, almost scientific-like words, for her monosyllabic replies. Just my two cents as a self-proclaimed Yuki-nut. Maybe "understood", or "I see" would be more appropriate.

I had wanted to edit as I write this, but it seems the wiki server's very slow at the moment.

i like the word "affirmative" makes her seem more formal, for such an important situation, while "I see" is her "informal" way.

(^^)