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==Episode 1 The Intruder at Midnight==
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==Episode 1: The Intruder at Midnight==
   
 
===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
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The <Wyvern> of Sharis and the <Wyrm> of Tillfarr.
 
The <Wyvern> of Sharis and the <Wyrm> of Tillfarr.
   
Also the moment when he escaped from the two general-purpose type Drag-Rides.
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Also the moment when he escaped from two general-purpose types Drag-Rides.
   
 
The third person –– the girl named Nokuto came chasing Lux.
 
The third person –– the girl named Nokuto came chasing Lux.
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Her orange Drag-Ride was a general purpose Drag-Ride called <Drake>.
 
Her orange Drag-Ride was a general purpose Drag-Ride called <Drake>.
   
In contrast with the flight type <Wyvern> and the land battle type <Wyrm>, it was a type classified as a special equipment (customized) type.
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In contrast with the flight type <Wyvern> and the land battle type <Wyrm>, it was a type classified into special equipment (customized) type.
   
 
Although it was a Drag-Ride equipped with special functions such as searching for the enemy, camouflage, support, assistance, restoration and the like, and its basic performance (ability) was somewhat lowered, its strength under a specific situation surpassed the other two.
 
Although it was a Drag-Ride equipped with special functions such as searching for the enemy, camouflage, support, assistance, restoration and the like, and its basic performance (ability) was somewhat lowered, its strength under a specific situation surpassed the other two.
   
 
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Using it special characteristic –– visually observing Lux even within the dark by means of the goggles which were worn on her head, Nokuto accurately ran after him.
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Its special characteristic –– visually checking Lux even within the darkness by means of the goggles which were worn on her head, Nokuto accurately ran after him.
   
 
“Stop. If you don’t stop, I will shoot. If you stop, I will shoot kindly.”
 
“Stop. If you don’t stop, I will shoot. If you stop, I will shoot kindly.”
   
Towards Lux who ran within the vast site towards the main gate, Nokuto called out to him while chasing after him.
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At Lux who ran in the vast site towards the main gate, Nokuto called out to him while chasing him.
   
Needless to say that Nokuto clad in <Drake> was above him in speed.
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Needless to say that Nokuto clad in <Drake> was above in speed.
   
 
However, Lux ran as he wove his way through the bush with many trees and weakened her momentum of chase.
 
However, Lux ran as he wove his way through the bush with many trees and weakened her momentum of chase.
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“Yes. It'd be great if you didn't die. In that sense.”
 
“Yes. It'd be great if you didn't die. In that sense.”
   
“It was only a matter of feelings!?”
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“It was only the problem of feelings!?”
   
 
“Yes. And, I will do so that you won’t suffer as much as possible. In that sense.”
 
“Yes. And, I will do so that you won’t suffer as much as possible. In that sense.”
   
“You have the atmosphere of ‘however much I kill you, it won’t be enough’!?”<ref>何でもう殺してもやむなしって空気なの!? Please also TLC this sentence </ref>
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“You have the atmosphere of ‘however much I kill you, it won’t be enough.’!?”<ref>何でもう殺してもやむなしって空気なの!? Please also TLC this sentence </ref>
   
''As expected, I can’t stop her.''
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''As expected, I couldn’t stop her.''
   
 
''I will be killed if I stop.''
 
''I will be killed if I stop.''
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At the same time she leaked such a dangerous mutter, Nokuto set up a Breath Gun.
 
At the same time she leaked such a dangerous mutter, Nokuto set up a Breath Gun.
   
It was a rapid-fire (blaze) type rifle which let the Drag-Ride’s energy converge and began shot.
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It was a rapid-fire (blaze) type rifle which let the Drag-Ride’s energy converge and began to shoot.
   
 
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It was an armament of low power against a Drag-Knight, but if received with a human body, one would easily fall victim.
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It was an armament of low power against a Drag-Knight, but if received it with a human body, one would fall easy victim.
   
 
“Kuh…!”
 
“Kuh…!”
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Because the bonfire itself was used as an obstacle (wall), it was too dazzling in the view which raised sensitivity.
 
Because the bonfire itself was used as an obstacle (wall), it was too dazzling in the view which raised sensitivity.
   
“Yes. It looked like, you know, the <Drake>’s special trait. However, with only that––”
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“Yes. It looked like you know the <Drake>’s special trait. However, with only that––”
   
 
The view sensitivity which was provided through the goggles of the <Drake> could be immediately adjusted.
 
The view sensitivity which was provided through the goggles of the <Drake> could be immediately adjusted.
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Before her eyes, fire was approaching.
 
Before her eyes, fire was approaching.
   
It was firewood with fire that was from the bonfire. Lux who gripped one of it, threw it aiming at Nokuto’s rear.
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It was firewood with fire that was a part of the bonfire. Lux which gripped one of it threw it aiming at Nokuto’s rear.
   
 
“Kuh…”
 
“Kuh…”
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With a Drag-Knight as an opponent, ordinary attacks would not work; the throwing of a smoke screen would be better<ref>目眩ましの投擲, TLC here again, please </ref>.
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With a Drag-Knight as opponent, ordinary attacks would not work; throwing of smoke screen would be better<ref>目眩ましの投擲, TLC here again, please </ref>.
   
 
But, at that opportunity where Nokuto suddenly stopped, Lux reached up to the way near the main gate.
 
But, at that opportunity where Nokuto suddenly stopped, Lux reached up to the way near the main gate.
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It would not be wise to escape as is though.
 
It would not be wise to escape as is though.
   
When the other side settled down, he would properly explain himself and apologize.
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When the other side settled down, he would properly explained himself and apologize.
   
 
“––––”
 
“––––”
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“Krulcifer-san…”
 
“Krulcifer-san…”
   
The girl in front of him lightly raised her right hand and called out to Nokuto behind.
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The girl in front of him lightly raised her right hand called out to Nokuto behind.
   
 
To her movements which had not that much hesitation, Lux instinctively stopped.
 
To her movements which had not that much hesitation, Lux instinctively stopped.
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“Haa, Haa… Um… Excuse me. I’m, errr––”
 
“Haa, Haa… Um… Excuse me. I’m, errr––”
   
From the building behind, screams such as “Pervert!” or “Underwear thief!” could be heard.
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From the building behind, screams such as “pervert!” or “underwear thief!” could be heard small.
   
 
“Yes, I know.”
 
“Yes, I know.”
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“What a fairly pretty peeping tom, pervert and underwear thief, eh. He’s still a child.”
 
“What a fairly pretty peeping tom, pervert and underwear thief, eh. He’s still a child.”
   
“Eh…!? …N-No… I––”
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“Eh…!? …N-No…, I––”
   
 
While shaking, Lux was, just a little, irritated.
 
While shaking, Lux was, just a little, irritated.
   
Certainly the girl in front of him had a grown-up atmosphere, but she should be about the same age as him.
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Certainly the girl in front of him has a grown-up atmosphere, but she should be about the same age as him.
   
 
And yet––.
 
And yet––.
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Forgetting that he was in a situation where he was cornered, Lux rebutted.
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Forgotten that he was in a situation where he was cornered, Lux rebutted.
   
 
The fairylike girl suddenly showed a sad expression.
 
The fairylike girl suddenly showed a sad expression.
   
“…Is that so. But, I’m sorry. I don’t like it, but even with a child as an opponent, I can’t overlook an offender.”
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“…Is that so. But, I’m sorry. I don’t like it, but even with a child as opponent, I can’t overlook an offender.”
   
 
(C-Child, child, doesn’t she care about what someone told her…!?)
 
(C-Child, child, doesn’t she care about what someone told her…!?)
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In a part totally unrelated to this turmoil, Lux inwardly decided further.
 
In a part totally unrelated to this turmoil, Lux inwardly decided further.
   
He understood that he, who suddenly plunged into the large public bath and could not make any excuse, was totally in the wrong.
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He understood that he, who suddenly plunged into the large public bath and could not make any excuses, was totally in the wrong.
   
 
But, be that as it may, there was the problem of pride.
 
But, be that as it may, there was the problem of pride.
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''What on earth––''
 
''What on earth––''
   
“Well then, I leave the rest to you. I’m going to the bath. There are no more peeping toms, are there?”
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“Well then, I leave the rest to you. I’m going to the bath. There is no more peeping tom, is there?”
   
Soon after having heard her indifferent voice, Lux’s field of vision turned black.
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Soon after having heard her indifferent voice, Lux’s field of vision blacked out.
   
 
It was after he woke up later that he noticed that it was due to the shock when he was flung by Krulcifer.
 
It was after he woke up later that he noticed that it was due to the shock when he was flung by Krulcifer.

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