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| + | After saying that, Vali disappears into the darkness while taking Mil-tan with him ->After saying that, Vali disappears into the darkness while taking Bikou with him [ user: Panax 02:14, 21 July 2012 |
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i'm putting them here because i'm not sure of some of them, but here are some of the errors i found:
- “They are breasts which I haven’t had anyone touch but Ise. Do you still remember how they feels?” -> “They are breasts which I haven’t had anyone touch but Ise. Do you still remember how they feel?”
- I didn’t grope them with my hands, but they was really soft! -> I didn’t grope them with my hands, but they were really soft!
- She is a woman swordsman who has a stern body -> She is a female swordsman who has a stern body OR She is a swordswoman who has a stern body
..::Gradient::.. 07:03, 1 July 2012 (CDT)
We appreciate the heads up, but there's no need to post them here. If you spot small mistakes like these in the future, don't hesitate to edit them yourself. Ajmc93 17:01, 1 July 2012 (CDT)
Done a little correction : After saying that, Vali disappears into the darkness while taking Mil-tan with him ->After saying that, Vali disappears into the darkness while taking Bikou with him [ user: Panax 02:14, 21 July 2012
