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| − | in the case of defeat of the tip of the challenge with all of his power. -Doesn't really make sense.--[[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]]) 21:44, 16 August 2014 (CDT) |
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| − | investigating the previous degree of piercing's tendency. -Piercing's tendency?--[[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]]) 21:54, 16 August 2014 (CDT) |
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| − | And the distance from the power. -Amount of power maybe?--[[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]]) 22:03, 16 August 2014 (CDT) |
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| − | A declaration, and a speed like bursting open galloped forth. -Bursting open, feel like this sentence is missing a word either before bursting or after open.--[[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]]) 22:09, 16 August 2014 (CDT) |
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