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|「どうして小木曽に直接言わずに、<br>俺にだけ聞こえる声でささやくんだ？」
  
|「どうして小木曽に直接言わずに、<br>俺にだけ聞こえる声でささやくんだ？」
 
|"Why are you whispering in a way that lets me hear and doesn't let Ogiso?"
  
|"Why are you whispering in a way that lets me hear and doesn't let Ogiso?"
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|「………真面目に聞きたいんだが、<br>お前ら初対面の時、どんなやり取りがあったんだ？」
  
|「………真面目に聞きたいんだが、<br>お前ら初対面の時、どんなやり取りがあったんだ？」
 
|"... I seriously have to know, what exactly went on between the two of you that time you met?"
  
|"... I seriously have to know, what exactly went on between the two of you that time you met?"
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|「ん？　ほらそこにあるでしょそこよ」
  
|「ん？　ほらそこにあるでしょそこよ」
 
|"Hmm? It's over there now, isn't it?"
  
|"Hmm? It's over there now, isn't it?"
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|「成績は行けそうだけど経済的に無理じゃないかなぁ。<br>姉ちゃん私立に入れただけで親父力尽きちゃったよ」
  
|「成績は行けそうだけど経済的に無理じゃないかなぁ。<br>姉ちゃん私立に入れただけで親父力尽きちゃったよ」
 
|"Grades-wise, I could make it, but it might be impossible financially. Dad's all burned out just from enrolling her there."
  
|"Grades-wise, I could make it, but it might be impossible financially. Dad's all burned out just from enrolling her there."
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Revision as of 01:19, 25 September 2016

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Translation Notes

1. Segments of this file will coincide with the digital novels from the White Album 2 Omake page. If any edits are made, please make sure both match up. They are as follows:

  • Lines 1-46 and 328-391 coincide with Chapter 1 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • The VN side appears to have extra sfx text that was added.
  • Lines 534-595 coincide with Chapter 2 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
  • Lines 676-677 coincide with the Epilogue of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • Line 676 is a bit extended in the VN version.
  • Line 836 coincides with Chapter 3 (all-ages) of The Idol Who Forgot How To Sing / 歌を忘れた偶像（アイドル）.

2. The PS3 version changed line 1352 and replaced it with two different lines (likely in order to maintain CERO D rating):

  • 春希
    「友達と一緒に夜の繁華街うろついててさ、
    お互いにアリバイ工作してたんだけど」
  • 春希
    「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、
    友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」

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