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KnS v2 c3-3 edit... yeah I did a little...
Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2008 1:17 pm
by Chaoswind
O.o
can someone check and see If I missed something?
and I don't understand this part
Enraiha------ The demon slaying holy blade bestowed by the Lord of Fire Spirits. The devastating flames that bursts out from the blade will burn all the youma in sight into a crisp.
why not remove Will?
Re: KnS v2 c3-3 edit... yeah I did a little...
Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 7:12 pm
by Daffyd ap Morgen
Chaoswind wrote:O.o
can someone check and see If I missed something?
and I don't understand this part
Enraiha------ The demon slaying holy blade bestowed by the Lord of Fire Spirits. The devastating flames that bursts out from the blade will burn all the youma in sight into a crisp.
why not remove Will?
Instead I changed it by simplifying the grammar: "The devastating flame that burst out from the blade burned all the
youma into a crisp."
Re: KnS v2 c3-3 edit... yeah I did a little...
Posted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 1:10 am
by ShadowZeroHeart
Wonder why i didnt reply to the first post? Sorry about that.
And very sorry, yes the "will" can be removed, or rather, should i say it SHOULD be removed. I am guessing I was thinking that the youma is not burnt yet, but they are according to the text. Sorry for the mistake, thank you for pointing it out!
Re: KnS v2 c3-3 edit... yeah I did a little...
Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:40 am
by Chaoswind
hehe
I will try to do the c3-4 tonight, Morgen be sure to check after wards!!
Re: KnS v2 c3-3 edit... yeah I did a little...
Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:58 am
by ShadowZeroHeart
Slow down, slow down, please...
ShadowZeroHeart <=== Brother went to camp and going overseas for some time, sleeping timings vary so greatly that he can hardly stay awake and patient to translate... So please slow down? >"<
Re: KnS v2 c3-3 edit... yeah I did a little...
Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:31 am
by Chaoswind
as you can see I wasn't able to even read the 3-4 >_< damn Xmas and the problems that come with it
Re: KnS v2 c3-3 edit... yeah I did a little...
Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:35 pm
by ShadowZeroHeart
LOLz, there arent many that curse Xmas the way you do
Re: KnS v2 c3-3 edit... yeah I did a little...
Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:45 pm
by Chaoswind
Huh a lot of people do, but not openly...
just think about it... it gets colder, things get busy anywhere you go (workplace, stores, etc) and if you happen to have your birthday in this week, a lot of people will remember it, but that doesn't mean you get extra presents o.o
Re: KnS v2 c3-3 edit... yeah I did a little...
Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 5:31 am
by ShadowZeroHeart
Chaoswind wrote:Huh a lot of people do, but not openly...
just think about it... it gets colder, things get busy anywhere you go (workplace, stores, etc) and if you happen to have your birthday in this week, a lot of people will remember it, but that doesn't mean you get extra presents o.o
LOLz, no wonder the difference. I stay at home. It is just another simple day to me LOLz!