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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 8:14 pm
Prologue
Suzumiya Haruhi was very (law-abiding/obedient - need a word~).
Even though she is very (melancholic) and sometimes (moaned and groaned), she is actually very sociable. Even so, she's been surprisingly tranquil these past couple days. This quietness from who-knows-where even scares people like me.
Of course, this wasn't her (semblance) being quiet, and it defenitely wasn't a change of heart. Haruhi never doubts herself. Even if her personality has a slight or quiet change, she will never question herself. Anyways, if anything like that ever happened (refering to personality change), I would be put in an problematic situation. So, at this moment in time, I wouldn't bother to try and (correct) her. How do I say this.., (there's a type of quietness that's like a continuously radiating kirlian photograph in which the light has gone from the fieriest red to an orange which is subtly surrounding her.) - note : I'm not sure about this line.
Of all the people in the class, only one, at most two, will be able to realize that she is not quite the same as before. Of these two, one is identifiable as me.
Me > Sorry I only translated this much, but I need to do a SS project due on Monday...actually, I need to start it..
meh, constructive criticism plz~
edit : T__T...then again, people probably won't read this until the fourth book's done...^^
Suzumiya Haruhi was very (law-abiding/obedient - need a word~).
Even though she is very (melancholic) and sometimes (moaned and groaned), she is actually very sociable. Even so, she's been surprisingly tranquil these past couple days. This quietness from who-knows-where even scares people like me.
Of course, this wasn't her (semblance) being quiet, and it defenitely wasn't a change of heart. Haruhi never doubts herself. Even if her personality has a slight or quiet change, she will never question herself. Anyways, if anything like that ever happened (refering to personality change), I would be put in an problematic situation. So, at this moment in time, I wouldn't bother to try and (correct) her. How do I say this.., (there's a type of quietness that's like a continuously radiating kirlian photograph in which the light has gone from the fieriest red to an orange which is subtly surrounding her.) - note : I'm not sure about this line.
Of all the people in the class, only one, at most two, will be able to realize that she is not quite the same as before. Of these two, one is identifiable as me.
Me > Sorry I only translated this much, but I need to do a SS project due on Monday...actually, I need to start it..
meh, constructive criticism plz~
edit : T__T...then again, people probably won't read this until the fourth book's done...^^
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