OLN: Yuugare Contract
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- Arcsol93
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Re: OLN: Yuugare Contract
I'm alive, though it took a while to get things straightened out (Between getting constantly locked on here and troubles with my email...that and me erasing chapter 6 about four times...XD)
I'll have chapter 6, the epilogue, the prologue for two and maybe part of chapter 1-2 up by tonight hopefully if I can get the issues with my word processor resolved. Also I'm looking for a editor since it seems Bitter was hit hard with college, and I don't exactly trust that my chapters aren't a mess lol. The help would be appreciated, thanks.
I'll have chapter 6, the epilogue, the prologue for two and maybe part of chapter 1-2 up by tonight hopefully if I can get the issues with my word processor resolved. Also I'm looking for a editor since it seems Bitter was hit hard with college, and I don't exactly trust that my chapters aren't a mess lol. The help would be appreciated, thanks.
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Re: OLN: Yuugare Contract
Still encountering problems with my email, so I'll just try copying from my iPod notepad...hopefully it doesn't cut anything off. Also, this will be filled with grammar errors, maybe even punctuation. I will fix them when I fix them, I barely have enough time to write between work and studying, much less correct any errors. Either way, I hope it's enjoyable nonetheless, thank you.
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Woo, 666 views! (Or was...XD) Will have the epilogue up by the end of the weekend now, been rewriting it. For, you know...the fifth time >.> Probably the prologue for 2 will be up as well. (Depending on if I don't find it as a bunch of giberish)
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...Well I was going to post them...until my ipod decided to suddenly glitch and delete about...two months worth of notes. No, there's no way of getting them back, so when I'll be posting the epilogue will be indefinite for the time being until I cool down.
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And I managed to rewrite them! They aren't the same as what I had, but they are definitely better than what I had before. So after the long wait I will post the epilogue for part one and the prologue for part 2. As always, I hope you enjoy them.
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Re: OLN: Yuugare Contract
It's been a long time. And after all this time(after reading chapter 4 and 5 on page 2), I still enjoy reading this story. I don't know why I like reading this but I really do haha. The longer chapters was definitely awesome. I've bookmarked this so I can come back to it later:D
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Re: OLN: Yuugare Contract
Enjoy it while you can lol. Most of the chapters will be pulled at one point, I'm revising them all after a friend really nailed his critique onto me. It was harsh, but effective xD. The general premise of the story won't change, but a lot of the scenes will be altered, some things removed, some things added. And a hopefully longer, polished chapter will take its place, though it also means I'll be posting slower as well.
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Ok under a friends suggestion what I'm going to do is this. When I finish a revised chapter it will be replaced, and I will give a notification. Whether or not you go back to it is your decision. So! What I will be doing with one for the moment is breaking it into two chapters. I won't be doing this until I finish rewriting the second part into a suitable second chapter.
On a different note, I see this thread has a bulb next to it now and is at the top, someone explain this to me. If its because the mods actually found this interesting then I'm surprised (Because this is trash xD)
On a different note, I see this thread has a bulb next to it now and is at the top, someone explain this to me. If its because the mods actually found this interesting then I'm surprised (Because this is trash xD)
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Re: OLN: Yuugare Contract
Revised chapter 1 is done! Will be deleting the original version of it. The chapters will be out of place for a while, but the majority of them will be revised as well so it won't be too confusing. Opinions are valued! I've been trying out a newish style I've picked up from a few books I have read.
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Re: OLN: Yuugare Contract
I'm not sure if anyone has asked this yet, but shouldn't the title be "Yuugure Contract?"
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*Facepalm* Crap, honestly it was an old file I had on my emails. The edited version had the original title but that was wiped when my ipod kicked the bucket with the new update. Fixing that now, thanks. Also going to be separating the second section into the second chapter instead.Kanda Hikaru wrote:I'm not sure if anyone has asked this yet, but shouldn't the title be "Yuugure Contract?"
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Re: OLN: Yuugare Contract
Chapter 2 is here. Decided not to make it a separate section because of an article I read. Future advice for other novice writers like me. The length of a chapter doesn't matter, a chapter is a mini-story and as long as it gets that point across then the chapter has done its job.
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"It's true that the real world is a shitty game. It's both unreasonable...and illogical...But a happy end will never come to those who want to finish a difficult game with ease." -The World God Only Knows