lostotaku wrote:interesting series, I am really like the mc of this one . I have not read any other works by this author but it has got me curious
larethian wrote:Only browsed through v2. Got to sleep as I need to wake up early tomorrow. Bat-shit crazy things already happening in volume 2! Can't wait to read this volume properly for crying out loud!
V2 Pre-spoiler (please do not reply without spoiler tags if discussing spoiler):
Spoiler! :
Gunjou got the Labyrinth disease in v2!! And she's rank 42! Man, things are moving fast!
Kiri stabs Shinnosuke in the chest from behind towards the end of volume, despite the fact that it was Shinnosuke who asked Kiri for help to raid Gunjou-labyrinth. And time limit goes up. Last line: Gunjou starts turning into an Eternal Labyrinth!!
Spoiler! :
... wow this series seems like it might run out of material fast. either way cant wait
Running out of material fast? He wants this series to be bigger than Denyuuden haha.
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice)
Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2014 4:56 pm
by lostotaku
larethian wrote:
Running out of material fast? He wants this series to be bigger than Denyuuden haha.
...me unsure of what this "Denyuuden" is, looks at project page - Jaw drops...
um ok, full steam ahead then ?
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice)
Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2014 2:52 pm
by Mors
The first volume was awesome!... I hadn't noticed the author initially, but when I did, I thought no wonder - Denyuuden is, like, my favourite LN of all time.
Read the spoiler for v2 and... I wish I hadn't. Wtf is author trying to do, I can't even imagine lol.
Bet it's gonna be awesome.
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice)
Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2014 6:50 am
by elkin
EDIT: also, genuinely curious to know what some of the curses read like in Japanese... any chance you could put up one or two?
Just noticed that this piece of dialogue is meant to rhyme, maybe could make a minor tweak? Made it so both lines have the same no of syllables as well.
Spoiler! :
Original
"...... Ha-ha, reveling in their youth, fools aren't they?"
Suggestion
"...... Ha-ha, reveling in their youth, what fools, ain't that the truth?"
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice)
Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2014 9:11 am
by larethian
elkin wrote:EDIT: also, genuinely curious to know what some of the curses read like in Japanese... any chance you could put up one or two?
Just noticed that this piece of dialogue is meant to rhyme, maybe could make a minor tweak? Made it so both lines have the same no of syllables as well.
Spoiler! :
Original
"...... Ha-ha, reveling in their youth, fools aren't they?"
Suggestion
"...... Ha-ha, reveling in their youth, what fools, ain't that the truth?"
The source does not exactly rhyme. TBH, I don't even get why he uses the word 'rhyme'. But your suggestion sounds good, so I'll take it thanks
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice)
Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2014 10:07 am
by elkin
larethian wrote:
elkin wrote:EDIT: also, genuinely curious to know what some of the curses read like in Japanese... any chance you could put up one or two?
Just noticed that this piece of dialogue is meant to rhyme, maybe could make a minor tweak? Made it so both lines have the same no of syllables as well.
Spoiler! :
Original
"...... Ha-ha, reveling in their youth, fools aren't they?"
Suggestion
"...... Ha-ha, reveling in their youth, what fools, ain't that the truth?"
The source does not exactly rhyme. TBH, I don't even get why he uses the word 'rhyme'. But your suggestion sounds good, so I'll take it thanks
Lol I see, well, glad you liked it.
(You've made me feel like translating again...)
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice)
Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2014 11:56 am
by Reaper_Phoenix
It was great. The moral dilemma of killing one innocent to save many and those that are profiteering on the situation. The characters were also interesting. I hope this LN would continue to be translated.
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice) General Discussion
Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2014 7:57 pm
by li_er
O_O!!
This is so great.
Shinnosuke's personality is so nice and the story is interesting.
Especially towards the end. It's so great~~!!!
And Yayoi-chan is so cute~ *___*
Thanks a lot for translating this, Larethian!!!
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice) General Discussion
Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 10:44 am
by Zuruumi
Spoiler! :
Yeah, well, I kind of expected this to happen considering that this is the same author as the one who wrote the Kuro Usagi series, though I might have been a bit surprised (by the way I also considered his magic failing and her falling into comma or something like that quite a valid possibility, though it might also happen in the future). Anyway, do you mean by running out of matter that all the characters will die?
Anyway, is this just my opinin or does this writer really like seriously depressing situations full of despair?
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice) General Discussion
Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2014 1:14 am
by chancs
project approved by Oni
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice) General Discussion
Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2014 8:44 am
by Murtadha Qahtan
i had planned to read this novel later
but i couldn't control my self after reading others opinion about it
so ..... yah i finished it
it's amazing
thanks for translating it
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice) General Discussion
Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2014 9:09 am
by DarknessMetal08
This was a great read when I get the chance I have to read some of the other works by the author. I can't wait to see where the author takes this. Thanks for translating it.
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice)
Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2014 5:00 pm
by estuardo1188
lostotaku wrote:interesting series, I am really like the mc of this one . I have not read any other works by this author but it has got me curious
larethian wrote:Only browsed through v2. Got to sleep as I need to wake up early tomorrow. Bat-shit crazy things already happening in volume 2! Can't wait to read this volume properly for crying out loud!
V2 Pre-spoiler (please do not reply without spoiler tags if discussing spoiler):
Spoiler! :
Gunjou got the Labyrinth disease in v2!! And she's rank 42! Man, things are moving fast!
Kiri stabs Shinnosuke in the chest from behind towards the end of volume, despite the fact that it was Shinnosuke who asked Kiri for help to raid Gunjou-labyrinth. And time limit goes up. Last line: Gunjou starts turning into an Eternal Labyrinth!!
Spoiler! :
... wow this series seems like it might run out of material fast. either way cant wait
WOW... this is really amazing!!
I think this series is not gonna end so soon, but the end will be near when they raid the Apocalypse labyrinth (obviously cause the title of the novel )... at least is how I imagine things going on.
I hope the author gets and sets more crazy ideas... haha At least for us that sure will be great!
And yeah... cant wait!
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice) General Discussion
Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2014 1:20 pm
by Zuruumi
No, well considering this author it is quite possible that in the moment when everybody expects the series to end the "Alice" dissapears and we are back (even a bit before) the starting line, than main hero and the couple of still surviving teammates (most got heavily damaged in their futil fight in Alice´s Maze) are gonna look for her . Or something even more warped. He appears to like dark twists.
Re: Mokushiroku Arisu (Apocalypse Alice) General Discussion
. I have not read any other works by this author but it has got me curious
)... at least is how I imagine things going on. 
haha At least for us that sure will be great!