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visual notes on chapter 5 script - eye sore?

Post by onizuka-gto »

grrr, cala-kun why you revert the notes i took the time to apply the hide tag?

to be honest I didn't like them, they were sticking out like sore thumbs, and they kinda ruined the chapter for me.

:(

can't we just hide them? sure you want to point out bits that need editing, but i don't want to be rudely stopped, to ponder about them before resume my read. can't we just hide them or at leased used a less intrusive method? maybe like a link to a footnote or asterix link?
"Please note, we have added a consequence for failure.Any contact with the chamber floor will result in an unsatisfactory mark on your official test record, followed by death. Good luck."

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Post by the_naming_game »

Oni, ummm ... well, at first I didn't look through all your changes carefully enough to realize what you were doing, but in addition to commenting out the *visible* things that should be commented out, you also commented *in* some of Cala's stuff.

(everything in green is commented out)

before:
main stuff '''(comment that should be hidden)'''
<!--
Cala's stuff //Cala's comment//
More Cala stuff.
-->

more main stuff
after:
main stuff <!-- (comment that should be hidden) -->
<!--
Cala's stuff <!-- //Cala's comment// -->

More Cala stuff.
-->
more main stuff
Basically, I didn't notice that you had also commented out "(comment that should be hidden)" but I did notice the "More Cala stuff" showing up because, well, in the diff, it has his name signed, and I ... oh what the hell, hopefully it's understandable by now. So I mentioned it to Cala in passing, hence the revert. Honestly, the alternate-translation-in-comments is a little distracting even you have a highlighting editor; I'm thinking of maybe moving it to another page. (keeping the page number markers, of course)

I'll go through again and redo the non-Cala comment tags.

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Post by onizuka-gto »

so it was you who undid my edits, eh? bloody typical.... :roll:
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Post by onizuka-gto »

ok. i admit it. i lol the first time i read that.

but still...


BANNED.

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