Editing Mimizuku to Yoru no Ou: Chapter 4

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Before, Kuro had said, "Paintings which use red are the most beautiful." Mimizuku could see no inconsistency in his words. She had come to understand everything that had led up to this point.
 
Before, Kuro had said, "Paintings which use red are the most beautiful." Mimizuku could see no inconsistency in his words. She had come to understand everything that had led up to this point.
   
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"That picture could even summon monsters. I have visited it myself. And I have also seen the battered, injured prince. He was a human, yet that spirit, that magic power. I asked him if he still wanted to live. I asked him if he would not dislike stopping being a human. He answered righteously."
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"That picture could even call upon magic. I have visited it myself. And I have also seen the battered, injured prince. I asked him if, even after all that humans had done to him, he still wanted to live. I asked him if he would not dislike stopping humans. He answered righteously."
   
 
''Is that right,'' Mimizuku thought. That was how it went.
 
''Is that right,'' Mimizuku thought. That was how it went.

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