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"They're coming, so let's go up!"
 
"They're coming, so let's go up!"
   
"W-Wait. I-I always come to school by car, so my endurance is kind of..."
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"W-Wait. I, I always come to school by car, so my endurance is kind of..."
   
 
After rushing up the stairs, Sierra's legs were quickly becoming stiff.
 
After rushing up the stairs, Sierra's legs were quickly becoming stiff.
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"Isn't that basically what I said to your father before?"
 
"Isn't that basically what I said to your father before?"
   
"S-Shut up! It's a common enough saying!"
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"S, shut up! It's a common enough saying!"
   
 
"We're not talking about copyright infringement here, you know."
 
"We're not talking about copyright infringement here, you know."
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"Are you alright?"
 
"Are you alright?"
   
"Y-Yeah..."
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"Y, yeah..."
   
 
The determined look in Jin's eyes made Sierra's heart race. While peeking at Ukyou from the safety of the staircase housing, Alf spoke to Jin.
 
The determined look in Jin's eyes made Sierra's heart race. While peeking at Ukyou from the safety of the staircase housing, Alf spoke to Jin.
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The impatient Sierra grabbed him by the collar and shook him. Jin replied as his head practically rattled.
 
The impatient Sierra grabbed him by the collar and shook him. Jin replied as his head practically rattled.
   
"J-Just why are you even giving orders anyway! Fine, whatever, Abracadabra!"
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"J, just why are you even giving orders anyway! Fine, whatever, Abracadabra!"
   
 
At his limit, Jin had shouted. Ukyou furrowed his brow.
 
At his limit, Jin had shouted. Ukyou furrowed his brow.
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As he watched Alf glow silver and shrink thinner and thinner, a silver sword appeared and dropped to the ground. Surprised, Jin peered about.
 
As he watched Alf glow silver and shrink thinner and thinner, a silver sword appeared and dropped to the ground. Surprised, Jin peered about.
   
"A-Alf? Where'd you go?"
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"A, Alf? Where'd you go?"
   
 
"You really are quite dense, aren't you? I'm right here!"
 
"You really are quite dense, aren't you? I'm right here!"
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"Once I'm in this form, I can't turn back until I eat an Ark Daemon. If you're defeated, 'Alf' will be gone forever."
 
"Once I'm in this form, I can't turn back until I eat an Ark Daemon. If you're defeated, 'Alf' will be gone forever."
   
"T-That's quite a load of responsibility! In that case, you really should have chosen a kendo-club member or something."
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"T, that's quite a load of responsibility! In that case, you really should have chosen a kendo-club member or something."
   
 
"An ordinary human can't hope to defeat an Ark Daemon, you know."
 
"An ordinary human can't hope to defeat an Ark Daemon, you know."
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"I mean knowing the Clavicle of Solomon's whereabouts."
 
"I mean knowing the Clavicle of Solomon's whereabouts."
   
"I-Is now really the time to be talking about archaeology texts?!"
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"I, is now really the time to be talking about archaeology texts?!"
   
 
"Anyway, do your best. The Genie level of the sword will only go up if I eat Ark Daemons, you know."
 
"Anyway, do your best. The Genie level of the sword will only go up if I eat Ark Daemons, you know."
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After she uttered the phrase, a noisy billowing gust assaulted the rooftop. Sand carried by the wind was making a rough sound and wrapped about Ukyou. Startled by her own ability, Sierra stood in shock as her hair was fluttered about by the wind.
 
After she uttered the phrase, a noisy billowing gust assaulted the rooftop. Sand carried by the wind was making a rough sound and wrapped about Ukyou. Startled by her own ability, Sierra stood in shock as her hair was fluttered about by the wind.
   
"A-Amazing...I was really able to use magic...!"
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"A, amazing...I was really able to use magic...!"
   
 
Unaware of what sort of effect the Lammul spell might have, she was a bit worried, but it seemed to have worked on him for the time being. Ukyou fell face-first where he stood, startling her.
 
Unaware of what sort of effect the Lammul spell might have, she was a bit worried, but it seemed to have worked on him for the time being. Ukyou fell face-first where he stood, startling her.
   
"D-Did I kill him?"
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"D, did I kill him?"
   
 
Her heart racing, Sierra carefully approached him to check whether or not he was still alive.
 
Her heart racing, Sierra carefully approached him to check whether or not he was still alive.
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Sierra clutched her chest in relief. Lightly snoring, Ukyou seemed to be sleeping like a baby. Just then, there came a bluish white smoke from Ukyou's back.
 
Sierra clutched her chest in relief. Lightly snoring, Ukyou seemed to be sleeping like a baby. Just then, there came a bluish white smoke from Ukyou's back.
   
"W-What is this?"
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"W, what is this?"
   
 
Startled, Sierra backed away. Drifting about the darkness, the bluish white smoke took shape, turning into what looked like a sea anemone about five meters in diameter with hundreds of tentacles and eyes. Feeling rather creeped out, Sierra had goosebumps all over.
 
Startled, Sierra backed away. Drifting about the darkness, the bluish white smoke took shape, turning into what looked like a sea anemone about five meters in diameter with hundreds of tentacles and eyes. Feeling rather creeped out, Sierra had goosebumps all over.
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It was an odd hoarse voice. In fact, Lammul was the only spell she knew and she didn't even know what sort of effect it would have, so it really was just coincidental that it worked, but deciding to bluff, Sierra shouted.
 
It was an odd hoarse voice. In fact, Lammul was the only spell she knew and she didn't even know what sort of effect it would have, so it really was just coincidental that it worked, but deciding to bluff, Sierra shouted.
   
"T-That's right, I did! With my magic, I can beat someone like you in an instant!"
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"T, that's right, I did! With my magic, I can beat someone like you in an instant!"
   
 
"I didn't think that you had progressed to such magical proficiency already. Well...Then I guess I'll eat you now."
 
"I didn't think that you had progressed to such magical proficiency already. Well...Then I guess I'll eat you now."
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Majnun laughed darkly, descending upon her slowly. Not expecting this turn of events, Sierra started backing away.
 
Majnun laughed darkly, descending upon her slowly. Not expecting this turn of events, Sierra started backing away.
   
"E-Eat me...?"
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"E, eat me...?"
   
 
"Though I avoided Suleiman's ring, I can't just abandon my comrades."
 
"Though I avoided Suleiman's ring, I can't just abandon my comrades."
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"...It seems this era is seeing an excess of comedians. Or maybe she's just an airhead?"
 
"...It seems this era is seeing an excess of comedians. Or maybe she's just an airhead?"
   
"W-What a rude monster!"
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"W, what a rude monster!"
   
 
"Suleiman is the Arabic rendition of Solomon. Solomon's ring is capable of sealing us Ark Daemons into the Ark..."
 
"Suleiman is the Arabic rendition of Solomon. Solomon's ring is capable of sealing us Ark Daemons into the Ark..."
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Completely serious, Jin was about to remove it, making Sierra thoroughly indignant. Picking up the magic lamp that had fallen on the floor, she pushed it on Jin.
 
Completely serious, Jin was about to remove it, making Sierra thoroughly indignant. Picking up the magic lamp that had fallen on the floor, she pushed it on Jin.
   
"W-Well there's only a bit more until I reach the next level, so do your duty and call me again tomorrow! After all this trouble there's no way I'm going back to level zero!"
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"W, well there's only a bit more until I reach the next level, so do your duty and call me again tomorrow! After all this trouble there's no way I'm going back to level zero!"
   
 
After saying her bit, Sierra was enveloped by purple smoke and disappeared back through the lamp.
 
After saying her bit, Sierra was enveloped by purple smoke and disappeared back through the lamp.
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Jin felt a sudden cold sweat overtake him. He wanted to point it out. He just had to. And yet he couldn't. As if there was any way he could.
 
Jin felt a sudden cold sweat overtake him. He wanted to point it out. He just had to. And yet he couldn't. As if there was any way he could.
   
"T-That's enough, you can stop."
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"T, that's enough, you can stop."
   
 
Looking off to the side, Jin quickly spoke. Sierra looked up and stared at him blankly.
 
Looking off to the side, Jin quickly spoke. Sierra looked up and stared at him blankly.

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