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Parents' evaluation: "You should study more. You're on the slow side." |
Parents' evaluation: "You should study more. You're on the slow side." |
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− | Being slow, he was rarely bothered by accidents, and accepted pretty much anything |
+ | Being slow, he was rarely bothered by accidents, and accepted pretty much anything – relative to most people, at least. Earlier, when he saw people flying, he made a commotion, but given that an ordinary person would have been so shocked as to be brought to their knees, he owed much to his disposition. |
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Saito sprung upon Louise. |
Saito sprung upon Louise. |
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+ | "Kya–! What are you doing?!" |
Knocking over a chair, he bore down on her. |
Knocking over a chair, he bore down on her. |
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A lacy camisole and matching panties. White, too. ''What exquisite and delicate pieces'', Saito thought as his face began to flush. He clenched them tightly as a mix of indignation and delight welled up. |
A lacy camisole and matching panties. White, too. ''What exquisite and delicate pieces'', Saito thought as his face began to flush. He clenched them tightly as a mix of indignation and delight welled up. |
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− | "Why do I have |
+ | "Why do I have to– Your underwear?! Wash them?! Frankly, I'm both flattered and offended!" |
He bolted upright, without even realizing he'd done so. Louise was pulling a large nightgown over her head. And in the dim light thrown off by the lamp, he could see the outline of her figure. While he couldn't make out any other details, it didn't seem as though she was embarrassed. It was kind of disappointing. He felt as though his masculinity were being denied. |
He bolted upright, without even realizing he'd done so. Louise was pulling a large nightgown over her head. And in the dim light thrown off by the lamp, he could see the outline of her figure. While he couldn't make out any other details, it didn't seem as though she was embarrassed. It was kind of disappointing. He felt as though his masculinity were being denied. |
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− | "You're my familiar, right? Laundry, cleaning, other menial tasks |
+ | "You're my familiar, right? Laundry, cleaning, other menial tasks – they're naturally your job." |
Saito pulled the blanket over his head again. |
Saito pulled the blanket over his head again. |