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“…Lessar seems like more of an adult than you, though.”
 
“…Lessar seems like more of an adult than you, though.”
   
“Where are you looking and what is your basis for that judgment, you damn brat!! I can’t lose to a child like that!!”
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“Where are you looking and what is your basis for that judgement, you damn brat!! I can’t lose to a child like that!!”
   
 
“Nnn, despite how she looks, Lessar broke the record at her school by starting to wear a bra in fourth grade.”
 
“Nnn, despite how she looks, Lessar broke the record at her school by starting to wear a bra in fourth grade.”
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Whether we are making a positive or negative change, we add in all sorts of information based on an already existing product and make suggestions that compel people in one way or the other but leaves them with a certain degree of freedom.
 
Whether we are making a positive or negative change, we add in all sorts of information based on an already existing product and make suggestions that compel people in one way or the other but leaves them with a certain degree of freedom.
   
They will make a personal judgment on the value of the product as it is and a prediction of the value of the product in the future. Based on that information, they will decide whether to purchase it or not.
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They will make a personal judgement on the value of the product as it is and a prediction of the value of the product in the future. Based on that information, they will decide whether to purchase it or not.
   
 
When rain is scarce and water is expected dry up, people try to stockpile water and when there is too much rain and it is expected to have a negative effect on crops, people try to stockpile vegetables.
 
When rain is scarce and water is expected dry up, people try to stockpile water and when there is too much rain and it is expected to have a negative effect on crops, people try to stockpile vegetables.
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On the other hand, if something people have heard rumors of locally is picked up by television stations and other mass media, they will feel trust and assurance from that.
 
On the other hand, if something people have heard rumors of locally is picked up by television stations and other mass media, they will feel trust and assurance from that.
   
We can use the thought patterns the customers themselves have built up on how to make judgments on the information they hear by giving out information in stages from multiple media sources in order to give the sense of what is “popular” that we wish. In doing so, we can raise or lower what products sell and what stores customers go to.
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We can use the thought patterns the customers themselves have built up on how to make judgements on the information they hear by giving out information in stages from multiple media sources in order to give the sense of what is “popular” that we wish. In doing so, we can raise or lower what products sell and what stores customers go to.
   
 
If you think of it like a pyramid, our final objective is to push from the base in order to shake the peak with finely-tuned vibrations.
 
If you think of it like a pyramid, our final objective is to push from the base in order to shake the peak with finely-tuned vibrations.
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As she asked her question, Mikoto manipulated the Semipublic AR on the floor, hacked through the security, and fairly accurately calculated out where a certain person must live given security camera records and the deposits of electronic money.
 
As she asked her question, Mikoto manipulated the Semipublic AR on the floor, hacked through the security, and fairly accurately calculated out where a certain person must live given security camera records and the deposits of electronic money.
   
The person was Setali S. Skinikia.
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The person was Setali S Skinikia.
   
 
She had been Mikoto’s guide to the city and had been the one to tell her the story of the very valuable orange.
 
She had been Mikoto’s guide to the city and had been the one to tell her the story of the very valuable orange.
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A high voltage current was coming dangerously close to shooting from Mikoto’s fingertips, but she desperately restrained herself.
 
A high voltage current was coming dangerously close to shooting from Mikoto’s fingertips, but she desperately restrained herself.
   
“But there’s someone else who it could have been. After all, I had not heard the story of the very valuable orange until yesterday when I came to this city. That was when I first heard it from someone named Setali S. Skinikia.”
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“But there’s someone else who it could have been. After all, I had not heard the story of the very valuable orange until yesterday when I came to this city. That was when I first heard it from someone named Setali S Skinikia.”
   
 
“…!?”
 
“…!?”

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