Editing Kaze no Stigma:Volume5 Chapter 4

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Not understanding why Ren's expression was so stiff, Ayano replied in a light tone.
 
Not understanding why Ren's expression was so stiff, Ayano replied in a light tone.
   
But, without showing her even the shadow of a smile, he declared with serious look.
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But, without shewing her even the shadow of a smile, he declared with serious look.
   
 
"It's different. "
 
"It's different. "
   
He had no hesitation and yet those eyes were carrying so much concern it was heartbreaking.
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He had no hesitation and yet those eyes were caring so much concern it was heartbreaking.
   
 
"That was different."
 
"That was different."
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"Verified, you say......."
 
"Verified, you say......."
   
"Rather than Kazuma changing, it's more like he returned to the way he was before. Not listening to Ren-kun trying to restrain him, on the contrary, not forgiving even him if he were to become an obstacle - or something like that. "
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"Rather than Kazuma changing, it's more like he returned to the way he was before. Not listening to Ren-kun trying to restrain him, on the contrary, not forging even him if he were to become an obstacle - or something like that. "
   
 
Fleetingly looking at Ren, Kirika searched for confirmation. Ren made a tiny, but clear nod.
 
Fleetingly looking at Ren, Kirika searched for confirmation. Ren made a tiny, but clear nod.
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She couldn't imagine that.
 
She couldn't imagine that.
   
Ayano knew best just how much Kazuma was doting on Ren.
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Ayano knew best just how much was Kazuma doting on Ren.
   
More important than anyone and anything, almost like a beloved child.
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More important that anyone and anything, almost like a beloved child.
   
 
"That.......cannot be..."
 
"That.......cannot be..."

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