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Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:46 pm
by larethian
according to Kadi

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 10:59 am
by Kadi
It should be a nickname. One step short of "Lienchen".

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:08 am
by Cosmic Eagle
BTW Lare...what is the name you use for the Entolios? Want to keep it uniform throughout...

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:28 am
by larethian
see here. :D

also, try to use italics for monologue and flashbacks. I'll look over it when I have time, so don't worry too much about making mistakes, though it will help if you can keep to the format guidelines. :D

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 9:26 am
by Cosmic Eagle
了解しました

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:21 pm
by Mystes
Is it me, or sometimes the 'l's in some name sound weird. Entolio or Pestlo, for example.

And also, good job, Lare.

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:07 pm
by Reiki
recently saw the anime adaptation of this novel and I did not find interesting (it was so boring for me to leave it in chapter 1 ._.) the plot is not bad but not enough to keep reading, according to my point of view -.-".

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:43 am
by Darklor
Reiki wrote:recently saw the anime adaptation of this novel and I did not find interesting (it was so boring for me to leave it in chapter 1 ._.) the plot is not bad but not enough to keep reading, according to my point of view -.-".
So you found both the anime and the novel series boring?

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 11:25 am
by Kadi
Can someone change the title of this thread so it shows that it's about the teaser? Or close it altogether so that the discussion can take place in the main thread and people don't confuse the two threads?

(Or tell me how to change thread names, then I'll do it...)

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:45 pm
by larethian
Reiki wrote:recently saw the anime adaptation of this novel and I did not find interesting (it was so boring for me to leave it in chapter 1 ._.) the plot is not bad but not enough to keep reading, according to my point of view -.-".
that's too bad. for you of course :D

I've merged the topics but the polls don't get merged :(

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 9:24 pm
by ShinnKamiyra
Reiki wrote:recently saw the anime adaptation of this novel and I did not find interesting (it was so boring for me to leave it in chapter 1 ._.) the plot is not bad but not enough to keep reading, according to my point of view -.-".
Boring, huh? Well it's your call, but that's a real shame, it is. -Nod nod-

In any case, it's my humble opinion that you can't judge a story just by reading a single chapter of it, don't you think? You're going to miss out on a whole lot of awesome stories doing that.

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 6:08 am
by ShadowZeroHeart
ShinnKamiyra wrote:
Reiki wrote:recently saw the anime adaptation of this novel and I did not find interesting (it was so boring for me to leave it in chapter 1 ._.) the plot is not bad but not enough to keep reading, according to my point of view -.-".
Boring, huh? Well it's your call, but that's a real shame, it is. -Nod nod-

In any case, it's my humble opinion that you can't judge a story just by reading a single chapter of it, don't you think? You're going to miss out on a whole lot of awesome stories doing that.
I agree. Most novels would need at least 2 volumes to determine its true worth.

First volume to grab attention and interest, second to prove its development. Of course, there are exceptions, but usually 2~3 volumes are needed to tell for a series, unless it failed so miserably.

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 6:21 am
by Cosmic Eagle
Reiki wrote:recently saw the anime adaptation of this novel and I did not find interesting (it was so boring for me to leave it in chapter 1 ._.) the plot is not bad but not enough to keep reading, according to my point of view -.-".
Honestly? This series takes time to build. If you want shit to happen fast.....I suggest you drop it. Because the first important stuff only happens in vol 2 and doesn't get really explained until 5 onwards.

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 9:04 am
by larethian
ShinnKamiyra wrote:
Reiki wrote:recently saw the anime adaptation of this novel and I did not find interesting (it was so boring for me to leave it in chapter 1 ._.) the plot is not bad but not enough to keep reading, according to my point of view -.-".
Boring, huh? Well it's your call, but that's a real shame, it is. -Nod nod-

In any case, it's my humble opinion that you can't judge a story just by reading a single chapter of it, don't you think? You're going to miss out on a whole lot of awesome stories doing that.
ShadowZeroHeart wrote:I agree. Most novels would need at least 2 volumes to determine its true worth.

First volume to grab attention and interest, second to prove its development. Of course, there are exceptions, but usually 2~3 volumes are needed to tell for a series, unless it failed so miserably.
Cosmic Eagle wrote:
Reiki wrote:recently saw the anime adaptation of this novel and I did not find interesting (it was so boring for me to leave it in chapter 1 ._.) the plot is not bad but not enough to keep reading, according to my point of view -.-".
Honestly? This series takes time to build. If you want shit to happen fast.....I suggest you drop it. Because the first important stuff only happens in vol 2 and doesn't get really explained until 5 onwards.
we must also try to understand most people who don't read light novels don't understand this and aren't able recognize the gems in the LN pool aside from the top sellers or most popular stuff. besides, most people prefer moe or harems to real stories these days. :D

Re: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi

Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 9:45 am
by Cosmic Eagle
hell I'm an LN addict and I usually browse a title that catches my eye from at least the 4th volume on for good reason....It's rare you get stuff like HakoMari which is gripping throughout.