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===Chapter Three: Karin the Heavy Wind===
 
===Chapter Three: Karin the Heavy Wind===
   
It was the morning of the second day since leaving Tristain when the Queen's carriage crossed the drawbridge of the La Vallière residence. Since it was a low-profile visit, other than Agnes and Colbert, there were only five musketeers guarding the wagon.
 
   
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It was the morning of the second day since leaving Tristain when the Queen's carriage crossed the drawbridge of the La Vallière residence. Since it was a low-profile visit, other than Agnes and Colbert, there were only five musketeers guarding the wagon.
   
 
As the party passed the bridge and gates, the servants who gathered there rejoiced. The flagpole in the front yard had the Lilies emblem, the arms of the Tristanian royal family, on it. A small courtesy for the incognito queen.
 
As the party passed the bridge and gates, the servants who gathered there rejoiced. The flagpole in the front yard had the Lilies emblem, the arms of the Tristanian royal family, on it. A small courtesy for the incognito queen.
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“But the Manticore Corps works at the castle now. Besides, that shuttlecock decoration… That hat belongs to a commander.”
 
“But the Manticore Corps works at the castle now. Besides, that shuttlecock decoration… That hat belongs to a commander.”
   
“But the body is too thin to be De Cesaire.”
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“But the body is too thin to be Do Zessar.”
   
 
“Perhaps it’s not his to begin with.”
 
“Perhaps it’s not his to begin with.”
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Then Agnes took one step forth and blocked the knight’s path. The lower half of his face, under the knight's hat decorated with shuttlecock, was covered with an iron mask. Feeling intense pressure for the moment, Agnes grasped the handle of her sword.
 
Then Agnes took one step forth and blocked the knight’s path. The lower half of his face, under the knight's hat decorated with shuttlecock, was covered with an iron mask. Feeling intense pressure for the moment, Agnes grasped the handle of her sword.
   
“Are you a friend of Duke of La Valliere? To go out to meet Her Majesty like this - it’s too much even for a prank. Introduce yourself.”
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“Are you a friend of Duke de La Valliere? To go out to meet Her Majesty like this - it’s too much even for a prank. Introduce yourself.”
   
 
However, the knight ignored Agnes's words, and knelt down on one knee in respect.
 
However, the knight ignored Agnes's words, and knelt down on one knee in respect.
   
“It's been a long time, Your Majesty. However, you will surely not remember me, because it has been a good 30 years since the last time I served the castle.”
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“It's been a long time, Your Majesty. However, you will surely not remember me, because it has been good 30 years since the last time I served the castle.”
   
 
“Umm…”
 
“Umm…”
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“Yes, I am honored that you know the name.”
 
“Yes, I am honored that you know the name.”
   
“Of course I know – you are infamous!<!--INfamous? In this situation?--> Agnes, this is Karin the Heavy Wind, the legendary magic knight commander! I grew up hearing about her heroic adventures!”
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“Of course I know – you are infamous! Agnes, this is Karin the Heavy Wind, the legendary magic knight commander! I grew up hearing about her heroic adventures!”
   
 
Henrietta had the face of a starry-eyed little girl as she took Karin’s hand.
 
Henrietta had the face of a starry-eyed little girl as she took Karin’s hand.
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“Then, this…”
 
“Then, this…”
   
“In other words, I am the Duchess of La Vallière – the mother of Louise…”
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“In other words, I am the Duchess de La Vallière – the mother of Louise…”
   
 
“I took the opportunity to marry and took off my armor. But it is a long story since that time, so please pardon me.”
 
“I took the opportunity to marry and took off my armor. But it is a long story since that time, so please pardon me.”
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“Punishment?! Heavy Wind’s punishment on Louise?!”
 
“Punishment?! Heavy Wind’s punishment on Louise?!”
   
Henrietta watched Karin in deep shock, shaking her head. Her face turned pale. She had gone there with the intention to punish Louise, so her feelings withered for a moment. But this person would give a much more severe punishment than she herself intended. Should the punishment be dealt, Louise would die for sure!
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Henrietta watched Karin in deep shock, shaking her head. Her face turned pale. She came here with the intention to punish Louise, so her feelings withered for a moment. But this person would give a much more severe punishment than she herself intended to. Should the punishment be dealt, Louise would die for sure!
   
 
“You should not be violent! I came here to deal with Louise’s punishment myself. Because I am young, at first I was resented. However, I thought about it a lot. Though Louise passed national borders certainly without my permission… I am also worried about it as a friend too. Just a strong reprimand will do, I do not intend to give a violent penalty.”
 
“You should not be violent! I came here to deal with Louise’s punishment myself. Because I am young, at first I was resented. However, I thought about it a lot. Though Louise passed national borders certainly without my permission… I am also worried about it as a friend too. Just a strong reprimand will do, I do not intend to give a violent penalty.”
   
“Your Majesty, your words are kind, and you feel regretful. However, Your Majesty's royal prerogative is of the sacred non-aggression given by the Founder. Thus, you have to protect the laws of the country promulgated in that name, too.”
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“Your Majesty, your words are kind, and you feel regretful. However, Your Majesty's royal prerogative is of the sacred nonaggression given by the Founder. Thus, you have to protect the laws of the country promulgated in that name, too.”
   
 
Karin quickly raised her right hand. From the shade of the castle, a huge, black shadow flew. A strong dust storm rose as it touched the ground.
 
Karin quickly raised her right hand. From the shade of the castle, a huge, black shadow flew. A strong dust storm rose as it touched the ground.
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La Vallière's castle was closer to the border of Germania than the capital. After passing the nation's borders at three o'clock, they could already see the high steeples of the castle.
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La Vallière's castle is closer to the border of Germania than the capital. After passing the nation's borders at three o'clock, they could already see the high steeples of the castle.
   
 
“H-Hey Louise… Your mother is really the Heavy Wind of the Manticore Corps?”
 
“H-Hey Louise… Your mother is really the Heavy Wind of the Manticore Corps?”
   
Saito opened his mouth, breaking the heavy silence. However, Louise did not say a thing. Those days, Louise passed her time trembling and staring at the ceiling.
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Saito opened his mouth, breaking the heavy silence. However, Louise did not say a thing. Those days, Louise passed her time trembling and staring at the ceiling.
   
“As good as thirty years passed, maybe she's changed? Nah? It is not unreasonable that the scary knight of the past mellowed out over the years. Even if you say punishment, I think you will just be grounded, at most.”
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“As good as thirty years passed, maybe she's changed? Nah? It is not unreasonable that the scary knight of the past mellowed out over the years. Even if you say punishment, I think you will be just grounded, at most.”
   
 
“…You don’t understand.”
 
“…You don’t understand.”
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“W-What’s that?!”
 
“W-What’s that?!”
   
The moment Saito was dumb-founded… the tornado enlarged and hit the entire carriage with enormous strength. The violent power blew off the harness that tied horses to the wagon and sucked it and the horses in, lifting them up into the sky.
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The moment when Saito was dumb-founded… the tornado enlarged and hit the entire carriage with enormous power. The violent power blew off the harness that tied horses to the wagon and sucked it and the horses in, lifting them up into the sky.
   
“What’s thaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!” Saito shouted.
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“What’s thaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!”
   
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Saito shouted.
“Giyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!” Guiche screamed.
 
   
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“Giyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!”
“Uwaaaaaaaaaaaa!” Malicorne bellowed.
 
   
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Guiche screamed.
“Nooooooooooooooooooooo!” Montmorency cried.
 
   
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“Uwaaaaaaaaaaaa!”
“I give uuuup…” Kirche complained.
 
   
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Malicorne bellowed.
“…” Tabitha was silent.
 
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“Nooooooooooooooooooooo!”
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Montmorency cried.
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“I give uuuup…”
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Kirche complained.
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“…”
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Tabitha was silent.
   
 
It was as if a huge hand made of wind grabbed the carriage and lifted it up. Six people in the wagon were shaken like a cocktail in a shaker.
 
It was as if a huge hand made of wind grabbed the carriage and lifted it up. Six people in the wagon were shaken like a cocktail in a shaker.
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“Falling! Falling! Falling!”
 
“Falling! Falling! Falling!”
   
''Is this how it feels to be in a lift that had its cable cut?'' Saito thought dumbly as the carriage casually floated in the air.
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''Is this how it feels to be in a lift that had its cable cut?'' Saito had a thought dumbly as the carriage was casually floated in the air.
   
 
The knight had placed the “Levitation” spell on them.
 
The knight had placed the “Levitation” spell on them.
   
Though the wagon slowly landed, the party was lying scattered and worn out inside the carriage.
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Though the wagon slowly landed, the party was lying scattered and worn out inside the carriage.
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Saito, thinking desperately, crawled out of the wagon. Louise was lying shaking on the ground.
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Saito desperately thinking, crawled out of the wagon. Louise was lying shaking on the ground.
   
 
“Lou-i-se!”
 
“Lou-i-se!”
   
Though he tried to shout and run up to her, he could not move well.
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Though he tried to shout and run up to her, but he could not move well.
   
Riding atop a huge manticore, the knight wearing a black mantle appeared. That must have been Louise’s mama. However, she was frightening. Standing there, it looked like “stern” was the character of this knight and that “fear” was deeply emblazed in this armored doll-like figure.
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Riding atop a huge manticore, the knight wearing a black mantle appeared. That must be Louise’s mama. However, she was frightening. Standing there, it looked like “stern” was the character of this knight and that “fear” was deeply em-blazed in this armored doll-like figure.
   
 
Then she stopped at the fallen Louise and called out her daughter.
 
Then she stopped at the fallen Louise and called out her daughter.
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“Mother-sama…”
 
“Mother-sama…”
   
She was shaking violently as if suffering from a strong cold. Like a small dog threatened by a big German shepherd. Though Louise could be scary when she was angry as well, this had a completely different feeling to it – it was like comparing a bear to a rat.
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She was shaking violently as if suffering from a strong cold. Like a small dog threatened by a big German shepherd. Though Louise could be scary when she is angry too, this had a completely different feeling to it – it was like comparing bear to a rat.
   
 
“You. Report what you have broken to your mother.”
 
“You. Report what you have broken to your mother.”
   
“That… b-border without permission, umm…”
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“That…b-border without permission, umm…”
   
 
“I cannot hear you.”
 
“I cannot hear you.”
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Her pink hair was disheveled and her skirt was blown off somewhere, revealing her underwear in their full glory, but it was not the place for Louise to feel shy about it.
 
Her pink hair was disheveled and her skirt was blown off somewhere, revealing her underwear in their full glory, but it was not the place for Louise to feel shy about it.
   
“I-I’m sorry for breaking the laws of the country! But there were extenuating circumstances!”
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“I-I’m sorry for breaking the laws of the country! But there were excruciating circumstances!”
   
 
The knight extended the wand.
 
The knight extended the wand.
   
“Your little good deeds do not matter much in this respect. Whatever the circumstances were, the law has been broken. As a result, it can make a lot more people unhappy.”
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“Your little good deeds do not matter much in this respect. Whatever the circumstances are, the law has been broken. As a result, it can make a lot more people unhappy.”
   
 
The storm blew hard against Louise.
 
The storm blew hard against Louise.
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Wearing black mantle, her lower half of the face hidden behind the mask, Karin asked Saito.
 
Wearing black mantle, her lower half of the face hidden behind the mask, Karin asked Saito.
   
“Well… umm, Louise’s familiar.”
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“Well…umm, Louise’s familiar.”
   
 
“Aah!”
 
“Aah!”
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“Hey! Are you alright? Are you alive?”
 
“Hey! Are you alright? Are you alive?”
   
“Fhn… mou, no… fhn”
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“Fhn… mou, no…fhn”
   
Louise’s eyes were still spinning and she looked out of shape. It could hardly be otherwise. It was as if she had been thrown into a huge washing machine– washed, rinsed, dried and blown. Even the prettiest girl in the country would look a mess after such ride.
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Louise’s eyes were still spinning and she looked out of shape. It hardly could be otherwise. It was like she was thrown into a huge washing machine– washed, rinsed, dried and blown. Even the prettiest girl in the country would look a mess after such ride.
   
 
Karin set up the wand again.
 
Karin set up the wand again.
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Seeing Saito acting like this, Guiche called out.
 
Seeing Saito acting like this, Guiche called out.
   
“Stop it, Saito. It’s a problem between family members. Are you tired of living?”
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“Stop it, Saito. It’s the problem between family members. Are you tired of living?”
   
 
Karin quietly watched Saito.
 
Karin quietly watched Saito.
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Saito pointed at the huge tornado.
 
Saito pointed at the huge tornado.
   
“It is bad. It isn’t just a wild tornado. The layer of the vacuum narrows around it and will cut deeply if touched. Frightening square spellcraft…”
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“It is bad. It isn’t just a wild tornado. The layer of the vacuum narrows around it and will cut deeply if touched. Frightening square spelling…”
   
 
There was no time to hear the explanation.
 
There was no time to hear the explanation.
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“H-Huuuuuuuuurts!”
 
“H-Huuuuuuuuurts!”
   
“Told you so! This fellow is a ‘Cutter Tornado!’ You will be cut to pieces before I can absorb it!”
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“Told you so! This fellow is a ‘Cutter Tornado!’ Before I can inhale it, you will be cut to pieces!”
   
 
Though Saito was soaking with blood, he did not move an inch.
 
Though Saito was soaking with blood, he did not move an inch.
   
Confused and paralyzed with fear, Louise’s eyes caught the sight of the wounded Saito. In an instant, her mind, dyed with the pure white of fear a few moments before, now blazed with anger like a raging fire.
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Confused and paralyzed with fear, Louise’s eyes caught the sight of wounded Saito. In an instant, the mind that was dyed with the pure white of fear a few moments ago now blazed with anger like a raging fire.
   
 
Normally, Louise would never rebel against her mother. She grew up disciplined like that.
 
Normally, Louise would never rebel against her mother. She grew up disciplined like that.
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Without thinking, Louise lifted her wand and recited the "Void" spell.
 
Without thinking, Louise lifted her wand and recited the "Void" spell.
   
Once the sounds of spell chanting reached Karin’s ears, she slightly puckered up her brows. She never heard of such spell. It was not fire. Not water. Nor wind. It wasn’t even an earth spell.
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Once the sounds of uttering spell reached Karin’s ears, she slightly puckered up her brows. She never heard of such spell. It was not fire. Not water. Nor wind. It wasn’t even an earth spell.
   
 
Louise rejected the wand and lowered it. The rampaging "Cutter Tornado," that engulfed Saito, started to shine.
 
Louise rejected the wand and lowered it. The rampaging "Cutter Tornado," that engulfed Saito, started to shine.
   
Not used to such light, Karin flinched for a split second.
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Not used to such light, Karin flinched for a split of the second.
   
What on earth was that spell that her daughter cast?
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What on earth was that spell, which her daughter cast?
   
 
Though the preparation time was short, it was still strong enough to cancel her own spell.
 
Though the preparation time was short, it was still strong enough to cancel her own spell.
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“Please stop it! That’s enough! Please stop!”
 
“Please stop it! That’s enough! Please stop!”
   
It was Henrietta, who rode by the horse all the way from La Vallière castle. Agnes was right behind her.
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It was Henrietta who rode with the horse all the way from La Vallière castle. Agnes was right behind her.
   
“I won’t tolerate any more fights in front of me! Moreover, you are parent and child! If you want to continue, you’ll have to turn your wand against me!”
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“I won’t tolerate any more fights in front of me! Moreover, you are a parent and a child! If you want to continue, you’ll have to turn your wand against me!”
   
Following the queen’s words, Karin put down the wand. Louise and Saito, who had already reached the limit of their physical strength and energy, both crumbled to the ground.
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Following the queen’s words, Karin put down the wand. Louise and Saito, who already reached the limit of their physical strength and energy, both crumbled to the ground.
   
 
Henrietta ran up to the fallen Saito.
 
Henrietta ran up to the fallen Saito.
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“You are badly injured!”
 
“You are badly injured!”
   
Panicking, she started to recite a water magic spell. Saito's injuries were healed by the queen’s "Healing." He lifted up his bloody face.
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Panicking, she started to recite the water magic spell. Saito's injuries were healed by queen’s "Healing." Saito lifted up his bloody face.
   
 
“Princess-sama…”
 
“Princess-sama…”
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“I see…” muttered Saito and fainted.
 
“I see…” muttered Saito and fainted.
   
Next to the tending Henrietta, Karin knelt down
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Next to the tending Henrietta Karin knelt down
   
“Your Majesty, I punished my sinful daughter. Hope you will show her a greater punishment than mine.”
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“Your Majesty, I punished my sinful daughter. Hope you will show greater punishment than mine.”
   
 
Henrietta let out a long sigh.
 
Henrietta let out a long sigh.
   
“Mo! What is that! You! When child and parent point their wands at each other – it makes the Founder Brimir grieve! Didn’t I say that I did not intend to give any punishment since the very beginning!”
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“Mo! What is that! You! When child and parent point their wands at each other – it makes Founder Brimir grieve! Didn’t I tell that I did not intend to give any punishment since the very beginning!”
   
 
“Solving everything with wands - is the way of old nobles.”
 
“Solving everything with wands - is the way of old nobles.”
   
“Unnecessarily bloodshed is what I hate the most! You there! Quick, carry these two injured people to the residence!”
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“Unnecessarily bloodshed is what I hate the most! You there! Fast, carry these two injured people to the residence!”
   
 
Following Henrietta's orders, Guiche and others put "Levitation" on Louise and Saito and started to carry them to the castle.
 
Following Henrietta's orders, Guiche and others put "Levitation" on Louise and Saito and started to carry them to the castle.
   
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