Editing User talk:黒曜石ペガサス


== Comments/mistranslations/suggestions ==


Haha, welcome, you will learn along the way --[[User:Larethian|larethian]] ([[User talk:Larethian|talk]]) 10:53, 28 June 2013 (CDT)

thanks

For the that part maybe either put " " quotations marks around the sorry when Yuta says that, and put like a star * on courteous or something like that to put emphasis on it to express sarcasm. [[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]])
:Double quotation marks shouldn't be used as they usually denote speech or a quote and things like "I am really "sorry"" would look weird. And star is usually used to denote sound effects. It's easier to denote emphasis using bold or sarcasm using italics, or using single quotes for either. Like : "I am really ''sorry''" or "I am really 'sorry'" and "If you don't tell me the truth, I will '''seriously''' kill you..." --[[User:Rohan123|Rohan123]] ([[User talk:Rohan123|talk]]) 04:50, 25 July 2013 (CDT)

Just wanted to let you know, your translations are getting better. It's almost like I have nothing to do editing-wise now...hahaha. Please keep up the good work.

-- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 02:01, 1 August 2013 (CDT)

==Full Metal Panic! Another==

On hold until other three projects done...(and a chapter from another good book I found is up)

==Papa no Iu Koto o Kikinasai!Volume 4 Chapter 2==

Glad to see your still alive. :D [[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]])

===Edit Questions===

What does "it’s not like I understand it well enough that I could explain it to someone with enough detail that they wouldn’t have already heard before." mean? He wasn't able to explain it with enough detail so that they don't know what it is? This sentence is a bit confusing...

-- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 01:23, 23 October 2013 (CDT)

What does it mean by "homework is already good"? Is the homework done, or does she like homework? Also, by "relay racing from store to store", do you mean that they watched the racing on TV, or did they actually do it themselves?

-- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 23:51, 19 November 2013 (CST)

===Dates===

I saw you push back the dates by one month and my initial reaction was something like "Eeeeeeeehhhhh~!?" Then I noticed that you had graduation...final exams?

-- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 13:49, 10 November 2013 (CST)

== Asobi ni Iku yo!  ==

==Hagure Yuusha vol 4 prologue==

==Maou na Ore==
Go on ahead, and BTW I am lost in thought from being the Patron God of NTRed at the moment. - [[User:Par74583|Par74583]] ([[User talk:Par74583|talk]])

The fact that you've already translated it will push back my return for a day. I still have to translate it to spanish. I've suggested you via PM other series that may pique your interest. --[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 12:30, 4 October 2013 (CDT)
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 -- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 02:01, 1 August 2013 (CDT)
-Sure, your new translation style is fine. I think this is also a good way for you to improve as well...I haven't heard about the recent push to improve quality, but if that's what the TLers are trying to do, then that's great. Just make sure you read over after my edits to make sure they convey the original meaning. About the new teaser, it's fine if you send the script to me, it's no problem at all.
--- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 02:52, 15 January 2014 (CST)
 ==Full Metal Panic! Another==
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 Glad to see your still alive. :D [[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]])
-Are you alive or ok? Been a while since an update, just you and me now really as the staff for this project. :/ --[[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]]) 19:30, 13 June 2014 (CDT)
 ===Edit Questions===
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 -- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 23:51, 19 November 2013 (CST)
-Not sure what this refers to.
-'''Incidentally, I don’t know that person or actually have anything to do with them.'''
-Is he talking about Sora there?
-Also, by this sentence, does he mean that it's impossible to put on the skate with everybody packed together?
-'''"Everyone packed in this it’s impossible."'''
--- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 18:48, 3 January 2014 (CST)
-Your right on both "[[User:黒曜石ペガサス|黒曜石ペガサス]] ([[User talk:黒曜石ペガサス#top|talk]]) 23:50, 3 January 2014 (CST)"
-Oh I see that cool, I would change it to incredibly kind, and put quotation marks around that like so " Oh your so nice" like you know air quotes. Would make seeing the sarcasm easier/clearer.--[[User:Dual Blades|Dual Blades]] ([[User talk:Dual Blades|talk]]) 13:41, 14 June 2014 (CDT)
 ===Dates===
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 -- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 13:49, 10 November 2013 (CST)
-Hi!
-First of all, thanks for all the work you put into translating the first three volumes! My friends and I really appreciate it so on behalf of all of us, thanks a lot!!!
-Do you have any plans to continue translating this series? If so, I'm willing to help out as an editor.
-I really hope this project can be brought back to life since its a beautiful series!
-[[User:Satoshi Rentaro]] ([[User talk:Satoshi Rentaro|talk]]) 10:27, 27 April 2015 (IST)
-Hi!
-I'm also just a random person visiting here. Thanks for the work you put into the first 3 volumes, and I hope you really find some time to continue this series. Hope things are going well for you and you find to do things you want (Hopefully this is one of them!)
 == Asobi ni Iku yo!  ==
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 The fact that you've already translated it will push back my return for a day. I still have to translate it to spanish. I've suggested you via PM other series that may pique your interest. --[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 12:30, 4 October 2013 (CDT)
-== Hero of the sheild's white day ==
-To be released on....White day (3/14/2015)
-Spoiler...its funny.
-== White day ==
-Okay I'm here, sorry for being late. How do you want to do this?
-Have you sent them yet? I can't find them in my email.
-You didn't let me edit, so I made a copy of it and edited that.
-https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EbBfBHtjPAjtdyFHaLd-L6R5xnCE5_qia3DvYxuVKxI/edit?usp=sharing
-Great! I see you've added the suggestions. I made some final minor edits and some comments and suggestions. The chapter should be good after that.
-Feel free to send the next chapter whenever.
-Hey, it's almost White Day, and I haven't heard anything from you. Is everything okay?