Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

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How did you find the quality of translation?

Great!
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89%
Okay but lacking a nice flow
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7%
Some awkward lines but okay
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4%
Quite rough with terrible flow
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Ahhh!!! The grammar is killing me!
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oh my gosh i read the first chapter of the manga and it was pretty good abd then i found out about the light novel and it was erven better. I really like this novel this will be another one that i will follow please keep; up the good work becvause man you guys really out do your selves sometimes and i just got to say thank you for this series you guys do because they are really good again keep up the good work and please give us more of this series :D and also please post my replay's becausde they dont get posted for some reasdon when i submit them is it my computer :?: :lol: :D
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yoh wrote:oh my gosh i read the first chapter of the manga and it was pretty good abd then i found out about the light novel and it was erven better. I really like this novel this will be another one that i will follow please keep; up the good work becvause man you guys really out do your selves sometimes and i just got to say thank you for this series you guys do because they are really good again keep up the good work and please give us more of this series :D and also please post my replay's becausde they dont get posted for some reasdon when i submit them is it my computer :?: :lol: :D
Nope. There's nothing wrong with your computer. Every thread (okay not ever1 of them) has moderators who are responsible for stopping invalid posts. So for the proper governence all posts are required to get approval from the moderators. That is why it takes time for the posts to be on threads. But this doesn't apply to all.
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I'll read through and try my best to proofread.

As for this sentence
Kamito grabbed Claire's hand and stood up. Touching each others' soft skin, *Doki* a heart beat, but he showed no vexed expression

Does it sound alright if rewritten as
Kamito grabbed Claire's hand, *Doki* a heart beat from contact with each others' soft skin, yet he showed no vexed expression as he stood up.

Correct me if my corrections are wrong. thanks >_>
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Announcement!

精霊使いの剣舞9 クロス・ファイア
2012年11月22日発売

Blade Dance Volume 9 is planned for release on the 22nd of November 2012.

The title is 'Cross Fire'.
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florza wrote:Announcement!

精霊使いの剣舞9 クロス・ファイア
2012年11月22日発売

Blade Dance Volume 9 is planned for release on the 22nd of November 2012.

The title is 'Cross Fire'.
Thanks for the info :mrgreen:
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Huh florza? Did you just change your avatear? That girl look likes Liliana or Saber from Fate/Stay night though
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Main heroine from Demiurge of Genesis.

But anyway, they haven't revealed the cover page for V9 :(
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florza wrote:Main heroine from Demiurge of Genesis.

But anyway, they haven't revealed the cover page for V9 :(
That would have been a spoiler :D
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KuroiHikari wrote:ArchmageXin, the source you use for the front part of chapter 7 isn't precise. There're lines missing based on the 3-page worth of text that I've gone though. And, the meaning is off as well for some lines. Which source are you using?

The diff for 2 pages of text: http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index ... did=192386
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chancs wrote:
ArchmageXin wrote:Major Spoiler from volume 6-Restia's wish from three years ago was-
Spoiler! :
assassinate all 5 elemental lord. No wonder the damn thing went wrong
I read
Spoiler! :
Killing the Spirit King
Chancs, it's Elemental Lord. The kanji is literally Spirit King. Most likely your source was someone who only read the Chinese translations, since those things use the kanji instead of the furigana (The English reading). And the whole thing was stupid, who the heck asks that of the ones who are granting the wish?

Also: Anyone else notice the similarity between Kamito and Kirito (SAO)? Kazehaya Kamito/Kirigaya Kazuto.
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Same initials. In V6 Kamito pretty much shows off Starburst Stream. And then, it is also revealed in the volume that he's ambidextrous. He's going to end up dual wielding Est and Restia :D
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florza wrote:
Chancs, it's Elemental Lord. The kanji is literally Spirit King. Most likely your source was someone who only read the Chinese translations, since those things use the kanji instead of the furigana (The English reading). And the whole thing was stupid, who the heck asks that of the ones who are granting the wish?

Also: Anyone else notice the similarity between Kamito and Kirito (SAO)? Kazehaya Kamito/Kirigaya Kazuto.
Spoiler! :
Same initials. In V6 Kamito pretty much shows off Starburst Stream. And then, it is also revealed in the volume that he's ambidextrous. He's going to end up dual wielding Est and Restia :D
Well...there r many kinds of people in the world :lol: :lol:

Kamito dual wielding Est and Restia will be a grand moment 8)
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Certain Chinese sources, like Skyfire, are known to have missing sentences. lightnovel.cn might be a better choice, since it is the source of many "sources".
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Don't think missing sentences were the problem.... Just that Chinese readers might not be the best name/noun translators...

Having finished V7, I have to say Kamito is severely OP. And that there isn't any volume that develops Rinslet or Claire yet.

V2 = Fianna, V3 = Ellis, V5 = Est, V6 = Restia (Her story still has much much more to tell, though), V7 = Fianna, the rest are pretty spread out and not so specific.
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how much longer untill us fans know whats going to happan i just love this series. :?: :!:
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Done by self for reading
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Volume 04 chapter 02

<!—47 -->

The flying boat filled with ether continued to glide over the clouds during the night.

The destination was a sanctuary in the Elemental Spirit World – Floating Island <Ragana Ys>.

It was the venue for the Spirit Blade Dance festival.

Originally, only the shrine princesses from the <Divine Ritual Institute> were permitted to enter the sanctuary to attend the Elemental Lord.

However, this was open to the general public specifically during the Blade Dance festival only.

“Oh, this flying boat is so amazing!”

Overlooking the sea of clouds that extended through the window, Kamito was feeling dizzy.

Anyway, it was his first time riding a flying boat.

But as expected from the ladies of nobility, they got accustomed to it as soon as they unloaded their luggage.

He was relaxing on the sofa in the private room that they were each allotted.

The carpet was subjected to very beautiful embroidery in red with the walls being of polished marble.

All the built-in furniture on board was of the highest standard.

“Nevertheless, there is not even a small tremor”.

“This is indeed a latest flying ship. If all goes as planned we will be arriving about noon.”

<!—Page 48 -->

That being said, Claire lie herself down on the sofa. But no matter, her posture was……

One could easily see her pink panties. Kamito hurriedly turned his face.

“Come to think of it, I have heard that tonight will be the opening ceremony at the castle. Have you brought your dress for the Formal Ball?”

“No, I did not bring it. I hate dance parties.”

Recalling the Blade Dance Festival three years ago, Kamito groaned bitterly.

Honestly, the ball was nothing but trivial.

“Is that so….”

For some reason, Claire muttered regretfully.

“…..? Don’t be embarrassed if you need help over your dress, okay?”

“No no, there’s nothing required!”

Claire blushed and turned the other way.

“Are you angry ...….”

“I ―I am not angry….stupid!”

“….Really, both of you, fighting on a ship?”

Rinslet was amazed at this and shrugged her shoulders.

“Rinslet, what are you doing here ―?”
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