User talk:黒曜石ペガサス

Comments/mistranslations/suggestions

Haha, welcome, you will learn along the way --larethian (talk) 10:53, 28 June 2013 (CDT)

thanks

No problem. If you ever need an editor to proofread a chapter of FMP:Another and are having trouble finding one, you can drop a message on my talk page or PM me on the forum and I will get back to you as soon as I can, hopefully having the time time to proofread for you. --Rohan123 (talk) 13:06, 14 July 2013 (CDT)

Sure, send me the script for PRing when you're done translating. If you email me the script, please drop a message on my talk page or pm me on the forum saying you have emailed me, since I don't check my mail regularly. --Rohan123 (talk) 13:40, 14 July 2013 (CDT)

For the that part maybe either put " " quotations marks around the sorry when Yuta says that, and put like a star * on courteous or something like that to put emphasis on it to express sarcasm. talk)

Double quotation marks shouldn't be used as they usually denote speech or a quote and things like "I am really "sorry"" would look weird. And star is usually used to denote sound effects. It's easier to denote emphasis using bold or sarcasm using italics, or using single quotes for either. Like : "I am really sorry" or "I am really 'sorry'" and "If you don't tell me the truth, I will seriously kill you..." --Rohan123 (talk) 04:50, 25 July 2013 (CDT)

About Vol 4 Prologue of PapaKiki

Hello, and thank you very much for deciding to translate PapaKiki *bow*. really, thank you. May I ask something though? Its seems the translator for vol 4 Prologue has not doing anything for over 9 months, and I believe in Baka-Tsuki the translator is declared MIA after 6 months(to be honest he doesnt even translate anything here even when he register as a translator, so I guess he shouldnt be called one). Will you translate the Prologue? Again, Thank you very much

The rules at the registration page mention: "Portions that are not updated for a significant time may be taken over by another translator after getting permission from the Project Supervisor." --L.kostas (talk) 02:20, 1 July 2013 (CDT)

To answer, This is my first light novel translation and I'm moving slowly, since I'm still learning and cultural references or slang take me a while to catch on to. With that in mind I'm only able to do a page a day as part of my program to learn to speak better 日本語. (selfish right?) With that math, It will be the end of July b4 I'm done with chapter 2, lets ask that again then. (I'm sure I'll be faster by then).

Full Metal Panic! Another

I would be interested in editing it. Actually, FMP is one of the animes I was planning to watch, but I'm busy with other animes right now. However, it does seem interesting and I have seen a few clips of it. Go ahead and start up the project, FMP is a very popular anime and you may get many views.

-- 神 (talk) 23:47, 12 July 2013 (CDT)

You mean to say that my edits didn't really make sense? If so, am sorry for that and can you please point out the mistakes that I have made or any meanings I might have changed? I will try to keep that in mind the next time. --Rohan123 (talk) 12:43, 20 July 2013 (CDT)

Oh, okay. Sorry for misunderstanding, and thanks for the compliment. And don't worry, your translation made enough sense, it just needed a bit of polishing, that's all. And I will try editing within a day or two of you making the updates. --Rohan123 (talk) 13:01, 20 July 2013 (CDT)

Papa no Iu Koto o Kikinasai!Volume 4 Chapter 2

Did Sako say, "Husband, I'm sorry?" Why did he say husband? Also, why is Segawa grateful to feel regretful?

-- 神 (talk) 03:39, 27 July 2013 (CDT)