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===Chapter Four: Port City La Rochelle===
 
===Chapter Four: Port City La Rochelle===
   
Although dawn had just broken, Saito, Guiche and Louise had already started preparing the saddles for their horses. Slung over Saito's back was Derflinger. Because of its length,
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Although dawn had just broken, Saito, Guiche and Louise had already started preparing the saddles for their horses. Slung on the back of Saito was Derflinger. Because of its length,
 
it could not be attached to the waist.
 
it could not be attached to the waist.
   
Louise was dressed in her academy uniform, the only difference was that she now wore horse riding boots instead of shoes. Judging from that, it looked like a great deal of time would be spent riding the horse.
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Louise was dressed in her academy uniform, the only difference is that she now wore horse riding boots instead of shoes. Judging from that, it looks like a great deal of time would be spent riding the horse.
   
''How far would Albion be from here? I'm still not used to riding a horse... Most probably my waist will ache from the riding...'' he thought to himself.
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"How far would Albion be from here? I'm still not used to riding a horse... Most probably my waist will ache from the riding..." She thought to herself.
   
 
Just before setting off, Guiche spoke rather awkwardly.
 
Just before setting off, Guiche spoke rather awkwardly.
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"Do you have a familiar in the first place?"
 
"Do you have a familiar in the first place?"
   
"Of course I do. All magicians have one."
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"Of course I have. All magicians have one."
   
 
Louise and Saito looked at each other, then looked at Guiche again.
 
Louise and Saito looked at each other, then looked at Guiche again.
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Saito, dumbfounded, asked, "What in the world is that creature?"
 
Saito, dumbfounded, asked, "What in the world is that creature?"
   
"What do you mean creature? This is my cute little familiar Verdandi."
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"What you mean creature? This is my cute little familiar Verdandi."
   
"You mean that your familiar is that big thing over there?"
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"You mean that your familiar is that big thing over here?"
   
Upon closer inspection, that giant brown creature was actually a mole with a size equivalent to a small bear.
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Upon closer inspection, that giant brown creature is actually a mole with a size equivalent to a small bear.
   
 
"Yes. Ahh... My Verdandi, you look so cute from any angle I look. Have you eaten your meal of earthworms before you arrived here?"
 
"Yes. Ahh... My Verdandi, you look so cute from any angle I look. Have you eaten your meal of earthworms before you arrived here?"
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“But we're going to Albion! We can't bring creatures that move underground!.” Louise explained.
 
“But we're going to Albion! We can't bring creatures that move underground!.” Louise explained.
   
Guiche, upon hearing that, knelt onto the ground and replied, “I cannot bear the separation with my dear Verdandi... Oh! The pain...”
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Guiche, upon hearing that, knelt onto the ground and replied, “I cannot bear with the separation with my dear Verdandi... Oh! The Pain...”
   
At the same time, the giant mole seemed to pick up some scent from its nose and drew nearer and nearer to Louise.
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At the same time, the giant mole seemed to pick up some scent from its nose and approached nearer and nearer to Louise.
   
“What is this stupid mole trying to do!?”
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“What is this stupid Mole trying to do!?”
   
“Like master, like familiar. They both share the same interest – girls.” Saito said.
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“Like familiar, like Master. They both share the same interest – girls.” Saito said.
   
 
“Stop! Stop this right now!”
 
“Stop! Stop this right now!”
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“Such an irritating pest!”
 
“Such an irritating pest!”
   
“Please don't call Verdandi an irritating pest. It's because of me that Verdandi searches for precious stones and jewels. For an Earth magician, there's nothing more helpful than this.”
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“Please don't call Verdandi an irritating pest. It's because of me that Verdandi searches for precious stones and jewels. For a Earth magician, there's nothing more helpful than this.”
   
Just as Louise was preparing to blow her top, a sudden gust of wind came out of nowhere and blew away Verdandi.
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Just as Louise was preparing to blow her top, a sudden gust of wind came out of nowhere and blew away Verdandi.
   
 
“Who is that!?” Guiche shouted agitatedly.
 
“Who is that!?” Guiche shouted agitatedly.
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“I'm not your enemy. I'm under the orders of the highness to accompany you on your journey. The princess is worried about just having you few going to Albion, but then again sending a whole troop of soldiers with you will be too conspicuous. Therefore, I was appointed to accompany you all on this journey.” The noble said while taking off his feather cap and bowing.
 
“I'm not your enemy. I'm under the orders of the highness to accompany you on your journey. The princess is worried about just having you few going to Albion, but then again sending a whole troop of soldiers with you will be too conspicuous. Therefore, I was appointed to accompany you all on this journey.” The noble said while taking off his feather cap and bowing.
   
“I'm the captain of the Griffin Knights<ref>Griffin Knights - One of the few Knight Orders formed to protect the royal Family.</ref>, Viscount Wardes.”
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“I'm the captain of the <span id="back_to_Griffin">[[Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume2_Chapter4#Griffin|Griffin Knights]]</span>, Viscount Wardes.”
   
 
The grumbling Guiche quickly shut his mouth. For most of the nobles, Guiche included, being able to join the Griffin Knights meant great prestige.
 
The grumbling Guiche quickly shut his mouth. For most of the nobles, Guiche included, being able to join the Griffin Knights meant great prestige.
   
Wardes looked at Guiche and spoke apologetically. “Sorry for what I did to your familiar. I couldn't stand watching my fiancée being harassed.”
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Wardes looked at Guiche and spoke apologetically. “Sorry for what I did to your familiar. I couldn't stand watching my fiance being harassed.”
   
 
“What!?”
 
“What!?”
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Saito was shocked.
 
Saito was shocked.
   
“Fiancée?”
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“Fiance?”
   
“This majestic looking noble is Louise' fiancée???”
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“This majestic looking noble is Louise's fiance???”
   
“Wardes-sama...” Louise spoke in a trembling voice after standing up.
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“Viscount...” Louise spoke in a trembling voice after standing up.
   
 
“It's been such a long time. My Louise, my dear Louise.”
 
“It's been such a long time. My Louise, my dear Louise.”
   
''My Louise??? What kind of joke is that?'' Saito thought to himself.
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“My Louise??? What kind of joke is that? Saito thought to himself.
   
 
Wardes approached Louise and with a beaming smile on his face, carried Louise up.
 
Wardes approached Louise and with a beaming smile on his face, carried Louise up.
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“Viscount... please don't be like this... There are people over here...”
 
“Viscount... please don't be like this... There are people over here...”
   
Wardes, who placed Louise back down and replaced his hat said, “Care to introduce your companions to me?”
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Wardes, who placed Louise back down and wore back his hat said, “Care to introduce your companions to me?”
   
“Erm... That is Guiche de Gramont and my familiar, Saito.” said Louise while pointing at them while she was introducing them to Wardes. Guiche who did not dare look at Wardes directly, lowered his head. Saito followed suit though a bit unwillingly.
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“Erm... That is Guiche de Gramont and my familiar, Saito.” said Louise while pointing at them while she was introducing them to Wardes. Guiche who did not dare look at Wardes directly, lowered his head. Saito followed suit but a bit unwillingly though.
   
Wardes said with a rather surprised look on his face, “Are you Louise' familiar? This is the first time I've seen a human being a familiar.”
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Wardes said with a rather surprised look on his face, “Are you Louise's familiar? This is the first time I've seen a human being a familiar.”
   
“Thank you for taking such good care of my fiancée.”
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“Thank you for taking such good care of my fiance.”
   
 
"You're welcome."
 
"You're welcome."
   
Saito took the opportunity to size up Wardes. He was indeed handsome. Even though Guiche could also be considered a bishonen<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bishonen 美少年] meaning "Beautiful Youth" in Japanese. Mostly used for describing males.</ref> himself, he was always making a fool out of himself and making irrational decisions. He could even rub his own cheek with a giant mole.
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Saito took the opportunity to size up Wardes. Wardes was indeed handsome. Even though Guiche could also be considered a <span id="back_to_Bishonen">[[Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume2_Chapter4#Bishonen|bishonen]]</span> himself, he is always making a fool out of himself and making irrational decisions. He could even rub his own cheek with a giant mole.
   
However for Wardes, not only he had the looks. His eyes were like that of an eagle – keen and sharp. That mustache he had further enhanced his suaveness.
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However for Wardes, not only he has the looks. His eyes are like that of an eagle – Keen and Sharp. The mustache which he has further enhances his suaveness.
   
In addition he had a muscular and well built body. Saito had originally thought that all male magicians would have a body like Guiche, but he was proven wrong. Even in hand to hand combat with Wardes without the use of magic, Saito could be subdued in seconds.
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In addition he has a muscular and well built body. Saito had originally thought that all male magicians would have a body like Guiche, but he was proven wrong. Even in hand to hand combat with Wardes without the use of magic, Saito could be subdued in seconds.
   
 
Thinking about all that, Saito gave a deep and long sigh. Wardes seeing that, approached Saito and gave a pat on his shoulders.
 
Thinking about all that, Saito gave a deep and long sigh. Wardes seeing that, approached Saito and gave a pat on his shoulders.
   
“What's wrong? Are you having doubts about this trip? There's nothing to be afraid of! Aren't you the one who caught Fouquet of the Crumbling Earth? With your courage alone, nothing is impossible.”
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“What's wrong? Are you having doubts about this trip? There's nothing to be afraid of! Aren't you the one who caught Fouquet of the crumbling earth? With your courage alone, nothing is impossible.”
   
Wardes who had finished saying that, gave a broad smile. With that, Saito felt a tinge of remorsefulness.
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Wardes who had finished said that, gave a broad smile. With that, Saito felt a tinge of remorsefulness.
   
''Is he really that good of a person? I don't think that I can compare with him in any aspect. That's right. I think Louise would be married to him soon... Just thinking of that has made me alone and empty...''
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"Is he really that good of a person? I don't think that I can compare with him in any aspect. That's right. I think Louise would be married to him soon... Just thinking of that has made me alone and empty..."
   
 
Louise, not able to calm down due to Wardes' appearance, was feeling restless with anxiety. Saito had to turn his head away, he did not want to see Louise that way.
 
Louise, not able to calm down due to Wardes' appearance, was feeling restless with anxiety. Saito had to turn his head away, he did not want to see Louise that way.
   
Wardes gave a whistle, and a griffin appeared out from the morning clouds. It was a mythical beast with the head of a eagle and a body of a lion. And on its back were wings that were made up of beautiful white feathers.
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Wardes gave a whistle, and a griffin appeared out from the morning clouds. It was mythical beast with the head of a eagle and a body of a lion. And on its back was wings that were made up of beautiful white feathers.
   
 
Wardes had climbed to the back of the griffin with grace, and then extended a hand to Louise.
 
Wardes had climbed to the back of the griffin with grace, and then extended a hand to Louise.
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“Come over, my Louise.”
 
“Come over, my Louise.”
   
Louise lowered her head in hesitation and bashfulness, just like a girl who is in love. This made Saito even more jealous.
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Louise lowered her head in hesitation and bashfulness , just like a girl who is in love. This made Saito even more jealous.
   
''What does he think he's doing? “Come over, my Louise?” Your Louise!? Your Louise!? What an obnoxious freak!''
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What does he think he's doing? “Come over, my Louise?” Your Louise!? Your Louise!? What an obnoxious freak!
   
Saito being a male, had to keep those thoughts to himself and went up to the horse in silence in the end.
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Saito being a male, had to keep those thoughts to himself and went up the horse in silence in the end.
   
Louise, who was still hesitating, was suddenly carried up the griffin by Wardes.
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Louise, whom was still hesitating, was suddenly carried up the griffin by Wardes.
   
With one hand on the reins and his wand in the other, Wardes shouted, “Well everybody, onwards!”
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Wardes with one hand on the reins and another with is wand shouted, “Well everybody, onwards!”
   
 
The griffin moved forward. Following behind it were Guiche, looking full of admiration for Wardes; and Saito, feeling very down and dejected.
 
The griffin moved forward. Following behind it were Guiche, looking full of admiration for Wardes; and Saito, feeling very down and dejected.
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Saito thought to himself while staring at the blank sky.
 
Saito thought to himself while staring at the blank sky.
 
 
''How far would it be to Albion?''
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"How far would it be to Albion?"
 
 
 
 
   
 
From the headmaster's office window, Henrietta was watching Saito and group departing for Albion. Closing her eyes, she starting praying...
 
From the headmaster's office window, Henrietta was watching Saito and group departing for Albion. Closing her eyes, she starting praying...
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“Hmm...” said Osman while stroking his beard.
 
“Hmm...” said Osman while stroking his beard.
   
“According to the guard who was on duty that time, some noble knocked him out using wind magic. The person used the opportunity that most of the manpower was diverted to protect the princess to help Fouquet escape! This means that someone inside is a spy! Isn't that bad news?”
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“According to the guard who was on duty that time, some noble knocked him out using wind magic. The person used the opportunity that most of the manpower was diverted to protect the princess to help Fouquet escape! This means that someone inside is a spy! Isn't that bad news?”
   
 
Henrietta's face turned pale upon hearing the news.
 
Henrietta's face turned pale upon hearing the news.
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The headmaster shook his head.
 
The headmaster shook his head.
   
“Don't tell me that person is Louise's familiar. How could that be possible?! Isn't he just a commoner?”
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“Don't tell me that person is Louise's familiar. How could that be possible! Isn't he just a commoner?”
   
 
“Your highness, have you heard of the story of Founder Brimir before?”
 
“Your highness, have you heard of the story of Founder Brimir before?”
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“I have read most of the story...”
 
“I have read most of the story...”
   
The headmaster smiled and replied, “Then, do you know about Gandálfr?”
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The headmaster smiled and replied, “Then, do you know about Gandalfr?”
   
 
“Isn't that Founder Brimir's strongest familiar? Don't tell me...”
 
“Isn't that Founder Brimir's strongest familiar? Don't tell me...”
   
At this point of time, Headmaster Osman felt that he had already divulged too much. Regarding the secret of “Gandálfr” he always wanted to keep that to himself. Although he trusted Henrietta, he did not want the Royal family to know about it yet.
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At this point of time, Headmaster Osman felt that he had already divulged too much. Regarding the secret of “Gandalfr” he always wanted to keep that to himself. Although he trusted Henrietta, he did not want the Royal family to know about Gandalfr yet.
   
“Yes, he's as strong and capable as Gandálfr and furthermore, he comes from another world different from ours.”
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“Yes, He's as strong and capable as Gandalfr and furthermore, he comes from another world different from ours.”
   
 
“Another world?”
 
“Another world?”
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“Another world different from Halkeginia really exists...”
 
“Another world different from Halkeginia really exists...”
   
Henrietta gazed far away. The sensation of the youth's lip still lingered on Henrietta's lips. Touching her lips with her fingertips, she closed her eyes, smiled and said,
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Henrietta gazed far away. The sensation of the youth's lip still lingered on Henrietta's lips. Touching her lips with her fingertips, she closing her eyes, she smiled and said.
   
 
“Let me pray then, for the breeze that comes from another world.”
 
“Let me pray then, for the breeze that comes from another world.”
   
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It would take two days to reach Port City La Rochelle by horse from Tristain. The port city, is situated on a deep and narrow gorge. Because of this, it has a small population of three hundred. As La Rochelle is the gateway to Albion, the number of travelers is ten times more than the local population.
   
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Boulders could be seen on both sides of the narrow mountain pathway. People had carved holes in the boulders, turning them into taverns and shops. Although the buildings look ordinary, however, upon closer inspection, one can realize that all the buildings are carved out of a single rock, a feat done by Square ranked earth mages.
   
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On the narrow street, it appears to be dark even though it was afternoon due to the gorges blocking the sunlight. If one makes a turn on the street, they can see an even narrower street leading to a bar.
   
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On the signboard resembling a keg of wine, the shop's name is written – “Golden Wine Barrel Bar”. However, nothing in the shop resembles its name; the shop is just as dilapidated like an abandoned house. Piles of ruined chairs could be seen piling next to the door.
   
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Most of the patrons are gangsters and mercenaries. When drunk, they often fight over the smallest of things like staring incidents or minor squabbles.
It would take two days to reach Port City La Rochelle by horse from Tristain. The port city was situated on a deep and narrow gorge and because of this, it had a small population of three hundred. As La Rochelle was the gateway to Albion, the number of travelers was ten times more than the local population.
 
   
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Whenever they fight, they fight with their weapons. Therefore, it is common to see people dead or seriously injured in side the bar. The shopkeeper, not wanting to see any more injuries and deaths, put up a notice inside the shop.
Boulders could be seen on both sides of the narrow mountain pathway. People had carved holes in the boulders, turning them into taverns and shops. Although the buildings looked ordinary, upon closer inspection one could realize that all of them were carved out of a single rock, a feat done by Square ranked earth mages.
 
 
On the narrow street, it appeared to be dark even though it was afternoon due to the gorges blocking the sunlight. If one made a turn on the street, they could see an even narrower street leading to a bar.
 
 
On the signboard resembling a keg of wine, the shop's name was written – “Golden Wine Barrel Bar”. However, nothing in the shop resembled its name; the shop was dilapidated like an abandoned house. Piles of ruined chairs could be seen piling next to the door.
 
 
Most of the patrons were gangsters and mercenaries. When drunk, they would often fight over the smallest of things like staring incidents or minor squabbles.
 
 
Whenever they'd fight, they would fight with their weapons. Therefore, it was common to see people dead or seriously injured inside the bar. The shopkeeper, not wanting to see any more injuries and deaths, put up a notice inside the shop.
 
   
 
“Please use the chairs when you fight in here.”
 
“Please use the chairs when you fight in here.”
   
From the notice, the customers could feel the shopkeeper's helplessness. So they started to use the chairs instead of their weapons when fighting each other. Even though there were still injuries, no one was killed anymore. From then on, chairs that were destroyed during fights got piled next to the door.
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From the notice, the customers could feel the shopkeeper's helplessness. So they started to use the chairs instead of their weapons when they are fighting each other. Even though there are still casualties, no one was killed anymore. From then on, chairs that were destroyed during fights got piled next to the door.
   
Today, the “Golden Wine Barrel Bar” was filled with patrons as usual. Almost all the patrons were mercenaries returning from Albion which was in an internal strife.
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Today, “Golden Wine Barrel Bar” is filled with patrons as usual. Almost all the patrons are mercenaries returning from Albion which was in an internal strife.
   
 
“The king of Albion is finished!”
 
“The king of Albion is finished!”
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“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”
 
“If so, let us offer a toast to the republic!”
   
The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the royalist to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This was not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they valued their lives more than their beliefs, and so they felt that they were not obliged to fight to their death for their clients.
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The people offering toasts to themselves were formerly mercenaries hired by the royalist to fight along side with them. However, faced with the imminent defeat of their clients, they all decided to retreat back here. This is not considered to be a dishonorable act. As mercenaries, they value their lives more than their beliefs, and so they are not obliged to fight to their death for their clients.
   
As they were drinking, the bar's door opened and a rather tall lady entered the bar. The hood the lady wore covered most of her face except for the lower part. However, from just the lower part of her face one could already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.
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As they were drinking, the bar's door opened. A rather tall lady had entered the bar. The hood the lady had worn covered most of her face except the lower part of her face. However, from just the lower part of her face, one can already be sure about her beauty. As it was rare for such an attractive lady to come to such a place alone, all eyes on the bar were already on her.
   
 
The lady, unfazed by all the eyes staring at her, ordered some wine and food and sat on a table in a corner of the bar. After the food was served, she promptly paid up.
 
The lady, unfazed by all the eyes staring at her, ordered some wine and food and sat on a table in a corner of the bar. After the food was served, she promptly paid up.
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“That's right! There are lots of dangerous characters around. Don't worry though, we'll be here to protect you.”
 
“That's right! There are lots of dangerous characters around. Don't worry though, we'll be here to protect you.”
   
With a vile smile on his face, one of them lifted up the lady's hood. Whistles and catcalls could be heard once the hood was removed. The lady was quite a beauty, with her beautiful eyes and elegant nose.
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With a vile smile on this face, one of them lifted up the lady's hood. Whistles and catcalls could be heard once the hood was removed. The lady was quite a beauty, with her beautiful eyes and elegant nose.
   
This beautiful lady was none other than Fouquet of the crumbling earth.
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This beautiful lady is none other than Fouquet of the crumbling earth.
   
 
“She's really top notch! Look at her skin! It's as white as ivory!”
 
“She's really top notch! Look at her skin! It's as white as ivory!”
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Even with the dagger pointed on her face, Fouquet showed no fear. With a slight movement, she reached for a wand.
 
Even with the dagger pointed on her face, Fouquet showed no fear. With a slight movement, she reached for a wand.
   
In an instant, she chanted her incantations. With that, the dagger that the man held turned into earth and settled onto the table.
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In a instant, she chanted her incantations. With that, the dagger that the man held turned into earth and settled onto the table.
   
 
“She's.. she's a noble!”
 
“She's.. she's a noble!”
   
The men immediately backed away from her. As Fouquet was not wearing a cloak<ref>All nobles wear cloaks with an insignia in front.</ref>, none of them knew that she was a magician.
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The men immediately back away from her. As Fouquet was not wearing a <span id="back_to_Cloak">[[Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume2_Chapter4#Cloak|cloak]]</span>,none of them knew that she was a magician.
   
 
“Even though I'm a magician, I'm not a noble,” Fouquet said nonchalantly.
 
“Even though I'm a magician, I'm not a noble,” Fouquet said nonchalantly.
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“No. That's not what I meant. You have gold, don't you?”
 
“No. That's not what I meant. You have gold, don't you?”
   
Fouquet placed a bag full of gold onto the table. After inspecting the contents of the bag, the veteran said, "Wow... Isn't this écu gold?”
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Fouquet placed a bag full of gold onto the table. After inspecting the contents of the bag, the veteran said, "Wow... Isn't this Ecu Gold?”
   
 
The bar's door opened again. This time, a man wearing a white mask had entered the bar. He was the same man who had helped Fouquet escape from prison.
 
The bar's door opened again. This time, a man wearing a white mask had entered the bar. He was the same man who had helped Fouquet escape from prison.
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“Well, aren't you early.”
 
“Well, aren't you early.”
   
Fouquet seeing that man, gave a low “Hmm” as a reply. The mercenaries, seeing that man's peculiar dress, were all quite surprised.
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Fouquet seeing that man, gave a low “Hmm” as a reply. The mercenaries, seeing that man peculiar dressing, were all quite surprised.
 
“They have started on their journey,” the masked man said.
 
“They have started on their journey,” the masked man said.
   
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The man in the white mask gave a once over at the mercenaries that Fouquet had hired.
 
The man in the white mask gave a once over at the mercenaries that Fouquet had hired.
   
“All of you were formerly employed by the Albion royalists. Am I right?”
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“All of you were formerly employed by the Albion royalist. Am I right?”
   
 
“That was until last month,” one of the mercenaries replied with glee.
 
“That was until last month,” one of the mercenaries replied with glee.
   
“But the soon to be defeated royalists aren't our employers anymore.”
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“But the soon to be defeated royalist aren't our employers anymore.”
   
 
The mercenaries laughed in unison. The man in the white mask laughed as well.
 
The mercenaries laughed in unison. The man in the white mask laughed as well.
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“I'll fulfill all your monetary desires. However, I'm not like the soon to be defeated royalists, if anyone dares to run away from battle, I'll kill him myself.”
 
“I'll fulfill all your monetary desires. However, I'm not like the soon to be defeated royalists, if anyone dares to run away from battle, I'll kill him myself.”
   
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Since departing from the magical academy, Wardes' griffin has been endlessly moving towards their destination. Even though the rest of the group have already changed their mount twice, Wardes' griffin just like its master, appeared to be tireless.
   
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“Hold on, isn't the pace too fast for us?” Louise, who was on Wardes' griffin, asked. Over the duration of the journey, Louise spoke in a more informal manner to Wardes then when they were reunited. But that was also party due to the Viscount's request.
 
 
 
Since departing from the magical academy, Wardes' griffin had been endlessly moving towards their destination. Even though the rest of the group had already changed their mount twice, Wardes' griffin, just like its master, appeared to be tireless.
 
 
“Hold on, isn't the pace too fast for us?” Louise, who was on Wardes' griffin, asked. Over the duration of the journey, Louise spoke in a more informal manner to Wardes than when they were reunited. But that was also partly due to the Viscount's request.
 
   
 
“Guiche and Saito are already on the brink of exhaustion.”
 
“Guiche and Saito are already on the brink of exhaustion.”
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“If that's the case, why don't we just leave them behind?”
 
“If that's the case, why don't we just leave them behind?”
   
“We can't do that!”
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“We can't do this!”
   
 
“Why?”
 
“Why?”
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“You seem protective of them both. Which one is your sweetheart?”
 
“You seem protective of them both. Which one is your sweetheart?”
   
Louise's face immediately turned red and replied, “What... What sweetheart!?”
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Louise face immediately turned red and replied, “What... What sweetheart!?”
   
“That sets my heart at ease. If my fiancée tells me that she already has a sweetheart, I would die of a broken heart,” replied Wardes with a smile.
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“That sets my heart at ease. If my fiance tells me that she already has a sweetheart, I would die of a broken heart,” replied Wardes with a smile.
   
 
“But that was only something that our parents had agreed on.”
 
“But that was only something that our parents had agreed on.”
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“But in my eyes, you're forever that small and dainty Louise.”
 
“But in my eyes, you're forever that small and dainty Louise.”
   
Louise remembered that dream that she'd had a few days back, where she was back in the courtyard of her home, la Vallière.
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Louise remembered that dream that she'd had a few days back, where she was back in the courtyard of her home, La Vallière.
   
 
The secret boat on the forgotten lake...
 
The secret boat on the forgotten lake...
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The marriage that was decided by her parents.
 
The marriage that was decided by her parents.
   
The betrothal that was decided since youth. The one that she would be married to. Her fiancée.
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The betrothal that was decided since youth. The one that she would be married to. Her fiance.
   
 
At that time, she still did not fully understand what was going on. She only knew that, so long as she was with the man she had admired, she would be happy.
 
At that time, she still did not fully understand what was going on. She only knew that, so long as she was with the man she had admired, she would be happy.
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“From then on, you seldom went back to your estate again,” replied Louise while closing her eyes. She too seemed to be immersed in her memories.
 
“From then on, you seldom went back to your estate again,” replied Louise while closing her eyes. She too seemed to be immersed in her memories.
   
“My house and estate were cared for by my butler, Galgann, while I put all my effort serving the nation. After so long, I finally made a name for myself, accomplishing what I had decided upon leaving my homeland.”
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“My house and estate was taken cared by butler Galgann, while I put all my effort serving the nation. After so long, I finally made a name for myself, accomplishing what I had decided upon leaving my homeland.”
   
“What was it that you decided upon?”
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“What was that you have decided upon?”
   
 
“To ask your hand for marriage once I have made a name for myself.”
 
“To ask your hand for marriage once I have made a name for myself.”
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“You're kidding right, Viscount? You're so popular among the girls, you have no need to honor your promise to such an insignificant me.”
 
“You're kidding right, Viscount? You're so popular among the girls, you have no need to honor your promise to such an insignificant me.”
   
About Wardes' betrothal. Louise had cleanly forgotten it until she had that dream a few days back. The bridal pact to Wardes was all but a fleeting dream. In her opinion, it was only an agreement made on a whim.
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About Wardes' betrothal. Louise had cleanly forgotten it until she had that dream a few days back. The bridal pact to Wardes was all but a fleeting dream. In her opinion, it was only a agreement made on a whim.
   
After Wardes had left his estate ten years ago, Louise had never seen him again. Wardes had already become part of her distant memory. Distant memories had suddenly become reality.
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After Wardes had left his estate ten years ago, Louise had never seen him again. Wardes had already became part of her distant memory. Distant memories had suddenly became reality.
   
“This journey is a good chance for us to regain those feelings we had when you were young,” Wardes said with a gentle and calm tone.
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“This journey is a good chance for us to regain those feeling we had when you were young,” Wardes said with a gentle and calm tone.
   
 
Louise thought to herself, do I really love Wardes?
 
Louise thought to herself, do I really love Wardes?
   
Even though she did not dislike him and she did admire him when she was young, that was all in the past.
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Even though she did not dislike him and she did admire him when she was young, but that was all in the past.
   
Suddenly faced with a fiancée and probably marriage, she did not know what to do. Furthermore, they had been apart for so many years, she did not really know whether she still had any feelings for him.
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Suddenly faced with a fiance and probably marriage, she did not know what to do. Furthermore, they have been apart for so many years, she did not really know whether if she still had any feelings for him.
   
 
Louise turned her head and looked behind.
 
Louise turned her head and looked behind.
   
She saw Saito prostrating on the horse, it looked like he had nearly reached his limit. Louise pouted her lips. Good for nothing! As soon as she thought of that, she became anxious and her heart pounded furiously.
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She saw Saito prostrating on the horse, it looks like he has nearly reached his limit. Louise pouted her lips. Good for nothing! As soon as she thought of that, she became anxious and her heart pounded furiously.
   
“We have already been on these horses for nearly a whole day, doesn't he get tired? Are those griffin knights monsters?” Guiche, who was also lifelessly slouching on the horse, asked.
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“We have already been on the horse for nearly a whole day, doesn't he get tired? Are those griffin knights monsters?” Guiche, who was also lifelessly slouching on the horse, asked.
   
“Who knows?” Saito replied lethargically. He felt embittered each time Wardes touched Louise. He touched her again...this time hugging her by the shoulder... ''What is that guy up to... Even though you're Louise's fiancée, even though I have no right to stop you, you should have at least done it somewhere else where I could not see...''
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“Who knows?” Saito replied lethargically. He felt embittered each time Wardes touched Louise. He touched her again.. This time hugging her by the shoulder... What is that guy up to... Even though you're Louise's fiance, even though I have no right to stop you, you should have at least done it somewhere else where I could not see...
   
 
Each time Saito thought of that, he became more tired and his heart became heavier.
 
Each time Saito thought of that, he became more tired and his heart became heavier.
   
Guiche, looking at Saito in such a state, began teasing him. “Heh heh... Don't tell me you're jealous?” Guiche said with a snicker.
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Guiche looking at Saito in such a state, began teasing him. “Heh heh... Don't tell me you're jealous?” Guiche said with a snicker.
   
 
“Ah! What are you implying?”
 
“Ah! What are you implying?”
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“Shut your mouth, mole boy!”
 
“Shut your mouth, mole boy!”
   
“Mwahaha... You actually carried a love for your master that would never flower? To tell you honestly, love between people of different status will only result in tragedy.”
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“Mwahaha... You actually carried a love for you master that would never flower? To tell you honestly, love between people of different status will only result in tragedy.”
   
 
“Stop talking nonsense! How could I ever like such a person like her? I admit that she's cute. However, she has an extremely bad character.”
 
“Stop talking nonsense! How could I ever like such a person like her? I admit that she's cute. However, she has an extremely bad character.”
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Guiche suddenly looked to the front and exclaimed, “Look! They're kissing!”
 
Guiche suddenly looked to the front and exclaimed, “Look! They're kissing!”
   
Saito, shocked, immediately turned to the front. However, Wardes and Louise did not kiss.
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Saito shocked, immediately turned to the front. However, Wardes and Louise did not kiss.
   
 
He then looked again at Guiche. Guiche was barely controlling his laughter.
 
He then looked again at Guiche. Guiche was barely controlling his laughter.
   
“Arggh!” Saito shouted and pounced on Guiche. Both of them fell off their horses and began fighting each other on the ground.
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“Arggh!” Saito shouted and pounced on Guiche. Both of the fell off their horses and began fighting each other on the ground.
   
 
“Hey! If you guys continue fighting, I'll have to leave you both behind!” Wardes shouted.
 
“Hey! If you guys continue fighting, I'll have to leave you both behind!” Wardes shouted.
   
Guiche quickly got back on the horse. Meanwhile, Saito, realizing that Louise was looking at him, turned his head away.
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Guiche quickly got back on the horse. Meanwhile, Saito realizing that Louise was looking at him, turned his head away.
   
As they had been traveling at full speed and exchanged their tired horses for fresh ones several times, they reached the outskirts of La Rochelle that night.
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As they had been traveling at full speed and exchanged their tired horses for fresh ones several times, they reached the outskirts of La Rochelle by nightfall.
   
Saito looked around in astonishment. ''Aren't we approaching a port? Why do I still see mountains everywhere? Maybe once we cross this mountain we should be able to see the ocean.''
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Saito looked around in astonishment. Aren't we approaching a port? Why do I still see mountains everywhere? Maybe once we cross this mountain we should be able to see the ocean.
   
 
Traveling under the moonlight, Saito and the group finally saw a narrow mountain pathway. Buildings which were carved from boulders could be seen on both sides of the pathway.
 
Traveling under the moonlight, Saito and the group finally saw a narrow mountain pathway. Buildings which were carved from boulders could be seen on both sides of the pathway.
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Hearing Saito asking, Guiche replied sarcastically “Don't tell me that you don't even know where Albion is?”
 
Hearing Saito asking, Guiche replied sarcastically “Don't tell me that you don't even know where Albion is?”
   
Although Saito and Guiche were nearly reaching their physical limits, the thought of 'Once we reach town we can finally rest' gave them the strength to engage in small talk.
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Although Saito and Guiche are nearly reaching their physical limits, the thought of 'Once we reach town we can finally rest' gave them the strength to engage in small talk.
   
 
“Yeah, I don't know.”
 
“Yeah, I don't know.”
   
 
“Really?” Guiche replied with laughter. But Saito did not laugh.
 
“Really?” Guiche replied with laughter. But Saito did not laugh.
 
 
“I have no common knowledge of this world and please don't assume that I do.”
 
“I have no common knowledge of this world and please don't assume that I do.”
   
Suddenly, from the top of the cliff, torches were thrown at their horses. The burning torches illuminated the ravine they were about to cross.
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Suddenly from top of the cliff, torches there thrown at the their horses. The burning torches illuminated the ravine they were about to cross.
   
 
“What's... What's happening !?” Guiche cried.
 
“What's... What's happening !?” Guiche cried.
   
The horses, frightened by the burning torches, threw Saito and Guiche off their backs.
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The horses, frightened by the burning torches threw Saito and Guiche off its backs.
   
 
As they fell, a hail of arrows showered upon them.
 
As they fell, a hail of arrows showered upon them.
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“It's an ambush!” Guiche shouted.
 
“It's an ambush!” Guiche shouted.
   
Saito began to panic, just as he tried to unsheathe Derflinger, which was slung behind his back, two more arrows flew towards him.
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Saito began to panic, just as he wanted to unsheathe Deriflinger which was slung behind his back, two more arrows flew towards him.
   
 
“Whoa!”
 
“Whoa!”
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“I'm all right...” replied Saito.
 
“I'm all right...” replied Saito.
   
''Damn it! Louise's fiancée just saved my life.'' That sense of dismal kept expanding, causing Saito to feel inferior. He unsheathed Derflinger. The runes on his left hand started glowing again, reliving him of the exhaustion that he had been suffering.
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Damn it! Louise's fiance just saved my life. That sense of dismal kept expanding, causing Saito to feel inferior. He unsheathed Deriflinger. The runes of his left hand started glowing again, reliving him of the exhaustion that he had been suffering.
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“I'm so lonely, partner. It's too much of you to keep putting me inside the scabbard.”
 
“I'm so lonely, partner. It's too much of you to keep putting me inside the scabbard.”
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Saito looked at the top of the cliff, but no arrows could be seen.
 
Saito looked at the top of the cliff, but no arrows could be seen.
   
“It was most likely thieves or bandits.” Wardes said.
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“It was most probably thieves or bandits.” Wardes said.
   
Louise, suddenly realizing something exclaimed, “Could it be the nobles from Albion?”
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Louise whom suddenly realizing something exclaimed, “Could it be the nobles from Albion?”
   
 
“Nobles would not use arrows.”
 
“Nobles would not use arrows.”
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Screams could be heard from the cliffs.
 
Screams could be heard from the cliffs.
   
Arrows could be seen shooting towards the night sky. However, all the arrows were parried away by wind magic.
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Arrows could been seen shooting towards the night sky. However, all the arrows are parried away by wind magic.
   
After that, a small hurricane created by magic blew away all the archers.
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After that a small hurricane created by magic blew away all the archers.
   
 
“Hmm... Aren't those wind incantations?” Wardes mumbled to himself.
 
“Hmm... Aren't those wind incantations?” Wardes mumbled to himself.
   
The archers, attempting to ambush them, rolled down the cliffs after being blown away by the magical tornado. They landed hard onto the ground, giving out moans of pain.
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The archers attempting to ambush them rolled down the cliffs after being blown away by the magical tornado. They landed hard onto the ground, giving out moans of pain.
   
With the moon as the background, a familiar sight appeared. “It's Sylphid!” Louise shouted confoundedly.
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With the moon as the background appeared a familiar sight. “It's Slyphid!” Louise shouted confoundedly.
   
It was Tabitha's wind dragon. After it landed, a red-haired girl jumped down from the dragon and flicked her hair.
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It's was Tabitha's wind dragon. After it landed, a red-haired girl jumped down from the dragon and flicked her hair.
   
 
“Sorry to keep you waiting.”
 
“Sorry to keep you waiting.”
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“Secret mission? You should have said so earlier! How would I know if you did not tell me about it? Anyways, be thankful to me, for I have apprehended the people who wanted to ambush you!”
 
“Secret mission? You should have said so earlier! How would I know if you did not tell me about it? Anyways, be thankful to me, for I have apprehended the people who wanted to ambush you!”
   
Kirche said this while pointing to the people who were lying on the ground. Those ambushers were unable to move due to their injuries and hurled abuses towards Louise and the group. Guiche approached them and began interrogating them.
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Kirche said while pointed to the people who were lying on the ground. Those ambushers were unable to move due to their injuries and hurled abuses towards Louise and the group. Guiche approached them and began interrogating them.
   
Louise, crossing her arms, gave a vicious stare at Kirche.
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Louise crossing her arms, gave a vicious stare at Kirche.
   
 
“Don't be mistaken! I'm not here to assist you. Am I right?”
 
“Don't be mistaken! I'm not here to assist you. Am I right?”
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Kirche posed suggestively, and then leaned on Wardes, who was on the griffin, and said, "Your beard makes you very manly. Do you know what passion looks like?”
 
Kirche posed suggestively, and then leaned on Wardes, who was on the griffin, and said, "Your beard makes you very manly. Do you know what passion looks like?”
   
Wardes glanced at Kirche and proceeded to push her away using his left hand.
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Wardes glanced at Kirche and proceed to push her away using his left hand.
   
 
“Huh?”
 
“Huh?”
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“But why? I just told you that I liked you!”
 
“But why? I just told you that I liked you!”
   
That was the first time that Kirche received such cold treatment from a male. Usually any male would be mesmerized after some sweet-talking from her. But Wardes was not in the least interested. Kirche gazed at Wardes with her mouth wide open.
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That was the first time that Kirche received such cold treatment from a male. Usually any male would be mesmerized after some sweet-talking from her. But Wardes was not in the least interested. Kirche dazed at Wardes with her mouth wide open.
   
“I'm sorry. But I cannot let my fiancée misunderstand.” Wardes said while looking at Louise; her face turned red from embarrassment in an instant.
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“I'm sorry. But I cannot let my fiance misunderstand.” Wardes said while looking at Louise, her face turned red from embarrassment in an instant.
   
“What? She's your fiancée!?”
+
“What? She's your fiance!?”
   
Wardes nodded in response. Kirche took a closer look at Wardes. She did not realize it before, but Wardes' eyes showed no emotion at all. Just like ice.
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Wardes nodded in response. Kirche took a closer look at Wardes, she did not realize it before. Wardes' eyes showed no emotion at all. Just like ice.
   
 
She then looked at Saito. He looked listless and was talking to his sword rather dejectedly.
 
She then looked at Saito. He looked listless and was talking to his sword rather dejectedly.
   
''Eh? Is he looking like that because I made advances on Louise's fiancée?'' As she thought about that, Saito suddenly looked cuter. Looking at Saito, she ran towards him and hugged him immediately.
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Eh? Is he looking like that because I made advances on Louise's fiance? As she thought about that, Saito suddenly looked cuter. Looking at Saito, she ran towards him and hugged him immediately.
   
 
“Actually, I'm here because I'm worried for my beloved!”
 
“Actually, I'm here because I'm worried for my beloved!”
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“Liar.”
 
“Liar.”
   
''Is he jealous?'' Thinking of that, Kirche's passion in her heart burned brightly.
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Is he jealous? Thinking of that, Kirche's passion in her heart burned brightly.
   
 
“Cute! So cute! Are you really jealous?”
 
“Cute! So cute! Are you really jealous?”
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“Please forgive me! I may have looked at other men, but in the end, the only one that I love is you!”
 
“Please forgive me! I may have looked at other men, but in the end, the only one that I love is you!”
   
Louise bit her lips, wanting to tell Kirche off. She could not tolerate Kirche for seducing her familiar.
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Louise bit her lips, wanting to tell Kirche off. She could not tolerate the Kirche for seducing her familiar.
   
 
Just then, Wardes gently placed his hands on Louise's shoulder. Wardes looked at Louise lovingly and gave her a smile.
 
Just then, Wardes gently placed his hands on Louise's shoulder. Wardes looked at Louise lovingly and gave her a smile.
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“Viscount...”
 
“Viscount...”
   
Guiche, who was interrogating the ambushers, had just returned.
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Guiche who was interrogating those ambushers had just returned.
   
 
“Viscount, those ambushers admitted that they were robbers.”
 
“Viscount, those ambushers admitted that they were robbers.”
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Wardes effortlessly mounted back to the top of his griffin, carrying Louise up with him. He then announced to everyone, “We'll spend the night at La Rochelle, tomorrow we will take the first ship to Albion at the break of dawn.”
 
Wardes effortlessly mounted back to the top of his griffin, carrying Louise up with him. He then announced to everyone, “We'll spend the night at La Rochelle, tomorrow we will take the first ship to Albion at the break of dawn.”
   
Kirche sat behind Saito, sharing the same horse with him. Guiche also remounted his horse. As for Tabitha, she was still reading her book on her wind dragon.
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Kirche sat behind Saito, sharing the same horse with him. Guiche also mounted back to his horse. As for Tabitha, she was still reading her book on her wind dragon.
   
In front of them, sandwiched between two cliffs, was the port city La Rochelle, dazzling with lights.
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To front of them, sandwiched between two cliffs, was the port city La Rochelle, dazzling with lights.
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